This is a fantastic story map! I loved every organizational detail and it was very clear! This may just be me but the "ways to make a difference" slideshow felt les flowy in the context of everything else so I might change that to a scroll slideshow instead of a click. But that could just be my own perspective. Absolutely great job, though! I loved how in-depth and evidence-based your story was! - IAN

Hi Damian! This is a really great story map, I like how in depth it was talking about how and why conserving energy and water are so important. I also really like how short and the quality of the information that is given is understandable and how you compared and contrasted the two maps shown. Overall great story map! - CHRISTINA

Hi Naida, I love how detailed your StoryMap is, as it really covers issues we face with water conservation and energy—well Done! - ANAYA

I love the design of your story map. It's very clean and easy to navigate. - DAMINA

Hey Naida! I really like the concept you did for your story map such as connecting climate justice to being eco friendly. All in all, nice story map! - CHRISTINA

Hello Sadhika, I think your story map is great. I liked how you compared Lake Hodges to when it was 2015 and 2023. - REYYAN

Hi Sadhika, I liked your wide variety of graphs and use of multiple maps. It really helped provide evidence for what you were saying. There were a lot of different elements included that made it visually interesting. Maybe add more consistent headings so your StoryMap has a more rigid structure? - NAIDA

I love the organization of your map! Everything is really concise and cute and easy to follow. - BELLA

I liked the use of images to make your story map more creative. I also liked the idea of using a slidecar for you steps. - DAMIAN

Hello! I really like how you listed ways on how to save both energy and water, as well as the overall design of your story map. Fantastic job! The only thing I would change is adding another map for water part in one area and maybe another pie chart or bar graph for the energy part. Overall, you have a really nice story map! :) - CHRISTINA