Reviews for "Lemons, Limes, and Dat Jawn" by Brendon O'Shea by Kelsey Peterson https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/uecm6sz0dxnybcug en-us 2021-11-17 19:12:20 UTC 2026-02-24 02:44:44 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/uecm6sz0dxnybcug/wish/1900398066 1. 2/4
2. good dialogue, beginning had good balance of showing and telling
3. No connection between both stories, confusion with message
4. No, the memoir as a whole did not make a lot of sense.]]> 2021-11-18 19:25:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/uecm6sz0dxnybcug/wish/1900398066 https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/uecm6sz0dxnybcug/wish/1900398964 3/4 Stars

Weaknesses:
- It's boring
- Lacking in descriptive language
- It's not really a story, it was him more of just explaining the differences between languages

Strengths:
- Structure of the story
- Dialogue
- Purpose is clearer than the other narratives; the purpose is to show language barriers and how languages differ

Would not recommend - boring and not engaging. ]]> 2021-11-18 19:26:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/uecm6sz0dxnybcug/wish/1900398964 https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/uecm6sz0dxnybcug/wish/1900399763 1.  1.75/4
2. the narrative's strengths
  • you can see his personality in his writing
  • he explained the DR story well
3. the narrative's weakness
  • failed to deliver importance of story
  • message clear but the two events in the story didn't really connect so it took away from the story
  • boring
  • unnecessary
  • little discription
4. no, this story really isn't worth telling and didn't do a good job at delivering the message
]]> 2021-11-18 19:26:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/uecm6sz0dxnybcug/wish/1900399763 https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/uecm6sz0dxnybcug/wish/1900402125 3.5/4

Strengths: use of dialogue, descriptive and vivid story, interesting story, obtains focus and purpose, and relates stories together

Weakness: could have been connected better

We could recommend this sorry because it follows a prompt of a memoir. It is engaging, descriptive, and keeps the significant of the stories together ]]> 2021-11-18 19:27:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/uecm6sz0dxnybcug/wish/1900402125