https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f PRAISE and POLISH en-us 2018-02-09 15:27:09 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:38 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230074909 Praise: I like the excitement and the fun you had with reading the children's book!
Polish: I wish the book was bigger and bolder! ]]> 2018-02-09 15:55:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230074909 RoshinSam https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230074918 Praise: quite enthusiastic 
Polish: nothing it was very interesting ]]> 2018-02-09 15:55:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230074918 nguyezoe000 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230074924 Praise: as always he’s always confidence and loud af which I guess is a good thing. I love the book btw
Polish: maybeeee you should Type the words for the book the next time]]> 2018-02-09 15:55:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230074924 smithsky002 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230074968 Praise// The presentation was really enjoyable and had a great message.
Polish// I don’t really have anything to polish]]> 2018-02-09 15:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230074968 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075000 Praise: The story was very creative and mature although teaching kid to use protection.

Polish: He tends to have too many immatur parts in his book but all in all the entire story was a success. ]]> 2018-02-09 15:56:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075000 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075010 This was so hilarious. It was well thought out and it made sense. Loved it! But maybe just less explicit content.]]> 2018-02-09 15:56:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075010 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075013 Very entertaining 
I wouldve liked to see the pictures]]> 2018-02-09 15:56:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075013 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075017 Praise: read like a children's
Polish: I don't even know]]> 2018-02-09 15:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075017 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075018 Praise: he seems very confident in his project 

Polish: I have no complaints ]]> 2018-02-09 15:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075018 villamar002 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075087 Praise: the lesson in the story was good
Polish: explain the lesson more ]]> 2018-02-09 15:56:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075087 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075124 -very entertaining 
-maybe just color the front page? ]]> 2018-02-09 15:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075124 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075131 He had a very funny story he tried to best explain this story and entertained everyone. ]]> 2018-02-09 15:56:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075131 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075772 Praise: cute story, very entertaining and funny. Loud enough and puts feeling into it.
Polish: where did the bird come into play?

]]> 2018-02-09 15:57:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075772 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075838 Praise: clear voice, story was entertaining 
Polish:

]]> 2018-02-09 15:57:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230075838 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230076102 Praise: Good puns
Polish: None

]]> 2018-02-09 15:58:22 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230076102 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230076156 Praise- good voice presentation/projection

Polish- maybe put it on a slides so we could see the images]]> 2018-02-09 15:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230076156 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230076226 Praise: the book was very interesting 
Polish: stop being so dirty you bafoon]]> 2018-02-09 15:58:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230076226 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230077169 Good storytelling 
The wet dream scene could be cut 

]]> 2018-02-09 16:00:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230077169 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230077519 Funny, with nice lessons]]> 2018-02-09 16:00:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230077519 edekojos000 https://padlet.com/elsong/u6dbl5a89b0f/wish/230077601 Nice art
Engaging story
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