https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7 en-us 2022-09-02 08:40:25 UTC 2022-09-06 13:01:35 UTC hello@padlet.com ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280492654 1 minuut

we horen: sura 93
we zien: zwart / visual silence / the sky

]]> 2022-09-02 08:40:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280492654 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280492956 on the edge of life, I saw a film 

image: tbd]]> 2022-09-02 08:41:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280492956 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280493059 thinking about what makes life not worth living

1. shot of Yam on edge of building (topshot) >> atmosphere is grey, it's a city environment, it's clinical.
2. POV shot of Yam
3. visualization of her inner state (archive footage + self shot material)

Sound: voice over
Soundscape: systematic, the boringness of modern life, inhuman machine-like motions]]> 2022-09-02 08:41:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280493059 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280493998 he talks about what it was like before his spiritual awakening.

dramatische functie: he is the living proof that you can come out of darkness

we see: 
1. topshot interview (in studio, or in his place. Maybe on top of one of his artworks)
2. shots of his artwork/practice
3. he is making a spiral movement down and up on a location 

]]> 2022-09-02 08:42:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280493998 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280494189 intertwined with Arya and Cokkie throughout this whole sequence

visualized: archive + self shot footage]]> 2022-09-02 08:42:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280494189 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280494449 Cokkie is introduced as a mysterious character - like an oracle - she shares her wisdom. She is grounding us. Very down to earth.

Visual:

1. she is holding a book or something else, her hands are old, she is making coffee, doing daily things in her own rhythm. (movements rather than words).

2. (later) topshot interview; the location is a spiral (land art, a staircase etc).

3. (extreme) close up shots of her hands, her hair, her face, her skin, her gestures, her holding a book, making food. (Human, simple, daily things). 



]]> 2022-09-02 08:43:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280494449 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280495802 at this point, her thoughts are more confused & more abstract]]> 2022-09-02 08:44:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280495802 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280496106 POV Yam >> freefalling >> flying

VFX?

Sound/VO: 'is this the freedom you want?']]> 2022-09-02 08:45:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280496106 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280496890 this is the same footage as before, but this time it has a positive association 

- editing and sound design will transform the dark images into more positive images

(the urge to live starts calling her)]]> 2022-09-02 08:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280496890 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280497227 it starts as a freefall,

then it turns into flying

this is the turning point]]> 2022-09-02 08:46:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280497227 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280498389 1. we see his paintings
2. we see him creating a painting?

dramaturgische functie: pijn kan leiden tot creatie

Sound/voice: about positive experiences, telling us about his spiritual journey]]> 2022-09-02 08:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280498389 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280498726 we realize we're in a film: seeing turns into cinema

meaning behind it: life is too short, it's an illusion. Embrace the illusion and fucking live it]]> 2022-09-02 08:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280498726 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280498982 1. we will see her do things. This scene is about simplicity in life. It's not an interview setting

just living life
not making it more complicated

]]> 2022-09-02 08:48:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280498982 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280500035 a. we zien haar weggaan van het gebouw, of:

b. we zien het gebouw, leeg (zonder Yam)
>> de drone gaat omhoog omhoog omhoog, revealing the empty rooftop?]]> 2022-09-02 08:49:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280500035 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280503058 1. someone giving birth. a) an image of pain, b) the reward of the baby, of new life. 

2. destruction (war, catastrophe). a) existing life is destroyed, b) a space for new life to form >>> footage of external uitbarsting wordt gekoppeld aan een innerlijke turmoil

3. footage of space. Slow, spirally. A calm image to reflect. (Maybe VFX) - a very high quality image, immersive

4. developing film (preferably our own footage)

5. nature budding & forming (trees, flowers)



]]> 2022-09-02 08:53:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280503058 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280511128 1. someone giving birth. a) an image of pain, b) the reward of the baby, of new life. 

2. footage of space. Slow, spirally. A calm image to reflect. (Maybe VFX) - a very high quality image, immersive

3. developing film (preferably our own footage)

4. floating violins on fire (it's a burial, it's a ritual, it's the destruction of something beautiful. VFX shot. fire turns into flowers at some point?)]]> 2022-09-02 09:03:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280511128 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280523729 VFX

opties;
- the drone moves fast (as if through time) from Yam to Ariya
- a psychedelic transition (time slows down/speeds up/changes its quality?)
- from Yam's eye (iris) to Aria's eye]]> 2022-09-02 09:20:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280523729 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280551801 images of space (need to be created with VFX probably)]]> 2022-09-02 09:58:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280551801 ramrenkema https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280557395 PEOPLE CRY
WE WIN AN AWARD

sound: the sura, but on music (track by Aizouki)]]> 2022-09-02 10:08:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ramrenkema/u86wx0mgy5x50hy7/wish/2280557395