<?xml version="1.0"?>
<rss version="2.0">
   <channel>
      <title>Ten Page Short Story by Pablo Segovia **</title>
      <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly</link>
      <description>Ms. Jamison Help</description>
      <language>en-us</language>
      <pubDate>2018-11-26 15:55:13 UTC</pubDate>
      <lastBuildDate>2026-01-09 00:11:56 UTC</lastBuildDate>
      <webMaster>hello@padlet.com</webMaster>
      <image>
         <url>https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Ninja.png</url>
      </image>
      <item>
         <title>What I know.</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/307853525</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I am good at soccer. I started playing since I was two years old in my back yard with my dad. Once I was old enough, around four or five, I started playing in town soccer. Every Saturday I would go to a field somewhere in Cambridge where people would organize many little kids like me to play in teams. As I got older I acceled at soccer and when I was nine, I decided to play a year up and start playing 6v6 travel team. I eventually joined GPS, a club team, and then NEFC, the club I'm currently at know</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-26 16:06:11 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/307853525</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Lies</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/307857886</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I wonder what it's like to be dead. what do you see? what do you feel? <br>I wonder what it's like to be a Navy Seal. <br>I wonder what it's like to shoot a really gun. How it affects your body physically. </div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-26 16:12:27 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/307857886</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>The Mashup</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/307862762</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Being an Only child &amp; getting an adopted sibling<br>Eating steak &amp; Being a cow<br>An only child &amp; Joined a SEAL Team</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-26 16:19:24 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/307862762</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>In Class 11/26</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/307932168</link>
         <description><![CDATA[]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-26 18:06:29 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/307932168</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>HW 11/26</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/307933337</link>
         <description><![CDATA[]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-26 18:08:33 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/307933337</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>What If&#39;s</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308054316</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. What if an only child got an adopted sibling.<br>2. What if a cow were to eat steak.<br>3. What if an only child joined a Seal Team<br>4. What if a person abandoned his family to serve his country.</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-26 22:35:06 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308054316</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Revised What If 1</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308054987</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>     </strong><strong><mark>What if an only child got and adopted sibling.</mark></strong><strong><br></strong>What if a ten year old boy, a boy who has had his parents love all to himself his whole life, gets an adopted four year old brother who takes all the fame.</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-26 22:38:35 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308054987</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Revised What If 2</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308057225</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>     <mark>What if an only child joined a Seal Team<br></mark>What if the only kid that a mother and father had, a father who had seen the horrors of war in Vietnam, were to join a Seal Team and go on dangerous missions all around the globe, uncertain whether or not he would make it home. <br><br></div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-26 22:48:23 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308057225</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Scenes for my Short Story</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308067062</link>
         <description><![CDATA[]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-26 23:40:55 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308067062</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Background Scene</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308067182</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li>Wants to join Seals</li><li>grandfather first wave in D-day (survived), father, Vietnam, now delta team instructor</li><li>mom US army surgeon, now retired</li><li>just graduated college, 23, doesn't know what to do </li></ul>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-26 23:41:45 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308067182</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Back to action</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308077341</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li>In helicopter to first mission, having flashbacks about parents<ul><li>wishes he had said a better goodbye</li></ul></li><li>noisy in heli</li><li>hears 5 mike out call<ul><li>starts to gear up<ul><li>(describe noises)</li></ul></li></ul></li></ul>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-27 00:41:35 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308077341</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Gets off</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308077940</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li>Pilot says go go go </li><li>everyone gets out</li><li>feels nervous<ul><li>describe it <ul><li>what he see's and hears</li></ul></li></ul></li><li>is dark out</li><li>moves to door </li><li>Commander in charge, Rollins, tells him to check door<ul><li>describe feelings</li></ul></li><li>sets charge</li></ul>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-27 00:44:46 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308077940</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Ambush</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308078683</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li>Jet is expecting a small boom and the door to come down</li><li>right before louder boom</li><li>feels feat leave the ground everything in slow motion to him</li><li>boom, hits ground hard</li><li>ringing in ears</li><li>ons hands and legs</li><li>starts to hear "get down"<ul><li>feel like someone pushes him to the ground</li></ul></li></ul>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-27 00:49:10 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308078683</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Hi Pablo!  This is good, but I think to keep the conflict within 10 pages you have to stick to one dangerous mission.  What are his feelings?  Does he feel guilty for enlisting because he&#39;s an only child? Why does he Want to enlist when there are so many good reasons not to?</title>
         <author>wwunder1_1</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308592373</link>
         <description><![CDATA[]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 00:48:04 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308592373</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>HW 11/27</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308912456</link>
         <description><![CDATA[]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 17:12:43 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308912456</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Step 1:</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308912817</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Who: Jet Adams<br>Where: Classified Black Ops Operation <br>When: Present<br><br></div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 17:13:18 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308912817</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Step 2:</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308914171</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>When in the Helicopter on way to the mission, an RPG hits the helicopter and crashes leaving only a few survivors</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 17:15:14 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308914171</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Step 3:</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308915012</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Needs to save what remains of the team and get himself out as well by going into the mountains and waiting for the insurgents to come</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 17:16:28 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308915012</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Step 4:</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308915714</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>His obstacle is the group of insurgents going towards the crash site to kill him. At the same time he has to take care of the badly injured</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 17:17:39 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308915714</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Step 5: </title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308920725</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>He's unable to salvage any of the coms from the helicopter so the survivors are now stranded with limited ammo.</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 17:25:41 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308920725</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Step 6: </title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308922029</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>He just sets up an ambush for the incoming insurgents and tries to take them out. He has a sniper, and then only himself and 3 other men</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 17:27:36 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308922029</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Step 7:</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308924316</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the Battle with the insurgents. At first starts picking them off with sniper. Then full on firefight. Loses some men.</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 17:31:00 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308924316</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Step 8:</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308924505</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the end he is still in the fight when the second Seal  Team that had been in the other helicopter went back for them after completing the mission.</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 17:31:17 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308924505</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>In Class 11/27</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308947441</link>
         <description><![CDATA[]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 18:07:40 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308947441</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title></title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308947765</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Sunset and mountains from this</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/337002101/3eb314e423714a422eaf78e4f7d36a0b/download.jpg" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 18:08:12 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308947765</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title></title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308948345</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>With village from this</div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/337002101/b0c741f7c35d0b97a0536bc7a22c4ebc/Village_in_Faryab_province.jpg" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 18:09:05 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308948345</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Show not Tell setting writing</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308948817</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I can feel the wind blowing on my face, taking the cold air through my veins. My hand is shivering with nerves as I pick up the cold metal canteen and unscrew the cap. I can feel the canteen on my chapped lips, and the lukewarm water rushing down my throat and through my chest. The helicopter blades rotating above, propelling us to an uncertain fat. As I look down, there's just enough light to see a little village between the mountains. Each square house containing a family that never wanted this war to go to them. If I look close enough, I feel like I can even see people looking up at me. I jerk my head away, imagining that one of those people would have an RPG, ready to fire at any Americans they see. As I turn my head to the East, away from the village, I can see the vast never ending desert rising up into the tall jagged mountains. Right above, the bright red-orange sun about to set, bringing warmth to my body and soul. Below I see Charley Team in their chopper. All the guys smiling. Moving their lips in a way that makes me know they're joking around. <br>"Woah", I hear the pilot say through my headset as I feel my body being forced to the right.<br>"Just a little bit of turbulence", the pilot repeats as he giggles. Around me my teammates are laughing. They look like they're at a party, and I'm there, holding my helmet with all my strength, shaking. <br>"Come one Squid", the name my team mates call me for being the new guy, "lighten up", my commanding officer, Lieutenant-Commander Rollins says. </div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 18:09:51 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308948817</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Elevator Pitch</title>
         <author>psegovia</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308968470</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Navy Seal, Jet Adams,  is going on his first mission with Bravo Team somewhere in the Middle East. On route to the target house an RPG hits the tail of Jet's helicopter. Jet, along with only 4 other survivors, have to salvage what they can and prepare for the imminent insurgent attack. Jet gets shot at with real bullets for the first time. He builds friendships with his teammates, faces devastating losses, and can't stop regretting that he never fixed his rough relationship with his father. </div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-11-28 18:36:47 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/308968470</guid>
      </item>
      <item>
         <title>Great work Pablo...</title>
         <author>wwunder1_1</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/310066891</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>You have a good instinct for plotting, and you're building a believable world...Keep going </div>]]></description>
         <enclosure url="" />
         <pubDate>2018-12-01 15:09:22 UTC</pubDate>
         <guid>https://padlet.com/psegovia/u6g8gvs97qly/wish/310066891</guid>
      </item>
   </channel>
</rss>
