Story Writing by Pete Curtis

What To Include In A Story...

pcurtis6 — 2015-06-12 10:42:52 UTC

Next week you will be writing a story. Use this wall here to list things that you should try to include within your story. Think carefully about what makes a story lively, interesting, exciting and paints a great picture in your reader's mind

Josh.U

2015-06-12 10:47:06 UTC

You should add adjectives.

Olivia G

2015-06-12 10:47:37 UTC

If you use short, snappy sentences, it makes the story more drimatic

Holly L

2015-06-12 10:48:00 UTC

You should use similes, alliteration and good vocobulary.

Rochelle

2015-06-12 10:48:17 UTC

You need to use WOW words, punctuation, adverbs, verbs, interesting connectives, metaphors and similes. You also need an attention grabbing plot.

Izzy

2015-06-12 10:48:26 UTC

You should include connectives, vocabulary, openers, punctuation, similes, adverbs and adjectives.

Holly.D

2015-06-12 10:48:33 UTC

The things you should use in a story is Metaphor, Punctuation, Connectives, Verb, , Nouns, Adjectives, Sentence Starters and finally some Excellent Endings.

Jacques

2015-06-12 10:49:03 UTC

You should use short sentances to build up tention.

Sam

2015-06-12 10:50:18 UTC

Short snappy sentences are good for tension building and keeping the reader into the book. Also, a good basic plan will help you the most.

Dayah Lewis

2015-06-12 10:50:34 UTC

should include some short snappy sentences to pull people towards your writing you should also have a lot of of interesting paragraphs.

Holly.S

2015-06-12 10:50:40 UTC

You should include Similes, Strong Connectives, Metaphors, Powerful Adverbs and Different sentence openers.

Jack Reed

2015-06-12 10:52:42 UTC

You need to describe all of the character/.

Ruth

2015-06-12 10:53:28 UTC

You should always use as much detail as you can, and make it exiting

OLIVIA S

2015-06-12 10:53:37 UTC

A good story has lots and lots of adjectives to tell the reader about the characters

Leo le Ray.

2015-06-12 10:53:41 UTC

adverbs

Jake

2015-06-12 10:54:05 UTC

You need to use lots of detail and describe the setting.

Bella

2015-06-12 10:54:44 UTC

In a story you need to use: similies ,paragraphs,adjectives,adverbs and anything you know from V.C.O.P.

Huw

2015-06-12 10:56:14 UTC

You need to include descriptive language

Victoria

2015-06-12 10:56:20 UTC

In a story you need to include: paragraphs, adjectives, verbs and connectives

Benoit

2015-06-12 11:00:07 UTC

You need detail and adjectives.