My dazzling wall by ASHLEY EGGEBRECHT https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd Made with the strength to succeed en-us 2018-11-09 15:04:30 UTC 2018-11-09 16:32:17 UTC hello@padlet.com What do you mean by "when one group is focused on more than others?" eggebrechtashley https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302597444 2018-11-09 15:08:02 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302597444 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302642620 Why would you direct it at the teachers whenever they aren't needing the balance? ]]> 2018-11-09 16:25:33 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302642620 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302643091 Instead of wanting teachers and parents to realize how stressful students are, how can they understand and help with stress?]]> 2018-11-09 16:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302643091 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302643140 Would you be able to include opinions of all your different audiences? ]]> 2018-11-09 16:26:28 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302643140 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302643575 How can the parents and teachers be helpful to the stressful students?]]> 2018-11-09 16:27:17 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302643575 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302644157 For your examples, you may just want to take broader topics then find multiple pieces of evidence that support your claims. ]]> 2018-11-09 16:28:15 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302644157 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302644212 What are the long-term effects of these different groups being unbalanced vs. being balanced?

I would try to make sure that you don´t get too far off topic when you're writing this piece.

]]> 2018-11-09 16:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302644212 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302644410 Why would you want to include teachers in this audience?

]]> 2018-11-09 16:28:43 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302644410 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645569 You could include personal experiences from teachers/parents in order to see their side/opinion on student's stress]]> 2018-11-09 16:30:43 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645569 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645691 How can you explain further about how/why the different relationships effect teens so negatively?]]> 2018-11-09 16:30:57 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645691 Maybe give some skills that parents and teachers can use to help their students. https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645697 2018-11-09 16:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645697 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645717 what are the effects of these groups being unbalanced and balanced.

]]> 2018-11-09 16:31:00 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645717 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645962 what would teachers get out of this ]]> 2018-11-09 16:31:30 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645962 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645998 maybe include the teachers and parents perspective on the topic]]> 2018-11-09 16:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302645998 https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302646024 Would you compose your evidence down into around 3 paragraphs or elaborate to get 6? ]]> 2018-11-09 16:31:35 UTC https://padlet.com/eggebrechtashley/uij4wfc71ljd/wish/302646024