Writing tips and conclusions by יעל כהן /מורה

Writing tips and conclusions by יעל כהן /מורה https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq en-us 2023-06-12 04:35:11 UTC 2023-06-12 05:37:47 UTC hello@padlet.com Write at least two things you have learned from reading your friends' writing. (2 for each) yaelkamon https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620688889 2023-06-12 04:41:18 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620688889 Ruth - By Aya https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620726344 1. A lot of parents cant afford the summer activities
2.Furthermore - Good connector]]> 2023-06-12 05:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620726344 Talia- By Tamar https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620731744 1. clean writing with a clear message.
2. summer is a good time to do whatever you like reconnecting with old friends.

]]> 2023-06-12 05:25:18 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620731744 Tamar- by talia https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620731942 1. As a teenagers we don't know how much money do we spend while the summer vacation.
2. It's very orgenized when you say your opinion clearly.]]> 2023-06-12 05:25:31 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620731942 Noa about Naomi's essay https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620733680 1. there are lots of ways to describe the same thing.
2. you can open a paragraph with a question about the subject, and not necessarily with a normal sentence.]]> 2023-06-12 05:27:28 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620733680 Naomi on Noa's essay https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620735577 1. Her intro was extend and it introduce me to the subject very clearly. By reading the intro I immediately knew about what the essay was going to talk about.
2. There were good connectors in the essay such as: additionally, furthermore, in conclution....]]> 2023-06-12 05:29:33 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620735577 Naama - By Aya https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620736174 1. "A long summer vacation can help students became more independent" - its a good argument
2. She is vary clear on her opinion ]]> 2023-06-12 05:30:15 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620736174 Mika- by Ruth https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620736451 1. that in the summer srudents have time to do hobis they didnt have time for doring the year.
2. that also techers need 2 month vecaoin.]]> 2023-06-12 05:30:36 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620736451 Hadar -on Shira https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620736453 1.the students strength their independence skills.I reallt liked this sentence and I DIDNT THINK ABOUT THIS BEFORE.
2.The students have a regular routine throuot all year but with the vacation it stoped and its not helpful for them. I liked this sentence because I identified with the sentence.]]> 2023-06-12 05:30:36 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620736453 Aya- by Ruth https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620737591 1. How to write a good opning with both the sides in.
2. Had good concters and good sininmes]]> 2023-06-12 05:31:57 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620737591 Shira Ben tolila-on Hadar https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620737944 1. its very organized and she say her opinion clearly.
2. she give a good opinion that i didnt think about this before ]]> 2023-06-12 05:32:23 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620737944 Yarden - by Shira https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620738147 1. I learn how to write a good opening by use every thing I know about this subject and write it shortly.
2. The summer break gives the student time to work that can strengthen their independence skills.

]]> 2023-06-12 05:32:38 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620738147 Yarden about Shira's essay https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620738165 1. Parents have to balance work with finding occupation for the children.
2. The summer vacation not only makes the students happy, but also motivates them.]]> 2023-06-12 05:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620738165 Roth- by Mika https://padlet.com/yaelkamon/u8y5t84ngvnqqqcq/wish/2620739484 Firstly I didn't think about the claim in favor of shortening the summer vacation, which says that the students will forget what they .learned

There were good connector

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