https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a Made with mirth en-us 2017-08-22 11:13:18 UTC 2024-10-15 02:52:28 UTC hello@padlet.com charlottegonthier94 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182050070 2017-08-22 11:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182050070 charlottegonthier94 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182050606 Hey you two I will read your research now, please can you comment on mine

]]> 2017-08-22 11:21:21 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182050606 leila_bengzi82 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182050609 VOTING]]> 2017-08-22 11:21:24 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182050609 hannahbobbett1 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182050621 2017-08-22 11:21:38 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182050621 hannahbobbett1 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182050673 2017-08-22 11:21:59 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182050673 charlottegonthier94 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182051100 Hi Both, 

Document titled voting - 
really good research, I like the sources you used as they are reliable. I also like that you have included your own opinions.

Hannah - you have research all the topics well, I like that you have included some graphs as it is important to present information in different formats.]]> 2017-08-22 11:25:15 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182051100 leila_bengzi82 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182051357 hi charlotte I like your research its very detailed and includes a lot of facts and evidence. well done
  ]]> 2017-08-22 11:27:29 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182051357 hannahbobbett1 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182051489 Hi Both,
Both your documents are very detailed. They show extensive research with statistics and evidence to back up statements and opinions. 
The presentation of the information is helpful as the headings allow the reader to find the relevant information they are looking for.
Charlotte - I like the use of graphs as this shows demographic information. ]]> 2017-08-22 11:28:16 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182051489 charlottegonthier94 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182051814 I think the common elements could be images, brief bullet point information and a graph? what do you both think?]]> 2017-08-22 11:31:10 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182051814 leila_bengzi82 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182051826 2017-08-22 11:31:15 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182051826 hannahbobbett1 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182052284 I agree with the common elements chosen - information (bullet points), graphs and images (even if this is memes).]]> 2017-08-22 11:35:17 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182052284 leila_bengzi82 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182052380 2017-08-22 11:36:17 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182052380 charlottegonthier94 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182061678 please can you both provide feedback for my resource.
https://www.facebook.com/Why-young-people-should-vote-1916329158621582/ ]]> 2017-08-22 12:38:43 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182061678 leila_bengzi82 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182063283 https://www.facebook.com/The-importance-of-voting-961982807296293/]]> 2017-08-22 12:46:33 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182063283 hannahbobbett1 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182063447 https://www.facebook.com/votingmattersforyoungpeople]]> 2017-08-22 12:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182063447 charlottegonthier94 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182064532 You have both met the brief of creating an online resource to inform young people about voting. You have both used your research well and used a variety of media on your pages to draw attention such as videos and images. Using a Facebook page is an amazing idea as it is easily accessible by young people. well done both!! 

My Recommendations and ideas :
I think you could make your pages more interactive by adding a poll and make them more user friendly to our target audience by adding some jokes and online quizzes. ]]> 2017-08-22 12:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182064532 hannahbobbett1 https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182064574 Well done!
You both demonstrated the ability to create a webpage which clearly highlights the issue being discussed - why voting is important for young people! 
You have shown that you can appropriately use at least 5 techniques including sound, image, videos, text and hyperlinks! 
Charlotte your use of memes are brilliant and appeal to the younger generation. 
Lots of relevant information related to previous research - this shows you have utilised your research well. 
Excellent choice in choosing to use a facebook page - hopefully your page will be shared and people can read it. 
My recommendations would be to add a poll to tally if the general public believe young persons votes are important.]]> 2017-08-22 12:51:38 UTC https://padlet.com/charlottegonthier94/ugsydp0jg15a/wish/182064574