https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx Made with love en-us 2021-03-01 18:33:46 UTC 2021-03-04 01:22:03 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f600.png jselden https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1254979463 1.) Select a better suited quote for green 

2.) Reword my conclusion sentence. 

3.) Add an additional explanation sentence for my quote in Blue.]]> 2021-03-01 19:05:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1254979463 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255000474 1. be more specific 
2.  have better examples 
3. explain better ]]> 2021-03-01 19:09:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255000474 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255000881 Explanation wording
Add vocabulary words  
Add to my quotes]]> 2021-03-01 19:09:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255000881 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255001353 1. Make my conclusion better
2. add more to my evidence
3. make my transitions better]]> 2021-03-01 19:09:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255001353 1234818 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255001876 be more specific when explaining evidence.
better closing statement
add a better transition sentence.]]> 2021-03-01 19:09:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255001876 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255004075 1. Make introduction and conclusion better
2. Explain evidence better
3. Get better transition words]]> 2021-03-01 19:10:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255004075 1577531 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255004325 I need to be more specific and make a better conclusion sentence and use better transition words

one more

]]> 2021-03-01 19:10:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255004325 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255005918 1. Use more descriptive words when citing my evidence.]]> 2021-03-01 19:10:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255005918 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255007554 I forgot to write my rough draft  


What are you doing now?

]]> 2021-03-01 19:10:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255007554 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255009470 1 i want to write more 
2. have more detail
3.finish it]]> 2021-03-01 19:11:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255009470 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255015528 1.) Make a better conclusion
2.) Add more evidence to my green one 
3.) Better transitions ]]> 2021-03-01 19:12:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255015528 1290092 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255021535 Explain my paragarphs a little better, Conclusion needs to get done, describe more]]> 2021-03-01 19:13:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255021535 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255030417 expiations, conations, more divers transitions]]> 2021-03-01 19:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255030417 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255032583 1.Make my conclusion better
2. get better quotes
3.Getting better transition words.]]> 2021-03-01 19:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255032583 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255035083 Be more descriptive in general]]> 2021-03-01 19:16:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255035083 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255037158 1. find better quotes 
2. better explanation 
3. correct punctuation ]]> 2021-03-01 19:16:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255037158 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255039509 Find more interesting transition words]]> 2021-03-01 19:16:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255039509 1287423 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255040755 I feel like I can explain the quotes a bit better.]]> 2021-03-01 19:17:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255040755 1590544 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255040922 1. Correct Punctuation
2. Write More
3. Check Spelling]]> 2021-03-01 19:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255040922 https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255042865 Make introduction better]]> 2021-03-01 19:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jselden/uh0omb1a1i72hyrx/wish/1255042865