grow: eye contact, speaking a bit quiet

question: none

grow: make more eye contact, don't sound so monotone

GROW: colors may be a bit too bright for some eyes but still pretty

Question: how will you include data visualization in your website and make sure it isn't biased.

• I like how context was given for your project

• I like how you guys are trying to tackle the combination of medical and cybersecurity in your project

• I like the website presentation

Grow:

• Specify the link between hospitals and its community/area

Question:

• Will your website exclude other health care places like dermatologists, dentistry, physical therapy places, etc.? (Basically will your website only carter to providing online security to only hospitals?)

how will you make survey work & be accurate?

other that your survey what will your website offer?

amazing topic & colors/themes!

Grow: There was lot of text so maybe switch those to speaker notes.

question: none

Grow: Color scheme might be too close in shades, would be good for a warmth chart or the gradient effect though!

• I love your color scheme and the descriptions

• Interesting Hook

• Very Concise

Grows:

• Maybe focus on hospitals? idk yall did such a good job!

Questions:

• How did you chose your topic?

grow: a lot of info on the slides when it should be cut down to bullet points, color theme may be hard to see text and a bit abrasive

Grow: Instead of having 3 target audiences I think you should just focus on 1 and emphasize that

Question: How does the color red signify protection?

I like the topic and think it is a really important issue and I like the statistics you used to put it into perspective.

grow: more eye contact

question: will you guys include alternatives to current fast fashion companies on how they can change?

Grow: focusing on one target audience instead of three.

question: are hospitals in low-income areas more prone to cyber security breaches?

grow: limit where you pull your data from and the different statistics you will be using to make it more specific because it will be hard to find all the data for different states

grow: make sure cite your sources

The presentation was very organized.

Loved the topic.

Grow : There was a little too much happening on the slides, try to make use of speaker notes.

Glow: I think a lighter green would make the visualization better

Grow: it would be cool if you used different types of data visualizations other than maps(like ik location data is the focus but along with that)

another grow: if you have time it would be cool if you had a broader audience (like something for people who are seeking out mental health reasources)

Grow: For your survey please make sure you have a diverse pool of women so that you have a good data set and minimal bias

Grow: more organization when speaking, eye contact/volume

Question: Are you focusing on the conservation of a specific species or all marine life as a whole?