ENL1211 Writing Padlet T2 by Adibah Mutalib https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57 Write a paragraph of about 150-180 words on a paragraph outline which you have completed on Canvas (Practice 2c & 3). Ensure that in your paragraph, you include a clear and effective topic sentence, 3 main points with their explanations and details, and one concluding sentence to close your paragraph. Write in your group's name as the subject. en-us 2017-01-18 02:59:41 UTC 2025-11-23 12:02:17 UTC hello@padlet.com Peer Review Activity adibahmutalib https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632166399 Now, choose one of your friends' paragraph. Each student is to review a paragraph and answer the questions in the peer editing form attached.]]> 2023-06-26 04:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632166399 Paragraph on Effects of Being Abused suryathedabbingking https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632177414 There are many effects on victims - particularly teens - being abused, in physical and psychological manner; we will cover both of them. Physically, they may experience bruised lips and eyes as common symptoms; while severe cases can result in permanent scars or burnt marks from past abuse. Emotionally, they often distance themselves from friends and family, fearing relationships due to the trauma they've endured. Remaining on high alert, they struggle to let their guard down and may even choose to isolate themselves without informing their loved ones. Psychologically, the impact is significant, hindering their ability to form emotional connections and causing frequent panic attacks and haunting memories which can be daunting to navigate in their everyday lives. Sharing their experiences becomes difficult, leaving them stuck in the past and unable to move forward in life. Addressing these effects is crucial, as abuse can greatly impact their future. It's essential to intervene before the situation worsens to a stage where nothing can be done. ]]> 2023-06-26 04:46:36 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632177414 Disadvantage of Living in a Rental Home https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632179193 The drawbacks of renting a property are not insignificant. The absence of long-term stability and control over the living space is a big disadvantage. As a renter, you are bound by the decisions and guidelines made by the property owner or landlord, which may limit your ability to change or modify the property as you see fit. It is also difficult to budget and make long-term plans when renting because rent hikes are frequently unpredictable. Additionally, the ephemeral nature of rental contracts may result in frequent migrations, which can be upsetting and emotionally exhausting. Renters do not benefit from the potential financial gains of asset appreciation or equity building, unlike homeowners. At the end of the day, not owning a home can make people feel less rooted.

Dilshan
Joshua ]]> 2023-06-26 04:48:54 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632179193 Factors of Why Students Drop out of College(Thanesh) https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632182274 There are several reasons that students drop out of college, Firstly students have financial problems because Many students struggle to afford the cost of college and may accumulate debt that they cannot repay. Some students may also prioritize working and earning money over studying. Thus students also face academic challenges, Some students may not be prepared for the level of work or the expectations of college. They may face difficulties with the curriculum, the grading system, or the time management skills required for college success. Therefore, the most common issue that facing is social or personal issues, Some students may have trouble adjusting to the new social environment of college. They may feel isolated, homesick, or unsupported by their peers or faculty. They may also face family, health, or emotional problems that affect their studies. In conclusion, students may overcome their problems by finding the solution to their problem.]]> 2023-06-26 04:52:08 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632182274 Advantages of Using a Cashless Payment (Kaung Zin) https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632182457 There are several advantages to using cashless payment rather than cash payment. Cashless payments can offer unparalleled convenience. With digital payment options, you can make payments quickly and easily. You don't need to count money, deal with loose change, or make frequent trips to ATM anymore. Cashless payments provide enhanced security compared to cash transactions. You can trace your transaction history easily which reduces the risk of theft or loss. There's also a lot of security features like encryption, two-factor authentication, and biometric verification, making it more difficult for unauthorized individuals to access your funds. You can easily track your expenses as cashless payments generate electric records. So, you can review your transaction history and analyze your spending patterns. Doing so can help you make informed financial decisions and identify areas where you can save or reduce expenses. In conclusion, by using cashless payments, you can not only make convenient and safe cash transactions digitally but also become financially responsible. ]]> 2023-06-26 04:52:18 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632182457 NASSER, TIMA, SAW https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632183980 There are many factors why students drop out of college. One main point is that students often face financial constraints. These include high tuition fees and living expenses. There are also limited job opportunities for the students to have an income which can make it difficult to continue their education. Another main point is that students sometimes have unrealistic expectations, such as overwhelming workloads, college not being as fun as expected, and unrealistic job prospects. Lastly, academic challenges can also lead to dropout, with students struggling to keep up with their coursework, feeling overwhelmed and stressed, and not receiving adequate support. In conclusion, the decision of students to drop out of college is influenced by a combination of factors and understanding them is important in developing effective strategies and support systems to promote student success in higher education]]> 2023-06-26 04:53:57 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632183980 https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632193508 Joshua 

1.Topic paragraph : Factors of why students drop out of college

2.Topic sentence: there are several reasons that students drop out of college
  1. There are several reasons 
  2. Yes 
  3. Yes
  4. Yes
  5. There are examples for each point in the paragraph 
  6. No
]]> 2023-06-26 05:04:04 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632193508 Peer review Yutaro https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632205187 1, Factors of why students drop out of college

2, There are several reasons that students drop out of college.

3, Yes
4, Yes
5, Yes
 In conclusion, students may overcome their problem by finding the solution to their problem

6,Yes
7, Third paragraph is good because supporting sentence is easy to understand thanks to the detailed example.
8, No]]> 2023-06-26 05:15:07 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632205187 Surya suryathedabbingking https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632209098 1. Advantages of Using Cashless Payment
2. There are several advantages to using cashless payment rather than cash payment.
3. Yes. The controlling idea is the convenience, safety, and monitoring of finances.
4. Yes
5. Yes
6. Yes
7. I like how the main points are explained in detail which makes it easier to understand them. 
8. No]]> 2023-06-26 05:18:39 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632209098 1.Advantages of using a Cashless Payment.(By Saw) https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632210675 2. There are serveral advantages to using cashless payment rather than cash payment.

3. No

4.Yes

5.In conclusion, by using cashless payments, you can not only make convenient and safe cash transaction digitally but also become financially responsible.
6.yes
7.very detailed and straight to the point
8.no]]> 2023-06-26 05:20:13 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632210675 Peer Editing Form (By Kaung Zin) 26/4 https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632210936 1. Effects of being abused
2. There are many effects on victims - particularly teens - being abused, in physical and psychological manner; we will cover both of them.
3. No
Suggestions: Abused victims can implicit certain behaviors and wounds not only physically but also psychologically. 
4. Yes
5. No (It appeared to be a solution rather than a concluding sentence)
6. Yes
7. Very realistic and straight to the point
8. Not really


 ]]> 2023-06-26 05:20:32 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632210936 Peer Review by Shi Ya https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632211357 1. Topic of Paragraph: Disadvantage of Living in a Rental Home
2. Topic Sentence: The drawbacks of renting a property are not insignificant. 
3. Yes
4. Yes
5. Yes
6. Yes
7. Acknowledging the fact that people feel less rooted
8. No]]> 2023-06-26 05:20:56 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632211357 Peer Review Activity https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632211385 1. Advantages of using a cashless payment
2. There are several advantages to using cashless payment rather than cash payment.
3. Yes
4. Yes
5. Yes
6. No because for all supporting ideas didn't start up with transition word.
7. All the supporting ideas are good and cleared.
8. No]]> 2023-06-26 05:20:58 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632211385 Peer review nasser https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632214011 1 Effects of being abused.
2 There are many effects on victims - particularly teens - being abused, in physical and psychological manner; we will cover both of them.
3 Yes. There are many effects on victims - particularly teens - being abused, in physical and psychological manner
4 Yes.
5 Yes. It's essential to intervene before the situation worsens to a stage where nothing can be done. 
6.Yes
7. The amount of detail used in the paragraph 
8. No

]]> 2023-06-26 05:23:47 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632214011 Dilshan https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632214619 Factors of why students drop out of college

There are several reasons that students drop out of college.

Yes
Yes
Yes

States that: students may overcome their problems by finding the solution to their problem.

Yes


]]> 2023-06-26 05:24:30 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632214619 Reader: Tima https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632215152 1)Cashless Payment (Kaung Zin)
2)There are several advantages to using cashless payment rather than cash payment.
3)yes. Several advantages to using cashless payment.
4)Yes
5)Yes. In conclusion, by using cashless payments, you can not only make convenient and safe cash transactions digitally but also become financially responsible.
6)Yes
7)The author is explaining the different advantages of cashless payments.

8)Yes.
]]> 2023-06-26 05:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632215152 Surya suryathedabbingking https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632217817 1. Disadvantages of Living in a Rental Home
2. The drawbacks of renting a property are not insignificant.
3. The instability and the unknown conditions of living in a rental home.
4. Yes
5. Yes
6. Yes
7. I like how concise and connected the main ideas are to the topic sentence.
8. No]]> 2023-06-26 05:28:13 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/u5gc4tm3vc57/wish/2632217817