G Period -- Crit Lit Project Check-In by Betsy Durning https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5 en-us 2020-12-03 18:33:25 UTC 2020-12-03 19:36:14 UTC hello@padlet.com The peer review was helpful because my partners gave great advice and guidance for me moving forward. They provided me with ideas and changes that I believe will greatly enhance the quality of my story. It was also helpful reading over projects to continuing gaining inspiration for my own. williamwatson2 https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985371071 2020-12-03 19:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985371071 sarahsnoots https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985371432 it is challenging to have such an open - ended assignment. i really like being able to choose what i am going to do, but it also stresses me out because its hard to choose. ]]> 2020-12-03 19:33:09 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985371432 jasonboue https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985371624 my peers helped me develop some of my ideas that I was still unsure about, as well as give suggestions on how to make my project stronger]]> 2020-12-03 19:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985371624 anthonytreistman https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985371871 The peer review was really helpful because its was good to have another pair of eyes look at my work. Usually when I write I will get so fixated on the goal I am trying to achieve with the writing that I miss times where the text is confusing or not strong. ]]> 2020-12-03 19:33:15 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985371871 natevutpakdi https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985371981 Actually, writing the short story and trying to make it concise enough but also include everything I want to is more difficult than I imagined]]> 2020-12-03 19:33:16 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985371981 It helped me make sure the ideas I was hoping to convey were properly written. It also helped since my partner provided good feedback and things to review that I wouldn't have seen myself. sanjitjuneja https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985372035 2020-12-03 19:33:17 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985372035 My peer review was helpful because my partner helped me get a better idea of how to articulate the connection between my work and my inspiration work in my analytical paragraph davidshaw3 https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985372653 2020-12-03 19:33:25 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985372653 The peer review helped me improve my draft and got me thinking about new aspects to incorporate in my poem. It was helpful to get another person's perspective maddieharrell1 https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985373145 2020-12-03 19:33:31 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985373145 harrison_consol https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985374760 The peer review helped significantly in allowing me to see where I wanted to continue with my story, and what was or wasn't working so far.]]> 2020-12-03 19:33:53 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985374760 I liked the feedback I got on some of the more far fetched ideas I had. it was reassuring that my intentions and symbolism were easily understood. hudsongage https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985375036 2020-12-03 19:33:56 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985375036 jasonboue https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985375729 the hardest part for me was just coming up with my idea]]> 2020-12-03 19:34:05 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985375729 natevutpakdi https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985376199 The peer review was extremely helpful. There were elements of my draft that I wasn't sure about and it helped to have someone to give advice and comment

]]> 2020-12-03 19:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985376199 sarahsnoots https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985376461 harrison helped me brainstorm new ideas for my short story ]]> 2020-12-03 19:34:15 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985376461 jasonboue https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985377231 i'm excited to continue developing my idea because i think i have a good start, but there's mor ework to do]]> 2020-12-03 19:34:25 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985377231 I find that organizing symbols and complex metaphors throughout my story is the hardest part. It is difficult to determine how obviously I should allude to something. hudsongage https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985377920 2020-12-03 19:34:35 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985377920 sarahsnoots https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985378768 i just want to make sure that i am moving in the right direction - so is there any way that ms. d can do a quick overview of the projects and approve them?]]> 2020-12-03 19:34:47 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985378768 harrison_consol https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985382404 How much do our projects have to match content/form? I was inspired by two different works, and I feel like in combining them it doesn't resemble the form of either individually]]> 2020-12-03 19:35:30 UTC https://padlet.com/betsydurning/ubxz4f8fauutk3c5/wish/985382404