Remake of Senior Feedback- Focus Questions: Is this is a viable project? What is the cost associated with the project? - Is there a Demand for this project/product? - How many transactions are needed before profits are made? - Based on this project, how will the freshman determine their cost for each product? by Kristina Vasquez

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kristina_vasquez1 — 2021-11-08 13:55:06 UTC

Senior Name:
Freshman Name:
1. Is this a viable Project?
Answer:
2. What is the Cost associated with this project?
Answer:
3. Is there a demand for this product?
Answer:
4. How many transactions are needed before profits are made?
Answer:
5. How will the freshman determine their cost?
Answer:
6. Additional Feedback for Freshman:
Answer:

Nathan Kozina

2021-11-09 20:02:15 UTC

Swing a Bat
Presentation was nice and organized
The idea is great
Needs more research and more planning

Lilyah Seely

2021-11-09 20:03:09 UTC

G-art-bage
-It’s new, original and Creative
-It could raise lots of money if done right
-A lot of things are still in the “decision” phase

Braeden Bamber

2021-11-09 20:03:19 UTC

Disneyland
Really well thought out idea, slides were very organized, speaking done nicely.
Love that your mentor is your grandpa, that's awesome.
I think my only suggestion for improvement is that you set up the way in which you're going to interview and recruit for Disney to have a more complete thought.

Victor Bell

2021-11-09 20:03:21 UTC

Football camp
You have a great plan so far and can definitely execute it
Everything was organized and easy to read
Maybe use a background that has to do with your project

Lilly

2021-11-09 20:04:30 UTC

-Bake For Those in Need
-She chose a project about something she was passionate about
-Had really cool pictures to add visuals to the presentation
-Didn't have any actual research on what to produce for her audience.

Bryanna Melendez

2021-11-09 20:05:14 UTC

Project Name: Combining music and art as a coping mechanism
-well researched
-very creative and organized
-be confident in what you are putting out there.

Bryanna Melendez

2021-11-09 20:05:16 UTC

Project: Music and Art Therapy
-Well organized
-Great research

-More confidence when pitching your idea

Natalia Betancourt

2021-11-09 20:05:21 UTC

Cooking for the community
-Really solid idea that has been proven to help the community.
-Can help set up the less fortunate for a better future.
-Could use more research on materials and resources needed.

Alexa Radovanovic

2021-11-09 20:05:27 UTC

I wasn't able to attend the presentations of these projects, but I will say to always do your work, never be afraid to ask questions, and make sure to take care of yourself mentally and physically.

Aaron Carrillo

2021-11-09 20:05:40 UTC

Amusement Park Summer Camp
Super fun idea that kids would probably love.
Love the idea of expanding to sports events and such to continue throughout the school year.
I think you need to find a purpose behind the camp to get parents on board to allow their kids to go, and more ways to cover the costs.

Jaime Estrada

2021-11-09 20:05:43 UTC

Project name: Playing video games for charity
-It´s for a good cause
-Already knew a good portion of his project

~ Needed to do more research on what material (resources) he was going to use for his project

Victor Bell

2021-11-09 20:05:50 UTC

-Project idea was good. (football camps for youth)
- Mentor idea was great, it can be accomplished.
-Maybe include a cost sheet to show how much the camp materials will cost (like footballs, snacks, activity material, etc).

Braeden Bamber

2021-11-09 20:06:18 UTC

Working at Disneyland
Can clearly see your passion for Disneyland
Unique
How will this help the community?

Justin

2021-11-09 20:06:46 UTC

Monsters
1. Your project about monsters was really interesting and concise.
2. Great idea and I myself find it interesting.
3. Needs a little more research on the project.

Brannin Gasper

2021-11-09 20:07:07 UTC

Basketball Cards
-good idea
-love that your mentor is your mom
-a little more research and develop your idea a little more to make it more clear

Kean Santos

2021-11-09 20:07:21 UTC

Needs more confidence and a script

Really cool idea and seems really passionate about his idea
He needs a bit more focus and direction
-novelist-

Brannin Gasper

2021-11-09 20:07:44 UTC

Project: Basketball Cards
-Good colors
-everything popped

-add more research
-try and make interesting for non basketball players

Rossie Cortez

2021-11-09 20:08:21 UTC

Helping Young Adults With Depression
Love the ideas you have and the processes you have to complete it.
Slides were neat and easy to follow
Just keep working to get a mentor so you can complete the rest!

2021-11-09 20:08:30 UTC

¨A positive mindset brings positive things¨

Angel Cruz

2021-11-09 20:08:31 UTC

Fishing
The topic is great
Presentation was well organized and well designed.
The presentation needs more research and information added on the slides.

Jaime Estrada

2021-11-09 20:08:53 UTC

Playing Video Games for Charity

1. Amazing idea and really thoughtful and beneficial to the community.
2. Helps charities while also helping people be entertained.
3. Knows the general basis of what he wants to do for his project and how to launch the business.

1. Try finding some more big influencers and Youtubers to start streaming on the platform.

2021-11-09 20:09:03 UTC

Great job class!

Diana R

2021-11-09 20:09:10 UTC

"How Films Affect People"
The project idea is very unique and complex.
Because the project slideshow was not completed, I would say to complete it and do more research on people's personal experiences with certain films.

2021-11-09 20:09:55 UTC

Focus on school and don't let someone distract you from doing your work

Taylor Sterling

2021-11-09 20:09:56 UTC

Feeding young adults a healthy diet
- Loved the idea of healthy diet because a lot of foods found today are unhealthy and most of the time we don't even know.
- Everything was able to understand and I think the slides were put together nicely.
- The only thing I would work on is just being confident in what you're trying to pursue.

Jerricko Michaelangelo

2021-11-09 20:10:42 UTC

Project name: To teach kids how to skate
+ Understood what he was going to give up (time)
+ Understood the main concept of his project

- Needed to research on how much he was going to spend on the project

2021-11-09 20:10:45 UTC

¨The way you see people is the way you treat them, and the way you treat them is what they become.¨

2021-11-09 20:10:48 UTC

Jerricko Michaelangelo
Skating
Great concept
Great planning
Figure out how you're going to continue the project

Jaeden Duenas

2021-11-09 20:10:52 UTC

Project: beach cleanup
-This project is good for the community, if done the beach will be even prettier.
-Slides were good to follow and neat.
-Make sure to watch for grammar errors, and include before and after pictures of beaches (if not include pictures of trash you found at our Oceanside beach).

Steven Salsido

2021-11-09 20:11:14 UTC

-Modified baseball mitt-
awesome concept would really improve the sport
powerpoint was nice
needs a diagram of the baseball mitt

Jaime Estrada

2021-11-09 20:11:23 UTC

Gaming for charity
Unique idea
Easy to set-up
Plan more

Jerricko Michaelangelo

2021-11-09 20:12:04 UTC

Skating
Great concept
Great planning
Figure out how you're going to continue the project

Brooklen Valez

2021-11-09 20:12:31 UTC

Project: Manufacturing company for homeless employment
1. + Great idea that is very relevant right now.
2. + Clear, articulate, and personable speaker.
3. - Needs more planning when it comes to time, capital costs, and labor costs.

Jerricko Michaelangelo

2021-11-09 20:12:50 UTC

Skate Coach

1. Helps the community learn how to skate and especially helps beginners get into skating and finding a new hobby.
2. Knows that new skaters might not have skateboards and he can provide rentals.
3. Free of charge to help the community even more.

1. You could do group lessons so more people can learn at once. Also have other instructors with you teaching to make it a little easier.
2. You could even set up a schedule where people can go for open coaching. As in, every Tuesday at MLK Skatepark you have a free lesson for anyone to go to.

Christina Gonzalez

2021-11-09 20:13:43 UTC

Freshman names: Zoe and Morgan
Project: Pollution clean-up
They both did a really nice job at speaking and were confident. When asked questions they were prepared to answer. The only thing they need is how they are different from others doing the same project and how they will measure their progress.

Lily G

2021-11-09 20:14:31 UTC

High school will not be the rest of your life. You can take as long as you need to figure out who you are. That's one of the best things about being human. <3

Homeless Sanitary Bags

2021-11-09 20:15:05 UTC

You all had a great personable quality, and I think the project has great potential and is definitely achievable, I would only suggest communication between group members to make sure everyone is on the same page and coordinated.

Jared Hernandez

2021-11-09 20:15:22 UTC

Project: Bodyboards
- Had great orginization/presentation
- Also had a great initiative & motive

- Need more research about how to properly execute the project but otherwise a great idea.

Makayla

2021-11-09 20:16:03 UTC

Project name: clothing design
~ Had a lot of information
~ good choice of pictures
~ Can improve confidence level

~Kimberly Castañeda

Cooking Project

2021-11-09 20:16:45 UTC

The concept of your project was solid and there is definitely a market for such a service, but I would suggest you work on the fine-tuning of the project to work out all the details.

Angelo Granata

2021-11-09 20:19:47 UTC

Lemonade Summer Stand
The idea is great and the steps are clear to what is trying to be accomplished. You have multiple backup plans just in case one idea goes the wrong way.
Go a little bit more into depth with your explanations.

Jared

2021-11-09 20:23:34 UTC

Body board company
1. + Seemed very genuine.
2. + I liked the focus on quality of the boards.
3. - Wasn't very clear with the plan for demand for the product.

David

2021-11-09 20:24:06 UTC

1. Is this a viable Project?
Answer: In a Way Yes
2. What is the Cost associated with this project?
Answer: Time and Effort
3. Is there a demand for this product?
Answer: Everybody Listens to Music But Not Everybody knows the origin
4. How will the freshman determine their cost?
Answer: How much time they put into it.
5. Additional Feedback for Freshman:
Answer: You did Fine I would just say be more prepared
Needed more research and plan seemed very unclear.

Evan Rudis

2021-11-09 20:26:27 UTC

Project: feral cat shelter

    Great ideas Evan, you seemed to have a good amount of background in what it takes to complete your passion project and I think that you really can accomplish your goal. 
    It was a delight to see how much passion you have to be involved and make a change in your community, this really helped make your project stand out and I think you have the resources to create this type of project in your community.
    For your presentation it would be more appealing to the eye if you showed organizations that you worked with in order to foster the feral cats, this would help show the experience you have and that you are very knowledgeable in this area of work.
  Hope all goes well,
Sincerely your trusty Senior citizen at ECHS,
Julie Cabrera :)

Simon Leja

2021-11-09 20:28:49 UTC

Doughnut Shop
The idea is most definitely different from others as no one ever thinks of actually pursuing a business in doughnuts as well as having bright mentors to help pursue his action in the business industry.
Something I would possibly change is just his public speaking abilities.

Kyle Kim

2021-11-09 21:34:30 UTC

Cooking with Japanese Knives
1.Overall kept it clean and simple very good detail
2.Very good presentation with good enough pictures

1.Little bit of empty space, should add gifs to cover it up.

Pablo Ramirez

2021-11-09 21:34:58 UTC

-Nice format on your sides
-Like how you break it down and explain each one was
-But next time add a little more text about your work

Joseph Jones

2021-11-09 21:35:02 UTC

Project name : Football equipment
-Good cause, prevent players from getting injured
-It was organized and has visuals
-Needs to figure out how much each item costs and how many items to sell to gain profit

Devin D

2021-11-09 21:35:37 UTC

He had the idea to make a forum for mechanics and car heads. Itll be great for him because he wants to become mechanic.
This will help many people and mechanics can help guide people as well. The only thing is there is many forums like this already.

Gustavo Angel

2021-11-09 21:36:52 UTC

Streaming Classes
- A great idea for those who wish to learn how to stream.
- A great presentation overall.
- Needs improvement in the layout of the presentation.

Noelly Olalde

2021-11-09 21:36:55 UTC

Mental health
was organized
had a good topic
Needs more research and speak louder

Melania

2021-11-09 21:37:04 UTC

Project Name: Academic Counselor and Guidance
2 Roses: ~ Presentation was very well organized
~Spoke clearly and confidently
1 thorn: ~Research more in-depth information about the career and the process to get it

Noelly Oladle

2021-11-09 21:37:06 UTC

Project name: Mental Health
- good idea for the project
- the first few explanations of the project was good

- But next time finish the project and research

Donovan

2021-11-09 21:37:32 UTC

Helping out the homeless
1.Demand of the product would be blankets,food and water
2.The cost would be just trying to get the products needed to achieve the goal and it would maybe around $200

1.Something to improve on is that add a little more detail, add pictures and make it stand out more to the audience.

Earnest Patterson

2021-11-09 21:38:13 UTC

-Like your idea for project
-Like how you want to help out kids
-Next time work on your project a bit more

2021-11-09 21:38:20 UTC

Daisy Venegas
Kory
Gaming
-He had some great ideas, he knew what he wants and is willing to accomplish what he wants to be doing.
-He was very intrested in putting his time and effort towards gaming.
-He wasn't finish, but still had great ideas but wasnt put down just yet.

Draven Zuniga

2021-11-09 21:38:32 UTC

Acting classes for people who want to step out of their comfort zones.

- Their idea is great and has a good message behind it.
- I liked how the presentation was organized.
- Need to think more about what they want to succeed with this project. What is the ultimate goal?

Yuri Dalmolim

2021-11-09 21:38:48 UTC

Skateboard program for kids
-Good topic/ like the idea of helping kids how to skate
- Organized and has visuals
- Research more on how to actually set up the program

Jaxson Baird

2021-11-09 21:38:54 UTC

Project name: Trees
-There is a demand for the project to help grow trees

-The presentation had nice colors and a good theme

-The project wasn´t finished with only 3 slides and the rest was in the ¨decision¨ phase.

Senior Name: Branden Poggi

Leo Martinez

2021-11-09 21:39:02 UTC

Video game for mental health and charity
1.Great concept
2.Amazing planning on how you are going to achieve the game development.
3.figure out where the funding are going to come from to create the game and keep on running it since its free.

Dylan King

2021-11-09 21:39:39 UTC

Multi-cultural baking and cooking
This project has a really good idea but the purpose is unclear.
I liked the main goal and what your main concern was which was the food.
Some advice I would give is to make the purpose more clear and don't be afraid to work with risky ideas because sometimes they end up being the best idea

Kayden

2021-11-09 21:39:43 UTC

Kayden's organization was well. She explained everything is detail.It was a good idea but she can add more stuff to it so it would be better. (the kids collabration ). She should work on voice presenting more.

Breanna Decembrano

2021-11-09 21:40:51 UTC

Avoiding Plastic Pollution
Very well presented, neat and also organized
Looks like there was passion for the project
My only suggestion would be that for the slide about getting people to know about the helping out is to add how you will ask people, for example post,posters,Instagram, or other social medial platforms. Senior: Luisa Orellana

Reagan Penicaro

2021-11-09 21:40:59 UTC

Psychiatrist

- Had good mentors who would know what to do for her to succeed in this field
- Her ideas and what she wants to do were very nice.
- Think more about the work and costs of what it is going to take to become a psychiatrists.

Megan Zimmerman Per. 5

2021-11-09 21:41:17 UTC

Valeria Escobar
Teacher
+
Solid idea
Reasonable goals
-
Needs more research

Riley Bell & Sean Wallace

2021-11-09 21:41:56 UTC

Riley Bell- Theater Workshops
1) Creative Idea to help build confidence in others.
2) Seemed really confident in her idea and herself.
3) Make sure slides are all finished and include as much information on your process to reach your goal.

Sean Wallace- Photography/Trash pickup
1) Already has photography skills for his idea.
2) A great concept to help the environment as well as being able to do something you enjoy.
3) Finalize your project ideas and be confident in what you want to do.

-Lauren M.

Kevin Chavez

2021-11-09 21:42:00 UTC

Skateboarding Classes
- I love skateboards so I think it is an extremely cool idea to teach how to skate.
- I loved how enthusiastic Kevin was when talking about skateboarding.
- But, he did not do a single page of his presentation. Next time, he should research everything up and do his presentation.

Damian Sanchez

2021-11-09 21:42:03 UTC

Project- gardening and cooking for the community

Very well presented and was confident ad knowledgeable about the topic.

Presentation had a good theme and background

Presentation was not finished as it only had about 3 slides.
Senior: Emmanuel Archer

Jada Williams

2021-11-09 21:42:15 UTC

Homemade Shirts+Designs

-Presentation was full of information, it was well rounded and provided an accurate representation of what the student wished to achieve
-Thought thoroughly on the costs and benefits associated with her project. It was in the scope of what she could accomplish.

- Speaking skills could be better, and the impact of your project should be taken more into account.

Megan Zimmerman Per. 5

2021-11-09 21:43:34 UTC

Keren Castellanos-Martinez
Classical music composer / website builder
+
Good idea, can be beneficial to a diverse group of people.

They already had an interest in classical music which is a good drive to work towards their goals.
-
Slides should contain more information

Franky Herrera

2021-11-09 21:44:02 UTC

Senior Name: Franky Herrera
Freshman Name: Uyri Domlian
- cool idea with the helping out kids and trying to teach them how to skate
- Good idea trying to get involved with schools
- Try to figure out a way to contact and make programs for skating

Joseph Jones
- I liked the plan that you have on making the sports equipment
- I also like that you are working on a prototype for it
- I think you should try to make something stand out or make something different in the gear so it can stand out and actually be unique to your brand.

Chisholm Wight Darian Taua

2021-11-09 21:45:42 UTC

Project name: Darians pies
*The project was very inspirational in my opinion because she put a lot of thought into what she was going to do with her business and how she was going to do it.
*It cost $15 to make a batch of 20 pies and she sells the same batch for $45
*There is most likely a demand for the product because people actually enjoy buying for local businesses and the pie look really good.
*A total of 15 transactions (time estimate is about lees than 3 months) will be needed before the businesses can see a reasonable amount of profit
* She added all of the cost of items needed to start the business, from the ingredients to the establishment
*Very well done project

Brooklyn

2021-11-09 21:48:36 UTC

Athletes talking about inspirations and what drives them
-Could help people on why people have a certain person or thing that inspires and drives them
- People knowing more about there favorite athlete
-Needs more planning

Karis Ho

2021-11-09 21:48:46 UTC

Dance Classes
Project was neat and well organized
Student has experience in dancing and is strongly passionate about teaching others to help improve mental health.
No cost are associated with this project as she wants to spread positive energy by introducing dance to others.

Natalie Gaytan

1011389 — 2021-11-09 21:50:32 UTC

Helping the Homeless (Madeline)
- This is a good way of helping people in the community.
- The presentation is easy to understand.
- needs to find the cost of the items that are going to be given to the homeless

Sydney Amiatu

2021-11-09 21:51:00 UTC

Hockey Workshop

-I thought her work was very organized and her presentation looked as though she put a lot of effort into it.
-Her idea was for it to be a non-profit because she didn't want people to pay for help. I thought her selflessness was really cool and unheard of usually for younger people.
-She hadn't finished some of her slides yet so I would recommend finishing them, but luckily she already knew what she would say for those slides.

Desirae

2021-11-09 21:51:00 UTC

Community Service
-Community service always helps out a community
-Could lead to more people wanting to help out their community
-Needs more planning,research, how this community service would be done, and the main types of community service that would be done.

Emanuel colon and Alex Salazar

2021-11-09 21:52:44 UTC

Bottle and Can recycling
-have all the details ready like the price of the materials like the bags needed to pick up the cans and bottles and a source of transportation
-the project is a good idea, cleaning the earth is always a good thing
-The presentation looked great, organized, and was easy to understand

Diego Raya

2021-11-09 21:55:04 UTC

Diego Raya - Kaedyn Ybarra
Teacher for kids
I really liked that you explained your presentation really well and you knew what you were gonna be. Another thing is you know that by becoming this type of teacher, it will help out kids to do better. The only thorn for you is that your screen didn't show the recording at first but then you managed to do it just in time.

Period #: Jobst
Example Post:
Example Post:
Senior Name:
Freshman Name:
1. Is this a viable Project?
Answer:
2. What is the Cost associated with this project?
Answer:
3. Is there a demand for this product?
Answer:
4. How many transactions are needed before profits are made?
Answer:
5. How will the freshman determine their cost?
Answer:
6. Additional Feedback for Freshman:
Answer:

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Period #: Powell
Alexa Radovanovic
Alexa Radovanovic
I wasn't able to attend the presentations of these projects, but I will say to always do your work, never be afraid to ask questions, and make sure to take care of yourself mentally and physically.

Jaime Estrada
Jaime Estrada
Project name: Playing video games for charity
-It´s for a good cause
-Already knew a good portion of his project

~ Needed to do more research on what material (resources) he was going to use for his project

Kean Santos
Kean Santos
Needs more confidence and a script
Really cool idea and seems really passionate about his idea
He needs a bit more focus and direction
-novelist-

¨A positive mi
¨A positive mindset brings positive things¨

Angel Cruz
Angel Cruz
Fishing
The topic is great
Presentation was well organized and well designed.
The presentation needs more research and information added on the slides.

Jaime Estrada
Jaime Estrada
Playing Video Games for Charity

1. Amazing idea and really thoughtful and beneficial to the community.
2. Helps charities while also helping people be entertained.
3. Knows the general basis of what he wants to do for his project and how to launch the business.

1. Try finding some more big influencers and Youtubers to start streaming on the platform.

Great job class!
Great job class!

Jerricko Michaelangelo
Jerricko Michaelangelo
Project name: To teach kids how to skate
+ Understood what he was going to give up (time)
+ Understood the main concept of his project

- Needed to research on how much he was going to spend on the project

Jerricko Michaelange
Jerricko Michaelangelo
Skating
Great concept
Great planning
Figure out how you're going to continue the project

Steven Salsido
Steven Salsido
-Modified baseball mitt-
awesome concept would really improve the sport
powerpoint was nice
needs a diagram of the baseball mitt

Jaime Estrada
Jaime Estrada
Gaming for charity
Unique idea
Easy to set-up
Plan more

Jerricko Michaelangelo
Jerricko Michaelangelo
Skating
Great concept
Great planning
Figure out how you're going to continue the project

Brooklen Valez
Brooklen Valez
Project: Manufacturing company for homeless employment
1. + Great idea that is very relevant right now.
2. + Clear, articulate, and personable speaker.
3. - Needs more planning when it comes to time, capital costs, and labor costs.

Jerricko Michaelangelo
Jerricko Michaelangelo
Skate Coach

1. Helps the community learn how to skate and especially helps beginners get into skating and finding a new hobby.
2. Knows that new skaters might not have skateboards and he can provide rentals.
3. Free of charge to help the community even more.

1. You could do group lessons so more people can learn at once. Also have other instructors with you teaching to make it a little easier.
2. You could even set up a schedule where people can go for open coaching. As in, every Tuesday at MLK Skatepark you have a free lesson for anyone to go to.

Christina Gonzalez
Christina Gonzalez
Freshman names: Zoe and Morgan
Project: Pollution clean-up
They both did a really nice job at speaking and were confident. When asked questions they were prepared to answer. The only thing they need is how they are different from others doing the same project and how they will measure their progress.

Lily G
Lily G
High school will not be the rest of your life. You can take as long as you need to figure out who you are. That's one of the best things about being human. <3

Homeless Sanitary Bags
Homeless Sanitary Bags
You all had a great personable quality, and I think the project has great potential and is definitely achievable, I would only suggest communication between group members to make sure everyone is on the same page and coordinated.

Jared Hernandez
Jared Hernandez
Project: Bodyboards
- Had great orginization/presentation
- Also had a great initiative & motive

- Need more research about how to properly execute the project but otherwise a great idea.

Cooking Project
Cooking Project
The concept of your project was solid and there is definitely a market for such a service, but I would suggest you work on the fine-tuning of the project to work out all the details.

Jared
Jared
Body board company
1. + Seemed very genuine.
2. + I liked the focus on quality of the boards.
3. - Wasn't very clear with the plan for demand for the product.

David
David
1. Is this a viable Project?
Answer: In a Way Yes
2. What is the Cost associated with this project?
Answer: Time and Effort
3. Is there a demand for this product?
Answer: Everybody Listens to Music But Not Everybody knows the origin
4. How will the freshman determine their cost?
Answer: How much time they put into it.
5. Additional Feedback for Freshman:
Answer: You did Fine I would just say be more prepared
Needed more research and plan seemed very unclear.

Evan Rudis
Evan Rudis
Project: feral cat shelter
Great ideas Evan, you seemed to have a good amount of background in what it takes to complete your passion project and I think that you really can accomplish your goal.
It was a delight to see how much passion you have to be involved and make a change in your community, this really helped make your project stand out and I think you have the resources to create this type of project in your community.
For your presentation it would be more appealing to the eye if you showed organizations that you worked with in order to foster the feral cats, this would help show the experience you have and that you are very knowledgeable in this area of work.
Hope all goes well,
Sincerely your trusty Senior citizen at ECHS,
Julie Cabrera :)

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Period #: Jobst
Nathan Kozina
Nathan Kozina
Swing a Bat
Presentation was nice and organized
The idea is great
Needs more research and more planning

Lilyah Seely
Lilyah Seely
G-art-bage
-It’s new, original and Creative
-It could raise lots of money if done right
-A lot of things are still in the “decision” phase

Braeden Bamber
Braeden Bamber
Disneyland
Really well thought out idea, slides were very organized, speaking done nicely.
Love that your mentor is your grandpa, that's awesome.
I think my only suggestion for improvement is that you set up the way in which you're going to interview and recruit for Disney to have a more complete thought.

Victor Bell
Victor Bell
Football camp
You have a great plan so far and can definitely execute it
Everything was organized and easy to read
Maybe use a background that has to do with your project

Lilly
Lilly
-Bake For Those in Need
-She chose a project about something she was passionate about
-Had really cool pictures to add visuals to the presentation
-Didn't have any actual research on what to produce for her audience.

Bryanna Melendez
Bryanna Melendez
Project Name: Combining music and art as a coping mechanism
-well researched
-very creative and organized
-be confident in what you are putting out there.

Bryanna Melendez
Bryanna Melendez
Project: Music and Art Therapy
-Well organized
-Great research

-More confidence when pitching your idea

Natalia Betancourt
Natalia Betancourt
Cooking for the community
-Really solid idea that has been proven to help the community.
-Can help set up the less fortunate for a better future.
-Could use more research on materials and resources needed.

Aaron Carrillo
Aaron Carrillo
Amusement Park Summer Camp
Super fun idea that kids would probably love.
Love the idea of expanding to sports events and such to continue throughout the school year.
I think you need to find a purpose behind the camp to get parents on board to allow their kids to go, and more ways to cover the costs.

Victor Bell
Victor Bell
-Project idea was good. (football camps for youth)
- Mentor idea was great, it can be accomplished.
-Maybe include a cost sheet to show how much the camp materials will cost (like footballs, snacks, activity material, etc).

Braeden Bamber
Braeden Bamber
Working at Disneyland
Can clearly see your passion for Disneyland
Unique
How will this help the community?

Justin
Justin
Monsters
1. Your project about monsters was really interesting and concise.
2. Great idea and I myself find it interesting.
3. Needs a little more research on the project.

Brannin Gasper
Brannin Gasper
Basketball Cards
-good idea
-love that your mentor is your mom
-a little more research and develop your idea a little more to make it more clear

Brannin Gasper
Brannin Gasper
Project: Basketball Cards
-Good colors
-everything popped

-add more research
-try and make interesting for non basketball players

Rossie Cortez
Rossie Cortez
Helping Young Adults With Depression
Love the ideas you have and the processes you have to complete it.
Slides were neat and easy to follow
Just keep working to get a mentor so you can complete the rest!

Diana R
Diana R
"How Films Affect People"
The project idea is very unique and complex.
Because the project slideshow was not completed, I would say to complete it and do more research on people's personal experiences with certain films.

Focus on school and
Focus on school and don't let someone distract you from doing your work

Taylor Sterling
Taylor Sterling
Feeding young adults a healthy diet
- Loved the idea of healthy diet because a lot of foods found today are unhealthy and most of the time we don't even know.
- Everything was able to understand and I think the slides were put together nicely.
- The only thing I would work on is just being confident in what you're trying to pursue.

¨The way you see peo
¨The way you see people is the way you treat them, and the way you treat them is what they become.¨

Jaeden Duenas
Jaeden Duenas
Project: beach cleanup
-This project is good for the community, if done the beach will be even prettier.
-Slides were good to follow and neat.
-Make sure to watch for grammar errors, and include before and after pictures of beaches (if not include pictures of trash you found at our Oceanside beach).

Makayla
Makayla
Project name: clothing design
~ Had a lot of information
~ good choice of pictures
~ Can improve confidence level

~Kimberly Castañeda

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Angelo Granata
Angelo Granata
Lemonade Summer Stand
The idea is great and the steps are clear to what is trying to be accomplished. You have multiple backup plans just in case one idea goes the wrong way.
Go a little bit more into depth with your explanations.

Simon Leja
Simon Leja
Doughnut Shop
The idea is most definitely different from others as no one ever thinks of actually pursuing a business in doughnuts as well as having bright mentors to help pursue his action in the business industry.
Something I would possibly change is just his public speaking abilities.

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Sophia

2021-11-09 21:57:03 UTC

Cat Photos
The idea was good and the slides were easy to follow
Go into more depth and maybe create more options alongside pictures (cards, custom photos, etc.)
It could help others and be profitable

Alian Badillo

2021-11-09 21:57:07 UTC

Soccer
Looks like there was passion for the project
I think its good how you are willing to make less time for your friends to make this soccer project a reality
I think for your slides they need just a bit more information, for example more research, find the kind of events you need to do. Senior: Luisa Orellana

Maddie Flaherty

2021-11-09 21:58:14 UTC

I was not present for these projects, however I have some quick tips for yall. I would really try to push yourself to get at least 6+ hours of sleep a night, and also try to attend school as much as possible, because getting behind isn't fun at all. You should still have fun sometimes though.

Ella Storer

2021-11-09 21:59:15 UTC

American Flags
-I love how you plan on giving back to the community and gifting fire stations with these custom flags
-A good business that will constantly have customers flowing in = Nice profit for that truck :)
-One thing to improve on is your approach with getting in contact with said fire stations, etc. make a plan step by step in order to talk to whoever you need to execute your plan

Freshman Name: Alian Badillo

2021-11-09 22:00:56 UTC

Project: Soccer
Passion was there for the project
Some thought was put in the opportunity cost
Some more thought needs to be put in the research

Breanna Decembrano

2021-11-09 22:03:39 UTC

Project: Plastic Pollution
Lots of thought was put into the project
Passion was there and research as well
Be a little louder

Mark Bartolome

2021-11-10 17:00:43 UTC

Project: How do games effect your productivity in school and work

Good organzied plan
Determined mindset with steps planned out

Maybe have more visual representations
-jt