Jude A by Jude August https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2 Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 16:47:52 UTC 2021-06-21 13:52:40 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/935937324/8acb872e0aacffcda7bc31e5ac04072e/DwE8GKKX4AUgQw0.jpg 2 Stars and a Wish 27callen1 https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1066909336 I liked the last part of your snapshot of how the is no elevator in life I also enjoyed the inner thoughts you had. My wish is that there could have been more description on the mountian. ]]> 2021-01-08 13:38:15 UTC https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1066909336 Meg 27mcoppockhuegel https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1075913522 One thing I like, is how well you describe what was happening in your mind. It sounds so real and so professional. It's like I'm in your head when I read it. I also like how you reference different moments and different literature and songs. It puts a better picture of how you felt in the moment. It was hard to think of a wish but, I came up with more description words of all of the different things you saw that you were familiar with. For example, you could describe what the other mountains looked like from your view .]]> 2021-01-11 19:35:14 UTC https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1075913522 Snapshot 27alourenco https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1075933400 I like the part when you made the connection to the Led Zeppelin it made it more dramatic.
I also liked when you made a connection to a car breaking down I thought it showed the emotion in the part of the story. 
My “wish” is that when i was reading i got a little confused to what was happening but it was still  a really nice writing piece.]]> 2021-01-11 19:39:30 UTC https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1075933400 will https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1080099044 i love that you talk about your mind and what was happening in side. i also like when you describe were you were in your head. 
my wish is you told what the mount was like. ]]> 2021-01-12 18:44:11 UTC https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1080099044 anshul 27arajadhyx https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1080503069 I like how you discriptivley described the height and the fear andthoughts giong through your haed . i also love the story in general it was very nice i likefear and slight edge. I think you can weork out how yo satructre your story maybe make it a little bit less lengthier ]]> 2021-01-12 20:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1080503069 Persuasive Essay 27mcoppockhuegel https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1517970370 Your essay made a very good point and it was enjoyable to read. It sounded incredible and gave me lots to think about. I have no wish for you. It was great!]]> 2021-05-12 15:36:19 UTC https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1517970370 Joey E https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1610222822 Hey Jude, Your story was really awesome! One of the things I liked was how you used wild and outlandish characters and machines, it made the whole thing a lot of fun! I also liked how you created a descriptive and wild world, you did a great job describing everything. I really have no wishes because your story was amazing!  ]]> 2021-06-16 15:17:25 UTC https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1610222822 Andrew Lourenco 27alourenco https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1614435770 Hey Jude, I liked the theme of your story I thought it was pretty cool how it was kind of a matrix spin off. My second star is that I liked how one of your tips was to eat a lot of citrus fruits i thought that that was pretty funny. My wish is that I got a little confused in the part where you were talking about Santa I didn’t really understand that bit, but overall great job.]]> 2021-06-18 14:36:37 UTC https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1614435770 Anshul 27arajadhyx https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1614550461 this was a really creative piece and I love how there was some actule facts in this it also brought everything together .this was also very well put together and very Jude like this really was awesome .but ok feel like that there could have been more descriptiveness toy make it more juicy.]]> 2021-06-18 15:41:29 UTC https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1614550461 Jack 27jheiberg https://padlet.com/27jaugust/u3bcd0skxrplfvo2/wish/1617694433 hi Jude i loved the pictures and how you explained the tips. 
Also liked how you talked about you need to get outside because I also get told that.
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