https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6 Thank you for being a part of our writing process. Please add a personal comment after reading Elora's Hero's Journey. You may remain anonymous or you can add your name after your post. en-us 2020-06-09 18:38:13 UTC 2021-06-07 20:31:54 UTC hello@padlet.com 22zakiratcliffe https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/636565031 You portrayed Audrey's thoughts.]]> 2020-06-22 19:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/636565031 https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/636826506 I like how Audrey's thoughts were very realistic for the situations that she was in. ]]> 2020-06-23 01:35:17 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/636826506 22carolinabadamo https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/637593350 I love how you added lots of detail to the story and really showed Audrey's emotions]]> 2020-06-23 15:07:26 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/637593350 22aurorarobinson https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/638686340 Eloraaaaaaaaaaa thats so amazing. So supper amazingggg. This could be an actual book and or a movie! I really like how detailed this is and the story is just great! You did a really good job! it was awesome!]]> 2020-06-24 12:35:29 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/638686340 22alicjakoziel https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/638723879 I like how you started the story and how you portrayed Audrey's thoughts. I like your character and how you described her life. ]]> 2020-06-24 13:13:18 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/638723879 22majasarzynska https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/640084634 I like how you added different type of details to make your story more interesting. I also like how  you made Audrey's thoughts to become realistic to the situation she was in.
GOOD JOB!!!!! :D]]> 2020-06-25 14:55:36 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/u9fnqj1usd4hyf6/wish/640084634