Q5 anthology practice by https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum Comparing Adichi from the anthology and 'unseen' Emma Watson en-us 2020-06-05 08:14:36 UTC 2020-06-05 13:07:59 UTC hello@padlet.com Language to write about perspective: add here... eleanorburnside https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612524502 2020-06-05 08:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612524502 Transcript of Emma Watson's speech eleanorburnside https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612528625 2020-06-05 08:21:34 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612528625 Transcript of Adichie's talk eleanorburnside https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612529950 2020-06-05 08:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612529950 Ideas on what you can put: https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612744324 Use of logos pathos and ethos
Ethos:
Watson:
"Born in Britain"
Adichie:
"Conventional, middle-class Nigerian family."
Pathos:
Watson:
talking about the increasing number of males suiciding
Adichie:
"Tribal music"-  draws attention to the unconscious prejudice of the roommates. Someone from a greater privilege jukes someone of a not so higher privileged family.
Logos: 
Watson:
talks about "Hilary Clinton" and how many things she wanted to change things that still have not changed yet.
Adichie:
talks about "Mariah Carey"
Use of anecdotes:
Adichie:
"I am a tory teller"
Emma Watson:
"her male friends were unable to express their feelings"


]]> 2020-06-05 10:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612744324 perspective keira1682 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612744432 - using anecdotes to give their perspective truthfulness and clarification of their understanding about the subject
- ]]> 2020-06-05 11:00:04 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612744432 Both are speeches https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612744471 2020-06-05 11:00:07 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612744471 Both use anecdotes to establish their credibility https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612744725 2020-06-05 11:00:20 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612744725 Language to use about structure. https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612744875 The both use discourse markers to link the piece and show a connection to change in their story. For example “Now” or “so”. 
They are put at the start of the paragraph or the end. ]]> 2020-06-05 11:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612744875 perspective of speaking about ethnicity compared feminism https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745033

]]> 2020-06-05 11:00:36 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745033 Emma watson uses many enumerations at the beginning which emphasises the points she is trying to get across and it makes them permanent. finleymynott https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745216 2020-06-05 11:00:46 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745216 Both are in a chronological order for example both use experiences from childhood and then use their present day experiences and hopes for the future https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745546 2020-06-05 11:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745546 perspective https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745752 They both use personal experiences and passion to emotionally engage the audience. They both use pathos e.g. by using personal pronouns ]]> 2020-06-05 11:01:09 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745752 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745845 Emma Watson speaks to the audience, whereas Adichie talks about her own story]]> 2020-06-05 11:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745845 Ngozi Adichie - Speaking from ethnicity https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745848 2020-06-05 11:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745848 both are in chronological order https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745866 they both speak about their past experiences with the topic.]]> 2020-06-05 11:01:16 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745866 Both use personal pronouns such as I to increase their pathos https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745956 2020-06-05 11:01:19 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612745956 Use of pronouns 2332384 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612746165 personal pronouns to invite the reader in their journey.

]]> 2020-06-05 11:01:31 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612746165 Both use parallel sentence structures https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612746406 2020-06-05 11:01:47 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612746406 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612747075 Logos - through anecdotes and statistics ]]> 2020-06-05 11:02:24 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612747075 both speak about the struggles and overcoming adversity within their live https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612747218 2020-06-05 11:02:33 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612747218 anecdotes https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612747465 both use personal experiences instead of data to increase validity - this is because they back up the writers argument (since they can actually relate due to the past)]]> 2020-06-05 11:02:48 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612747465 End 2332384 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612747497 Chimamanda- circular structure 
uses 1st person plural proouns sharing experience/ ideas with audience---- single story motif runs throughout the novel

Emma- ends with a rhetorical question
directly aksing the audience ]]> 2020-06-05 11:02:50 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612747497 Both use parallel sentence structures https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612747922 "Stories matter. Many stories matter"
"If men don't have to control, women won't be controlled" 

]]> 2020-06-05 11:03:13 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612747922 Emma Watson is talking about women on a whole but Adichie is talking about her personal experiences https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612748202 2020-06-05 11:03:27 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612748202 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612748967 Pathos - sympathy created through anecdotes and
which makes you sympathise for both speakers 

]]> 2020-06-05 11:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612748967 Emma Watson uses all three forms of appeal-Ethos,pathos and logos. finleymynott https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612749604 2020-06-05 11:04:40 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612749604 Register https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612749660 Adichie speaks in an informal register but Watson uses formal register because of her audience being in a more powerful position.

"She assumed that I did not know how to use a stove" using humour to relate to her audience.

"]]> 2020-06-05 11:04:44 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612749660 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612749818 Both use chronological order in their speeches as Emma Watson recounts her life as she ages and Adichie tells the reader about her personal experiences through her entire life ]]> 2020-06-05 11:04:54 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612749818 Both trying to raise awareness https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612750176 They both want people to see it from their point of view ]]> 2020-06-05 11:05:16 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612750176 Register 2332384 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612750863 both have a high degree of formality

"

]]> 2020-06-05 11:05:53 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612750863 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612750999 both about discrimination against specific types of people.]]> 2020-06-05 11:05:58 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612750999 1st person pronoun https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612751980 2020-06-05 11:06:49 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612751980 both include a sense of passion as they are talking about subjects they firmly believe in and the use of personal pronouns solidify their arguments because they are spreading awareness about experiences everybody goes through https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612752176 2020-06-05 11:06:58 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612752176 perspective https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612752683 by using their past experiences it successfully engages the reader which is good.]]> 2020-06-05 11:07:26 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612752683 WHAT/HOW https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612754855 2020-06-05 11:09:15 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612754855 Both speakers intend to use their speech to powerfully address their central thesis through the chronological order fo the text 2332384 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612758098 x]]> 2020-06-05 11:11:52 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612758098 Both use personal pronouns https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612758697 2020-06-05 11:12:24 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612758697 Discourse markers https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612759322 2020-06-05 11:12:48 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612759322 What/How https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612759811 Both texts explore ]]> 2020-06-05 11:13:11 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612759811 What/how for 1st person pronouns https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612760092 Both Watson and Emma increase their pathos and make the listeners feel more sorry for them ]]> 2020-06-05 11:13:27 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612760092 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612760188 Both speeches are written and said in chronological order as they both start with their childhood memories to more recent memories

]]> 2020-06-05 11:13:32 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612760188 use of negative language and how other peoples' attittudes towards dyslexic people https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612760563 2020-06-05 11:13:52 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612760563 Both speeches start with themselves then immediately switch to the audience https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612760819 2020-06-05 11:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612760819 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612761057 Both try to include the reader as much as possible

]]> 2020-06-05 11:14:19 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612761057 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612761208 while both are on slightly different topics they are both essentially to spread awareness and explore the theme]]> 2020-06-05 11:14:28 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612761208 Both speeches are by women. keira1682 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612761263 Both texts explore the effects which women have on their peers - slightly ironic considering the speeches are about men having more power women yet the women are taking the stand.]]> 2020-06-05 11:14:31 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612761263 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612761687 Both are very passionate ]]> 2020-06-05 11:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612761687 Discourse marker change "but" - there is an immediate switch therefore the suffering is going to be overcome the use of "but" 2331911 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612763236 2020-06-05 11:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612763236 tehaniowais https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612763854 explore the theme of overcoming adversity in life ]]> 2020-06-05 11:16:52 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612763854 What/how topic sentence: chronological order seun21 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612763865 Both presenters use chronological ordering to lead the listeners logically through their argument]]> 2020-06-05 11:16:52 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612763865 register mominali https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612764093 2020-06-05 11:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612764093 2324381 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612764197 "When I was younger, I began questioning gender-based assumptions at 6". Using more advanced language, more formal.]]> 2020-06-05 11:17:12 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612764197 2320944 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612764266 both are very passionate about their subjects, both have used examples from real life experiences. e.g "at the age of 11 I was being sexulised"]]> 2020-06-05 11:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612764266 Ethos 233139 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612764942 “because of writer like Chinua Achebe and Camara laye”
The audience trust her more and her story becomes more credible.]]> 2020-06-05 11:17:51 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612764942 Both texts explore their passionate views to emotionally engage their audience through the use of anecdotes 2331552 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612765091 2020-06-05 11:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612765091 They want people to see the problems with gender equality and ethical issues djsquash05 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612765394 2020-06-05 11:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612765394 Both readers use pathos to strengthen their argument's leyanakhanam https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612765420 2020-06-05 11:18:12 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612765420 What/how topic sentence: Register seun21 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612766960 Both presenters adapt their speeches by changing the register of their scripts to suit their target audiences more. ]]> 2020-06-05 11:19:31 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612766960 233253 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612767132 They are both trying to send a message to the reader and do this through the use of factual evidence]]> 2020-06-05 11:19:41 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612767132 Discourse Markers maxapollard https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612767577 "now",
"But",

]]> 2020-06-05 11:20:08 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612767577 they both believe in the cause they are giving a speech about and are trying to raise awareness by making their points more relatable by taking about their experiences sarahdean1004 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612767800 2020-06-05 11:20:21 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612767800 Both speeches start with themselves 2324551 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612768121 2020-06-05 11:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612768121 Adichie: the language becomes increasingly positive, shift as text progresses move from negative past {that is roughly chronological} . 2331911 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612768339 2020-06-05 11:20:45 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612768339 What/how topic sentence: Pathos seun21 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612769476 Both writers strengthen their arguments by increasing the pathos in their speeches.]]> 2020-06-05 11:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612769476 Paragraph opening discourse marker lead the reader logically through her story 233139 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612770449 Single story motif runs throughout the story.]]> 2020-06-05 11:22:40 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612770449 Juxtaposing words in Adichie's text: "natural" "unnatural" echoing and mirroring language. 2331911 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612770604 2020-06-05 11:22:48 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612770604 2331662 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612772174 juxtaposing words in adichies text ]]> 2020-06-05 11:24:06 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612772174 p 2331552 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612772753 2020-06-05 11:24:40 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612772753 Adichie acknowledging the complexity of being dyslexic 2331911 https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612773300 2020-06-05 11:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612773300 tom13mtn https://padlet.com/eleanorburnside/u83quu0gk28yqnum/wish/612773590 Ethos- they both use emotion to draw in the reader and make the 
Issue heard and understood. This helps Emma Watson especially as she is trying to argue her point of equality 

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