https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv en-us 2022-08-26 11:42:42 UTC 2025-12-07 13:24:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/270d.png https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273049146 Commentary]]> 2022-08-26 19:34:16 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273049146 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273049304 Picking and sorting the evidence used in each paragraph ]]> 2022-08-26 19:34:29 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273049304 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273049410 Connecting the commentary to the speaker’s background more specifically.]]> 2022-08-26 19:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273049410 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273049659 identifying certain phrases or rhetorical choices in an essay, or writing with the intent of using rhetorical choices.]]> 2022-08-26 19:34:54 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273049659 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273049913 The commentary seems a lot like assumptions made about the speaker and doesn’t really have much to back it up…

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I'm confused on how to connect the commentary and the topic and how to know the paragraph flows well.]]> 2022-08-26 19:35:27 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273050238 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273050333 2022-08-26 19:35:29 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273050333 05marianagon https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273050666 I am confused how to get the sophistication point and determine whether or not it was above and beyond enough.]]> 2022-08-26 19:35:53 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273050666 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051002 Deciding on what evidence to pick at the beginning ]]> 2022-08-26 19:36:23 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051002 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051068 Understanding what to write about the author's rhetorical choice]]> 2022-08-26 19:36:29 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051068 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051125 The part I struggle with the most is the sophistication. It’s not easy to remember all the different parts of the prompt and the text and connect them in so many ways in a handful of sentences ]]> 2022-08-26 19:36:35 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051125 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051183 Commentary that explains how the evidence supports a line of reasoning. ]]> 2022-08-26 19:36:40 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051183 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051260 Commentary, transferring from an evidence piece to the whys and hows of the commentary is the most confusing portion for me.]]> 2022-08-26 19:36:47 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051260 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051283 I am most concerned about how you should connect the the evidence to the purpose while 2 commentary without it sounding choppy.
 ]]> 2022-08-26 19:36:49 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273051283 5035663 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273052035 I still don't get what sophistication is, and how to connect it to your essay]]> 2022-08-26 19:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273052035 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273052080 Writing Sophisticated transitions]]> 2022-08-26 19:37:42 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273052080 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273052665 Commentary because connecting back to your thesis and supporting confused me]]> 2022-08-26 19:38:27 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273052665 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273053243 Being able to gather enough evidence for all of my commentary within the time limit, and writing the evidence in a way that doesn’t look like I’m copying the text.]]> 2022-08-26 19:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2273053243 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2275504232 Coming up with different ways to mention the claim in the topic sentence of each paragraph without sounding repetitive]]> 2022-08-30 01:26:22 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/ueq2k1qhwg2i4fdv/wish/2275504232