Mrs. Munson's Class: Persuasive Essays by Amanda Munson https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k Let's see if you can persuade the reader! After you read one essay you will rate the essay using 1-5 stars by thinking, "Did this reader persuade me to think like them?" Use this rating scale: *1 star*- This was not persuasive to me **2 stars**- This was a little bit persuasive ***3 stars***- This essay persuaded me ****4 stars****- This essay was very persuasive *****5 stars*****- WOW! I am convinced en-us 2021-04-18 22:51:35 UTC 2021-06-08 20:02:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f44d.png Will https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439629024 Either ⭐⭐⭐ Or ⭐⭐⭐⭐ I like how you ended your sentence saying, "In conclusion, I would like to schools to start at regular times"]]> 2021-04-20 19:16:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439629024 Ronav https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439632173 I like it but not everyone doesn't like long books but otherwise i like it]]> 2021-04-20 19:16:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439632173 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439634106 Your essay has more than two reasons and a good opening ,but I would like it if it was longer and but it is not clear because it has no paragraphs 
I would rate it **]]> 2021-04-20 19:17:09 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439634106 Kyle https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439635167 like it but it didn't purswaed me]]> 2021-04-20 19:17:25 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439635167 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439635229 Nice work Abena]]> 2021-04-20 19:17:26 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439635229 colton https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439635704 i like your title and the punctuation]]> 2021-04-20 19:17:32 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439635704 Adhvaita https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439635976 nice abena! you might want to add what IDR means.]]> 2021-04-20 19:17:36 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439635976 Justin. Either a **** or ***** I saw a grammar mistake, but I like the idea. Also what if your a person who likes long books, if the book is really short then you might feel unhappy that it ended and you can't read anymore. It's pursuading but I would read a chapter book. Nice persuasive essay~!~ https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439636252 2021-04-20 19:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439636252 Delayni https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439639262 Great job Abena! ]]> 2021-04-20 19:18:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439639262 RISHIK https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439639848 where it says it will effect them not the next generation it is kind of confusing ]]> 2021-04-20 19:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439639848 Daniel https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439640836 I like how you gave a very good reason saying you are a student so you had this before]]> 2021-04-20 19:18:48 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439640836 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439642191
Good reasons, I agree with you.
Nice work Scarlett,  just make sure you spell correctly and capitalization is capitalize
]]> 2021-04-20 19:19:07 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439642191 Will https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439643121 ⭐⭐⭐⭐! I like how you included information why you think dogs are the best pets!]]> 2021-04-20 19:19:19 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439643121 Whitney https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439643452 I like it but I think you should add what IDR means]]> 2021-04-20 19:19:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439643452 I like it but it persad https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439643636 2021-04-20 19:19:27 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439643636 **** https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439644041 i think that you do a good job on your reasons]]> 2021-04-20 19:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439644041 scarlett borger i think you did a good job on your reasons https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439645752 ****]]> 2021-04-20 19:19:59 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439645752 colton https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439648878 nice reasons i like how you included how people can loose there jobs]]> 2021-04-20 19:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439648878 that was awesome kyle you did persuade me to think kids can be presedent i give you 4 stars haylee https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439649041 2021-04-20 19:20:44 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439649041 Lucas https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439650421 I like how you perswayed the reader  at the end of the book]]> 2021-04-20 19:21:03 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439650421 Kyle https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439653607 I really like it safa]]> 2021-04-20 19:21:47 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439653607 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439654995 you did a good job stating your reasons
****]]> 2021-04-20 19:22:08 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439654995 Whitney https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439654999 I thin]]> 2021-04-20 19:22:08 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439654999 I LOVE IT SCARLETT! 10 out of 10! https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439658935 Abena.]]> 2021-04-20 19:22:59 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439658935 Adhvaita https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439659611 nice title scarlett! try to make it longer.

]]> 2021-04-20 19:23:09 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439659611 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439659633 i think your story was convincing
***]]> 2021-04-20 19:23:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439659633 Ronav https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439661086 Love it :D]]> 2021-04-20 19:23:31 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439661086 Kyle https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439661115 It was littel persuasive]]> 2021-04-20 19:23:31 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439661115 Justin https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439663245 **** stars. I saw many grammar mistakes and places that should have commas and periods. It was persuading though and I was persuaded. Nice persuasive essay~!~]]> 2021-04-20 19:24:02 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439663245 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439666124 I like the story , but it has less than 2 reasons , I would like if you had more . I would rate it ****]]> 2021-04-20 19:24:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439666124 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439668270 i think you could make it more perswasive
***]]> 2021-04-20 19:25:16 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439668270 Nicki https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439670974 i argee  that was very 

Persuasive

]]> 2021-04-20 19:25:54 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439670974 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439671038 i agree with haylee your reasons were great
****]]> 2021-04-20 19:25:55 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439671038 Kyle https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439671930 that was very good but can you make it a little longer?]]> 2021-04-20 19:26:09 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439671930 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439671994 Great spelling Rishik]]> 2021-04-20 19:26:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439671994 I LOVE IT ADHVAITA! 10 out of 10! from Abena. https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439672116 2021-04-20 19:26:11 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439672116 Daniel very cool topic Kyle I love your Ideas about your story. https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439672481 2021-04-20 19:26:17 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439672481 Whitney I like how you added what happens if school started later https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439672914 2021-04-20 19:26:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439672914 Yeah I agree with Scarlette. https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439674933 from Abena.]]> 2021-04-20 19:26:55 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439674933 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439676632 thanks for the feedback evrybody but make sure you tell me who you are]]> 2021-04-20 19:27:19 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439676632 COOL! :) https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439677757 Abena.]]> 2021-04-20 19:27:34 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439677757 Ronav https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439678715 super topic kyle!]]> 2021-04-20 19:27:48 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439678715 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439678910 Thanks for the feedback everyone but make sure your putting your names in the notes.]]> 2021-04-20 19:27:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439678910 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439679771 Nice work Adhvaita just make sure there is not any reasons in the opening]]> 2021-04-20 19:28:03 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439679771 haylee https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439682827 i thought that was awesome and I WANT MY CANDY so i agree]]> 2021-04-20 19:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439682827 Lucas https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439683342 Good job kyle thats really funny I enjoyed it]]> 2021-04-20 19:28:54 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439683342 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439685243 thanks]]> 2021-04-20 19:29:21 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439685243 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439685380 Great work on why people should stop littering ]]> 2021-04-20 19:29:23 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439685380 Ronav https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439688777 the first page and the second one have different fonts]]> 2021-04-20 19:30:13 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439688777 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439695656 I like it , but make sure not to put reasons in the opening ! 
I would rate it ***]]> 2021-04-20 19:31:59 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1439695656 Will https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1448677536 Nice! I would rate it ⭐⭐⭐. I know adults that are presidents sometimes make bad decisions but , we're kids. Kids probably make just as many if not more mistakes than adults.]]> 2021-04-22 18:01:51 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1448677536 Whitney https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449019295 Cool!]]> 2021-04-22 19:12:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449019295 haylee https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449019881 you can put my stars right on this message]]> 2021-04-22 19:12:30 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449019881 Delayni https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449021257 I agree with your persuasive.]]> 2021-04-22 19:12:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449021257 Daniel https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449023650 I agree with you will I think people should have some exercise every day ]]> 2021-04-22 19:13:23 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449023650 Ruby: i think you should explain why dogs help people with disability's https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449024569

]]> 2021-04-22 19:13:35 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449024569 Nicki https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449025170 you did a good job I like how you mention the black and white eggs]]> 2021-04-22 19:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449025170 haylee https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449026399 i think your story is awesome it realy persuaded me]]> 2021-04-22 19:14:01 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449026399 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449026578 I like the essay a lot , the only confusion I have is when you " I think what matters are the differences on the outside " I think you meant " I think what matters are the differences on the inside " but I like it a lot i would rate it ***** because i think the same]]> 2021-04-22 19:14:04 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449026578 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449026966 Great Eric, I agree school should start later so we can have more sleep and be more active]]> 2021-04-22 19:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449026966 colton https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449027746 you didnt really pursuay me can you ad a little more like how the can't learn]]> 2021-04-22 19:14:20 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449027746 eric https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449028577 ****, there are not many reasons onto why parents should not eat kids candy but other than that its good

]]> 2021-04-22 19:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449028577 Ronav rsinga6524 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449029639 I like how you put some different dog breeds and maybe you could take out the part were you say "in my opinion, you should get a golden retriever because I lived with one and I think some people won't like it because it sheds and its big
  ]]> 2021-04-22 19:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449029639 Delayni https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449034463 I think you should add more reasons why we need more breaks in school.]]> 2021-04-22 19:15:57 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449034463 Will https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449034597 I think you include more writing. Otherwise I think ⭐⭐⭐.]]> 2021-04-22 19:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449034597 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449034607 I agree kids should be presidents too.]]> 2021-04-22 19:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449034607 Daniel https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449036519 I like your witting but go and double check you spacing but other then that great work!]]> 2021-04-22 19:16:29 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449036519 Nicki https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449037198 like your essay a lot it's very clear  ]]> 2021-04-22 19:16:40 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449037198 Justin https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449038265 ***** or 4.90. It was awesome, I enjoyed reading who you should get a dog]]> 2021-04-22 19:16:55 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449038265 Lucas https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449038720 Maybe at the end of the essay you could write I hope otherwise amazing job]]> 2021-04-22 19:17:03 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449038720 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449038854 Safa great work, I agree we should have screen that don't hurt our eyes because it is already so bad to have glasses]]> 2021-04-22 19:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449038854 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449040448 i think you did a great job this convinced me in a hot second and you had many good reasons to back up your oppion]]> 2021-04-22 19:17:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449040448 Delayni https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449041532 I think it's pretty good! Great job Safa. *****5 stars*****]]> 2021-04-22 19:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449041532 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449045165 I have a lot of opinions on the essay . First you did not add more than 2 reasons on your essay . Second there is no closing to wrap up the essay . Third your opening is no that convining . I would rate it **]]> 2021-04-22 19:18:34 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449045165 GREAT JOB DELAYNI!! :) https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449047829 From Abena. 5 stars *****]]> 2021-04-22 19:19:13 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449047829 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449049736 I agree not to judge them by their skin. It isn't very nice at all]]> 2021-04-22 19:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449049736 Delayni https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449050189 I think you should add punctuation to your "I" and put punctuation where your sentences are stopping, but good story Scarlett!]]> 2021-04-22 19:19:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449050189 Daniel https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449054320 I like your witting is nice and detail. ]]> 2021-04-22 19:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449054320 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449057898 2021-04-22 19:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449057898 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449058019 That is not that much information, Jason. You need your 2 paragraphs of why you think school should have more breaks and your closing. So I'm not really convinced ]]> 2021-04-22 19:21:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449058019 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449062565 I Ilike your essay but I think you should add more dogs lifstyles . 
I would rate it ***]]> 2021-04-22 19:22:51 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449062565 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449064377 you are a good writer i like your sentences and think your essay is perwsasive heres your score
*****]]> 2021-04-22 19:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449064377 Abena: I like it but same thing as Colton it did'nt pursuay me either so I guess.... 3 stars *** sorry Eric. :( https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449068963 2021-04-22 19:24:19 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449068963 Daniel https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449069470 I love you topic I totally agree with you to get a dog ]]> 2021-04-22 19:24:27 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449069470 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449074310 WOW,Colton that was amazing.   It was very persuasive. ]]> 2021-04-22 19:25:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449074310 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449074829 i think you did your best but could of done a little better. because you did not have many reasons and i was not perwadid and i did not understand the essay but heres a three ***]]> 2021-04-22 19:25:28 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449074829 Delayni https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449079161 The puncuation is pretty good! Also I agree with your persuasive writing!]]> 2021-04-22 19:26:34 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449079161 eric eguo7264 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449080059 4 stars, but i cant read some of the text.

]]> 2021-04-22 19:26:48 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449080059 Daniel https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449080390 I think you should make it a little bit more persuasive]]> 2021-04-22 19:26:53 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449080390 colton https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449081258 thats amazing you defenetly pursyaded me]]> 2021-04-22 19:27:07 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449081258 Lucas https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449086016 Amazing kyle I thought it was super funny]]> 2021-04-22 19:28:16 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449086016 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449087358 Aww thanks guys !]]> 2021-04-22 19:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449087358 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449089558 I like the essay a lot but I would remove the pictures because i can't read it . i rate it ***]]> 2021-04-22 19:29:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449089558 scarlett https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449092472 GREAT JOB you did amazing safa just make sure that every sentence after a period starts with a capatalized letter otherwise this is awsome here ya go
****]]> 2021-04-22 19:29:57 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449092472 nicki https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449093455 i like it. l like the last slide when there's all the picture of guni pigs]]> 2021-04-22 19:30:12 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449093455 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449098431 Great will Everyone should at least do some exercise ]]> 2021-04-22 19:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449098431 Delayni https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449100417 Yes, we need to be president.]]> 2021-04-22 19:31:57 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449100417 colton https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449103489 nice job justin]]> 2021-04-22 19:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449103489 colton https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449105247 you really pursyade me]]> 2021-04-22 19:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449105247 haylee https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449107603 that was so good rishik]]> 2021-04-22 19:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449107603 ,mmor https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449110211 olease add more 1 star]]> 2021-04-22 19:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449110211 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449112496 I like it a lot all i think you should remove is the part "GUINEA PIGS ARE THE BEST PETS EVER !!!!!!!!" It does'nt go with your essay i rate it ****]]> 2021-04-22 19:35:02 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1449112496 Justin https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453352285 ***** Awsome Daniel, I love how you added the names of good dog breeds to choose from. You may need to add some things dogs can help people with disabilitys with though. So I would like you to make that. Other then that, Amazing essay!]]> 2021-04-23 19:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453352285 Ruby https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453355687 i like your reasons ]]> 2021-04-23 19:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453355687 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453355787 I liked how you explained dogs are the best pets]]> 2021-04-23 19:24:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453355787 Will https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453355922 𝘠𝘰𝘶 𝘥𝘦𝘧𝘪𝘯𝘪𝘵𝘦𝘭𝘺 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘴𝘶𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘥 𝘮𝘦! 𝘐 𝘢𝘨𝘳𝘦𝘦 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘺𝘰𝘶! 𝘔𝘢𝘺𝘣𝘦 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘭𝘶𝘥𝘦 𝘢 𝘵𝘢𝘥 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘰𝘯𝘴 𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘰𝘸 𝘵𝘰 𝘩𝘦𝘭𝘱. 𝘖𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘸𝘪𝘴𝘦 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 𝘍𝘪𝘷𝘦 𝘚𝘵𝘢𝘳𝘴!]]> 2021-04-23 19:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453355922 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453356134 Good job dubble check some spelling]]> 2021-04-23 19:24:51 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453356134 colton https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453357084 like your topic you pursyade my alot]]> 2021-04-23 19:25:09 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453357084 dfelde9216 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453359017 I definitley agree with you Shreeya!]]> 2021-04-23 19:25:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453359017 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453361245 Very true Nicki !!! You def persuaded me . Nothing needed to change . I rate it *****]]> 2021-04-23 19:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453361245 Ruby https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453362210 i think your closing needs more details]]> 2021-04-23 19:26:41 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453362210 colton https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453363250 i like your topic very much and you defenetly pursuayd me]]> 2021-04-23 19:26:58 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453363250 Daniel https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453364992 nice topic ronav and I like your reasons]]> 2021-04-23 19:27:26 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453364992 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453368458 I like your reasons]]> 2021-04-23 19:28:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453368458 dfelde9216 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453371414 I totally agree Ronav!]]> 2021-04-23 19:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453371414 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453374856 Really nice Summer !!! I dont think you need to change any thing , Btw I liked the pics . I rate it *****]]> 2021-04-23 19:29:29 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453374856 colton https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453377041 very nice topic you really pursuayd me]]> 2021-04-23 19:30:09 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453377041 Daniel same as ruby https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453377819 2021-04-23 19:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453377819 dfelde9216 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453378311 Love it Summer! I actually agree too!]]> 2021-04-23 19:30:31 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453378311 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453378439 Great ayesha I agree]]> 2021-04-23 19:30:33 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453378439 dfelde9216 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453385604 I really agree with your persuasive essay! Keep up the great work Nicki!]]> 2021-04-23 19:32:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453385604 Summer syip4151 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453386758 I agree Lucas, that people should pick up their own trash]]> 2021-04-23 19:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453386758 Daniel https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453389337 I like that you are trying to help the earth by picking up trash very nice topic]]> 2021-04-23 19:33:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453389337 Safa https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453389397 Its good . Agreed with scarlett , but make sure you add at least 2 reasons and also you wrote "Animals could get sick or die " twice !]]> 2021-04-23 19:33:51 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453389397 dfelde9216 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453389834  Cutest yet!! I totally agree with your persuasive essay Haylee!!]]> 2021-04-23 19:33:59 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453389834 Lucas https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453391781 Nice opening paragraph may just add a few more reasons and try to think of one more thing you could put in you closing paragraph]]> 2021-04-23 19:34:33 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453391781 Lucas https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453443367 Amazing closing paragraph just check some spelling]]> 2021-04-23 19:50:28 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453443367 lucas https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453456770 Really good job so good persuasive essay]]> 2021-04-23 19:54:49 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453456770 lucas https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453460967 really like it so good job eric]]> 2021-04-23 19:56:15 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453460967 Lucas https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453473207 Amazing persuasive essay scarlett]]> 2021-04-23 20:00:21 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1453473207 Will https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1460954131 I totally agree with you! One of my ideas was also to write about that, and I did! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 5 stars!]]> 2021-04-26 18:05:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1460954131 Ayesha atariq6616 https://padlet.com/amanda_munson/u5j8xn7903i8xi9k/wish/1466116957 You didnt really persuade me because i like chapter books more, but your reasons were still good.

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