T3 - Composition 1 by Felipe

Felipe - MODEL

fpalmaka — 2020-10-07 12:12:46 UTC

INSTRUCTIONS

fpalmaka — 2020-10-07 12:16:20 UTC

Alessandra

fpalmaka — 2020-10-07 12:20:47 UTC

On weekends, I always spend a lot time with my family. On Saturday morning, I have breakfast with my parents. After that, I play with my dog and watch TV. In the afternoon, I
watch TV with my parents. On Saturday night, we have pizza for dinner.
On Sunday, I usually visit my grandparent’s house. On Sunday I wake up late, I lunch, listen to music, read a book and watch TV.
My friend Andrea like surf the internet and watch Enola Homes on weekends.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (sim): 3,0/3,0

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 10,0

Luiza Culbert

2020-10-08 17:06:43 UTC

On weekends out of quarantine, I would usually go down with my friends in the building, go out to restaurants with my family or go to a friend's house to spend the night, but now, in quarantine, I usually get moldy on the couch, to be very sincere ksks, i stay on the pc watching YouTube or netiflix, as a lot, i make calls with my friends, or even spend the afternoon at the home of some of them, i go to the market and square.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (sim): 3,0/3,0

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 10,0

Vinicius

2020-10-08 17:06:54 UTC

Hello i am Vinicius. On Wekend i play Soccer , i usually play with my friends in the afternoon i wath tv with my family we loves action movies in the morning i and my family my friendds loves play videogames.
How abot you? What do you usually do on wekend.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (parcialmente): 2,0/3,0 (A palavra ' I ' deve ser sempre escrita com letra maiúscula; corrigir a escrita de 'friendds', após um plural não usamos o -s, apenas para he, she, it).

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 9,0

Rafael Oliveira

2020-10-08 17:12:36 UTC

On weekends,I usually go to street fear,i eat pastel also i buy vegetables and salmon.
In my house i play computer games,plastation games and i watch youtube videos.I watch Netflix,i play with my cats and visit my grandparents.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (parcialmente): 2,5/3,0 (A palavra ' I ' deve ser sempre escrita com letra maiúscula.

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 9,5

Luca

2020-10-08 17:13:42 UTC

Cristiano Rodrigues

2020-10-08 17:16:50 UTC

On Saturdays, i go lunch with my family, watch a movie, have dinner, maybe watch some series episodes, and go to sleep.

On Sundays, i wake up for have breakfeast, than i take a shower, go play videogames, lunch with my family, go to grandma’s house,watch some series episodes, than i dinner and i go to bed.

My friend, Wake up, have breakfeast, play soccer, lunch with he’s family, watch movies, have dinner and go to sleep.

I hope you like it! (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (parcialmente): 2,0/3,0 (A palavra ' I ' deve ser sempre escrita com letra maiúscula; sempre que escrever de uma outra pessoa, atenção para incluir -s ou -es nos verbos, exemplo: my friend wakes up, has breakfast, plays soccer)

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 9,0

Mathias

fpalmaka — 2020-10-08 18:44:53 UTC

sarah (oficial)

2020-10-13 22:52:18 UTC

hi, my name is sarah and today i'm going to talk about what i do on my weekend ... well i usually didn't go out much because of the quarantine and blábláblá ... but last weekend i did some really cool things .. saturday i learned how to make cookies with my mom's best friend the debora was super fun and then as a custodian she went to church at 6 pm and stayed there until 8 pm just after i went to the rabibes "dinner" then i went back to the house and went to sleep the next day (sunday) i went to the water park i had a lot of fun there i went in a lot of toys and when i went in a super tall toy i ended up peeing in my pants rsrsrs, soon after on the way we stopped at a place to eat something. and that was my weekend

Greta

greta0061417 — 2020-10-15 16:29:13 UTC

Hi, my name is Greta and today I’m going to tell you about what I do on my weekends.
On Saturday morning, I have breakfast with my family. After that, I play with my sister and go to the pool. In the afternoon I lunch with my parents. On Saturday night I have pizza for dinner.
On Sunday I visit my grandparents.
On Sunday, morning I wake up early. In the afternoon I lunch with my Family after, I play with my cousins and watch a movie. On Sunday night I eat pasta.
My friend and I like to play Roblox, hide and seek, we do TikTok and we like to watch movies eating Popcorn.
Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (sim): 3,0/3,0

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 10,0

Isadora

2020-10-15 17:31:45 UTC

Hi my name is Isadora and today I going tell about I do on the weekends.
On Saturday I sometimes skating with my dad or I watching movies and series with my mom. Sometimes I do my homework and call to my friends.
On Sunday I usually goes to the pool or visiting my grandparentes with my cousins.
My frriends and I would like talking with other.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (parcialmente): 2,0/3,0 (após o uso de ' I ', o verbo não recebe -s ou -es, isso acontece apenas para he, she, it; Corrigir a escrita da palavra 'grandparentes; A palavra 'what' está faltando após 'about' no início do texto.

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 9,0

Marcella do Prado Thomaz

2020-10-15 17:57:02 UTC

Hi, my name is Marcella and today. I’m going to tell you about what I do on my weekends. On Saturday morning, i have breakfast with my family. At lunch at my grandmother's house. At afternoon I go to the pool, play with my friends in the building or watch TikTok or Movie. At night I have dinner watch something and go to sleep. On Sanday i have breakfast and sometimes I go to the pool. The afternoon has a barbecue with my brothers and play with my friends in the building. A night I dine and and sleep.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (parcialmente): 2,0/3,0 (antes de afternoon, usar 'in the'. Há repetição da palavra 'and' no final do texto. Corrigir a escrita da palavra 'Sanday'. A palavra ' I ' deve ser sempre escrita com letra maiúscula.

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 9,0

Beatriz Nalon

2020-10-22 11:37:57 UTC

My name is Beatriz. I am 10 years old and I am going to write about my weekends.
On Saturdays I wake up later, at 9 am, because I don´t have school. After breakfast I play and watch TV. I have lunch with my parents and after lunch I play more .
On Sundays I also wake up late and play and watch TV with my mother, I also go to the swimming pool when it is hot. I have lunch at my grandmother's house. Sometimes at dinner we eat pizza together.
Sometimes on weekends I go to a friend's house and we play a lot . We also create shows and dance.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (sim): 3,0/3,0

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 10,0

Luca

2020-10-22 16:03:20 UTC

My name is Luca. i am 11 years old and I am goinf to write about my weekends.
On saturdays I wake up on 11 hours. I eat my breakfast, then I play videogame. I go to the pool with my friends. Then i go to my house, and i watch film with my mother. Then i sleep.
On Sundays i also wake up late and eat my breakfast. Then i play videogame. I play football with my friends on 14 hours.
On 17 i play volleyball. And 21 i eat and i see videos then 01 i sleep.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (parcialmente): 2,5/3,0. A palavra 'I' deve ser sempre escrita com letra maiúscula assim como os dias da semana.

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 9,5

William

2020-10-22 17:11:10 UTC

Hello my name is William i am 10 years old and today i will tell you what i do on my weekend.
On Saturday I wake up I have my breakfast I brush my teeth and I go to Cotia in São Paulo and then I have lunch and play video games for 2 hours later I play football until 6:00 pm Afterwards I have dinner, shower, brush my teeth and sleep .
On Sunday I wake up as my breakfast I brush my teeth, right after I ride my bike and after that I go to my cousin's house to play and then I have dinner I read my book I shower, I brush my teeth and I go to sleep.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (parcialmente): 2,5/3,0 - a falta no uso de pontuação faz o texto ficar cansativo, por exemplo, o uso de vírgulas é necessário nesta parte: I wake up I have my breakfast.

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (sim): 3,0/3,0

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 9,5

Giovanna do Prado Thomaz

2020-10-22 17:22:42 UTC

My name is Giovanna. I am 11 years old and will write about what I do on weekends.
On Saturdays I wake up between 8 am and 9:30 am, after waking up I will have breakfast with my family, I brush my teeth, I go through my cell phone, I go to my grandmother's house, lunch, I use some more on my cell phone and then I go back to my house I usually play with some friends from the condo, so I come home and take a shower, go to dinner, watch some TV and finally I go to sleep.
  On Sunday I wake up around 8:00 am and 9:30 am, I go to the pool when it's hot, I shower, I go to lunch, then either I go to the pool again or I'm going to play with some friends from the condo, I go to dinner, click on my cell phone, watch some TV and finally I go to sleep.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (sim): 3,0/3,0

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 10,0

Isabelle Bernardo Alves

2020-10-29 17:39:41 UTC

My name is Isabelle. I'm 12 years old and today I'm going to tell you what I do on my weekend.
Sometimes on Saturdays I go to the mall with my friends, but also on Saturdays I go to the home of a relative or stay at home. On Sundays there are times when I stay at home but on most Sundays I go to church.
Every weekend I have an appointment and there is always a change in the time I sleep and the time I wake up, but usually on Saturdays I wake up at 8:00 am so I can better enjoy the day. And on Sundays I usually wake up at 11:00 am, because the service starts at 7:00 pm so I leave early to allow time to go to my grandmother's house and have lunch. And I sleep about 2 am on Saturdays and 23 pm at night.

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (sim): 3,0/3,0

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 10,0

Mariana heins

2020-11-05 18:11:43 UTC

hi my name is mariana i am 10 years old, today i came to tell how is a typical weekend in brazil.
Usually people wake up have a breakfest and brush their teeth
After leave to the somewhere
usually a shopping, parks and etc.
after have a lunch and take ice cream;
the night go to the cinema or
watch tv whith the family then go to sleep

good tha´s what i think

Feedback:
- o escritor respondeu a pergunta proposta : descrever um típico final de semana (sim): 3,0/ 3,0

- o escritor desenvolveu a história de uma maneira cativante usando palavras que ajudem o texto fluir (sim): 3,0/3,0

- uso de vocabulário e gramática apropriados para o nível: (parcialmente): 2,5/3,0 . A palavra 'I' deve sempre ser escrita com letra maiúscula. A palavra 'that's' está incompleta. Faltam ponto final e início de frases com letra maiúscula.

- o nível de linguagem (formal ou informal) é apropriado: (sim): 1,0/1,0
Nota: 9,5