OUR INTRODUCTION RANKINGS by https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36 Ranking our favourite introductions en-us 2019-01-21 00:25:47 UTC 2019-01-21 04:26:37 UTC hello@padlet.com Entry 5 samchaninchina https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322544666 Our group liked how this story began in a mysterious way with a 'family' ghost. We thought that this would get the reader curious and make them read more.]]> 2019-01-21 00:27:19 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322544666 Entry 2 samchaninchina https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322544972 Our group loved how _________ made the reader ...]]> 2019-01-21 00:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322544972 Entry 1 samchaninchina https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322544986 Our group thought that the use of guided imagery was...]]> 2019-01-21 00:31:20 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322544986 Entry 3 samchaninchina https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322544990 Our group thought that the use of _______ was ok...]]> 2019-01-21 00:31:23 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322544990 Entry 4 samchaninchina https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322545000 Our group didn't like this beginning: the quote was a bit cliche and didn't make us interested in knowing more.]]> 2019-01-21 00:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322545000 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564724 2019-01-21 03:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564724 Javier ong_you_kai_javier https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564758 2019-01-21 03:58:11 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564758 natalie // trixie // liying https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564772

]]> 2019-01-21 03:58:19 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564772 bangyao ll kalis ll jermaine https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564812 2019-01-21 03:58:38 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564812 Charmane https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564824 2019-01-21 03:58:47 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564824 Megan and Sarah https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564864 2019-01-21 03:59:01 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564864 ivan https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564886 2019-01-21 03:59:17 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564886 Adrielle https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564888 2019-01-21 03:59:18 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564888 Jarret https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564907 2019-01-21 03:59:29 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564907 enya https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564924 2019-01-21 03:59:38 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564924 Damon charmane_chu_ching_bee https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564938 2019-01-21 03:59:45 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564938 Charlene:) charlene_yingxuan https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564942 2019-01-21 03:59:47 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564942 Chloe ,Min yee ,Jiovann https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564975 Entry 4
Our group like  how this story began with  a bold opinion . As it clearly shows what the author is trying to say.]]> 2019-01-21 04:00:06 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322564975 gtfdrfedddefedfedfet https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565077 2019-01-21 04:00:38 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565077 Charlotte https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565080 2019-01-21 04:00:39 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565080 Jia En https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565094 2019-01-21 04:00:49 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565094 ENTRY 1 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565183 we thought that the paragraph was really descriptive as it used show not tell describing the character that kevin drew.]]> 2019-01-21 04:01:28 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565183 Louisa https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565217 2019-01-21 04:01:48 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565217 Fiona https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565219 2019-01-21 04:01:48 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565219 Entry form4: we like this as the introduction is short and sweet. https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565233 2019-01-21 04:02:00 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565233 Crispin and Yurong https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565282 2019-01-21 04:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565282 Entry charlene_yingxuan https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565308 Our group liked how the author described the action of the characters and how the author left the first paragraph on a cliffhanger so that the reader will be curious and want to read more.]]> 2019-01-21 04:02:42 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565308 Sheen Drexel https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565413 Entry form 3: We like this because it is a simple starting yet descriptive and also it is interesting, making us curious and want to find out more about what will happen next.]]> 2019-01-21 04:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565413 Entry 4: https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565451 The introduction is short but eye catching and unique as it starts with a quote/speech by someone .
usually the quote or a speech is in the middle or end of a story. Not at the introduction.]]> 2019-01-21 04:04:02 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565451 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565503 Our group liked story beginning number 2


]]> 2019-01-21 04:04:29 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565503 entry 1:We like the vivid words as it draws our attention and it draws us into the story. https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565569 2019-01-21 04:05:05 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565569 ddfwdsfssceddfsd https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565575 2019-01-21 04:05:08 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565575 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565586 our group liked the first story beginning that was taken from Or else the lightning God and other stories by Catherine Lim. ]]> 2019-01-21 04:05:15 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565586 Yi Xi, Melody and Jialu https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565594 Entry form 2:  We liked how the writer kept in suspense why the envelope came a day earlier and why couldn't a small card fit into the letterbox. What was in the envelope?]]> 2019-01-21 04:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565594 Entry number 2 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565737 The intro is mysterious and makes the reader wonder as to what the envelope in for and will thus make the reader read on.]]> 2019-01-21 04:06:28 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565737 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565748 we liked how the writer used alot of descriptive words and even used the show not tell technique to potray out what was happening]]> 2019-01-21 04:06:34 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565748 Our group liked entry number 2 the best. It descriptive and interesting https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565791 2019-01-21 04:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565791 ENTRY 4: https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565796 2019-01-21 04:06:43 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565796 Entry 2 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565804 This entry makes us want to find out what happens next more than the other entries. It is also very interesting. It makes the reader want to know what is in the envelope]]> 2019-01-21 04:06:47 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565804 Entry 1 charmane_chu_ching_bee https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565852 We didn't like this as much as the starting of the story: description of the drawing was honestly boring. But the word 'OUCH' in caps caught our attention. Let's just say that the start was boring but the end wasn't.]]> 2019-01-21 04:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322565852 We like it because its the most interesting and the entry is short and simple but has a lot of meaning and also there are the use of metaphors. https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566024 2019-01-21 04:08:31 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566024 Entry 5 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566157 Our group liked how the story started off with a family ghost. This made the introduction more mysterious.]]> 2019-01-21 04:08:56 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566157 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566163 this beginning of this story makes us want to continue reading the story.]]> 2019-01-21 04:08:58 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566163 entry 1: It was very descriptive and had many vivid adjectives https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566210 2019-01-21 04:09:19 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566210 Entry 2 ong_you_kai_javier https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566215 We like how the author said what the character did]]> 2019-01-21 04:09:23 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566215 Entry number:5 sage_cadence_koh_jia_en https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566274 We like it as it is unique and different from the others. 

]]> 2019-01-21 04:10:02 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566274 Entry 3 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566278 The introduction is unique and interesting as it starts with a description of a person. The introduction of the story also tells the reader what type of person he/she was and what he would usually do at times.]]> 2019-01-21 04:10:04 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566278 entry 4: It was short but interesting and had a deep meaning https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566292 2019-01-21 04:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566292 Entry 2 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566327 Our group loved the suspense as it makes the writer be interested in it]]> 2019-01-21 04:10:28 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566327 Entry 2:There are many descriptive adjectives that makes the story very interesting and engaging with the reader https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566371 2019-01-21 04:10:53 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566371 Entry 3 charlene_yingxuan https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566374 Our group liked how the author started the story informally. The author described his father's actions vividly.]]> 2019-01-21 04:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566374 entry 3: It was logical but not eye-catching https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566386 2019-01-21 04:11:04 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566386 OK? https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566419 2019-01-21 04:11:21 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566419 entry5: It was not logical https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566556 2019-01-21 04:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566556 ENTRY 4 https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566644 its simple n short]]> 2019-01-21 04:13:46 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322566644 hi peop ong_you_kai_javier https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322568099 2019-01-21 04:26:37 UTC https://padlet.com/samchaninchina/u32dvp1ctw36/wish/322568099