https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv en-us 2023-08-16 16:38:06 UTC 2023-11-29 17:17:03 UTC hello@padlet.com rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2663668124 2023-08-16 16:46:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2663668124 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2665905258 2023-08-18 15:36:56 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2665905258 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2665908705 2023-08-18 15:41:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2665908705 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2665909343 2023-08-18 15:41:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2665909343 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2675361519 Truth- He struggled with depression but didn't understand until his diagnosis
Theme- Mental illness and the stigma surrounding it
Voice- Telling a story
POV- His story from his perspective
Significance- He felt alone and confused about his emotions because what he thought mental illness and depression/anxiety is was completely warped and not relatable. Different people feel differently. 


]]> 2023-08-28 16:11:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2675361519 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2681314069 2023-09-01 15:58:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2681314069 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2687037041 I reviewed Bree's essay for:
Truth: truthful, not exaggerated

Style/voice: first person

Organizational: story-telling, comparison

Significance: Her story of feeling like giving up and overcoming it for herself. 

intro/conclusion: Very impactful conclusion and closing statement. The intro is comparing her summer to most people.]]> 2023-09-06 16:03:13 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2687037041 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2709135805 Marilyn Monroe
She is a beautiful starlet who is a historical figure and represents an era of American pop culture. Her death was controversial.]]> 2023-09-18 16:11:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2709135805 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2726331660 I will use the citation makers and the EBSCO search to limit search results to relevancy

In-text citations]]> 2023-09-29 16:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2726331660 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2728855648 2023-10-02 16:02:14 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2728855648 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2753009803 Mark Smith was found deceased in the parking garage on June 6, 2021, at 10:39 p.m. The case is suspected to be a homicide. Forensics concluded the cause of death was due to multiple stab wounds found on the victim's body. ]]> 2023-10-18 16:15:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2753009803 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2753034375 The body has 9 stab wounds in the neck, chest and abdomen. The Carotid Artery was pierced. Wounds show the blade to be between 5-6 inches and no serrations. The cause of death is concluded as blood loss due to the location of the wounds. The angle of penetration eliminates the possibility of suicide. The time of death is estimated to be between 10-11 p.m. on June 6, 2021. ]]> 2023-10-18 16:30:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2753034375 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2753051596 Mark was my best friend, husband, and our children's father. I could not imagine a life without him. I never wanted to imagine a life without him. Now the one scenario I didn't plan out has become the reality. Mark was so loving. He was always the first person I could go to for anything because he was filled with care and love. He was the perfect father to our children. He spends all of his time working to provide for his family or with us. Mark had the most alive spirit. ]]> 2023-10-18 16:39:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2753051596 rmroark23 https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2753067134 Ladies and gentlemen despite the facts and scenarios given throughout this lengthy, you cannot see the victim as just a body. Mark Smith was a husband, father, brother, and friend to many in his community. The defendant and his lawyers have given you many excuses and spun stories in a way to make him seem innocent.]]> 2023-10-18 16:48:39 UTC https://padlet.com/rmroark23/uc0nn7cl4fwr9mhv/wish/2753067134