Memoir Elements - Class D by CHELSEA SMITH https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51 en-us 2021-11-30 18:31:15 UTC 2025-11-06 04:46:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921203618 they began shooting through the open windows ]]> 2021-11-30 19:03:35 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921203618 Memory https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921204182 ¨They begin shooting through the open windows]]> 2021-11-30 19:03:52 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921204182 all the time i was screaming at her, not to lose control, that she had to save our lives https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921204265 he described what he was doing, which was screaming ]]> 2021-11-30 19:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921204265 memory juice_wrld_and_Snot_are_goated_rappers https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921205328 all the time i was screaming at her ]]> 2021-11-30 19:04:27 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921205328 I remember us driving across the lawn. We could either be right, or neither and it makes little difference https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921205911 This is a memory because it says "I remember" and then it explains what their memory was]]> 2021-11-30 19:04:45 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921205911 "I'd told the fake cop that if there wasn't someone waiting I would crawl back and kill him." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921206061 This shows a memory because of the past tense words used in here. ]]> 2021-11-30 19:04:49 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921206061 "My memory was that I fell to the ground..." 2698005_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921206070 It starts off with "My memory", I think its pretty self explanatory]]> 2021-11-30 19:04:50 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921206070 "We made the mistake of stopping at a red light and were cornered immeditely by two boys, sixteen or so, dresses in starched jeans and jackets and sporting zip guns" https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921206488 it starts the memory and the story]]> 2021-11-30 19:05:01 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921206488 "we made the mistake of stopping at a red light and were cornered by two boys ,sixteen or so." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921207136 this memory explained where they were and how they got into that situation.]]> 2021-11-30 19:05:22 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921207136 I am so used to having a bullet in my neck that I never think of it; only when the subject comes up and someone-dull of doubt or amazement. 26601098 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921207143 This memory is in the story because it was the main point of the story and wanted to let the readers know how he is used to it.]]> 2021-11-30 19:05:22 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921207143 "we made the mistake of stopping at a red light and were concerned immediately by two boys, sixteen or so, dressed in starched jeans and jackets." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921207185 This is a memory because they're using past tense words, and talking about how it all began.]]> 2021-11-30 19:05:23 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921207185 ¨we made the mistake of stopping at a red light and we were cornered immediately by two boys sixteen or so dressed in starched jeans and sporting zip guns¨ 26601110 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921207319 it describes what he saw]]> 2021-11-30 19:05:27 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921207319 we made a mistake of stopping at a red light and were cornered immediately by two boys https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921207559 2021-11-30 19:05:34 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921207559 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921208042 Some of the differences in our memories are striking]]> 2021-11-30 19:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921208042 ¨Rosalind has written an essay about the event. One of the differences in our memory are striking particularly in difference, what we make or made of the shooting. ¨ 26601084_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921209798 it was an reflection on what happened ]]> 2021-11-30 19:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921209798 "We made the mistake of stopping at a red light and were cornered immediately by two boys, sixteen or so, dressed in starched jeans and jackets and sporting zip guns." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921210186 It shows how the attack started and how they looked like.

]]> 2021-11-30 19:06:50 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921210186 I'd told the fake cop that if there wasn't someone waiting I would crawl back and kill him. https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921212035 2021-11-30 19:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921212035 One bullet grazed my right shoulder. 26551033 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921212255 This shows a memory bc its using past tense words. ]]> 2021-11-30 19:07:52 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921212255 I fell to the floor pushed the gas pedal down with one hand, and with the other put the gear into drive till rosalind took over and drove us out there. https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921212529 This memory shows the things that he had to do to save him self.]]> 2021-11-30 19:07:59 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921212529 i stop tinkering, stop pressing buttons and checking ink. straighten up. https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921217272 he stops fooling around and realizes who he really was and what he does. ]]> 2021-11-30 19:10:05 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921217272 ¨the confusion cause a lump in my throat, a lilt in my voice¨ 26601110 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921217559 this shows how he was confused that kobe was calling him]]> 2021-11-30 19:10:15 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921217559 I'd told the fake cop that if there wasn't someone waiting I would crawl back and kill him, even if it was the last thing I did in this life 26601213 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921217660 It was a memory because of the past tense words.]]> 2021-11-30 19:10:19 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921217660 Allegorical tales to calm her in the moments she feels defeated https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921219015 This shows how Kobe's daughter is feeling before she reads one of his books]]> 2021-11-30 19:11:04 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921219015 "the confusion causes a lump in my throat" https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921219058 it shows emotion because it shows that he is confused]]> 2021-11-30 19:11:06 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921219058 the confusion causes a lump in my throat juice_wrld_and_Snot_are_goated_rappers https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921219148 2021-11-30 19:11:08 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921219148 "The confusion causes a lump in my throat, a lilt in my voice." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921219329 This quote shows the reader that Jason is kind of scared or nervous during the phone call. ]]> 2021-11-30 19:11:12 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921219329 "Um... I'm at my mom's house." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921219598 The emotion here is confusion and it is important to the memoir because the narrator is not sure who is calling and why they are asking.]]> 2021-11-30 19:11:21 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921219598 the confusion causes a lump in my throat a lilt in my voice ah how's ypur mother this questions doesn't feel like a pleasantry https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921221412 this shows how unpleasant he was feeling]]> 2021-11-30 19:12:18 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921221412 "I continue tampering with my mothers cantankerous printer. "The survey says" chimes in the background" https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921222169 it shows his emotion when he got the call]]> 2021-11-30 19:12:42 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921222169 "The confusion causes a lump in my throat, a lilt in my voice." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921222294 It shows his confusion because he kind of knows who he is talking to but not fully.]]> 2021-11-30 19:12:45 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921222294 "I say, trying my best to force my timbre back down to its normal register." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921222299 In this part of the story you can tell that Jason is getting a bit nervous but is trying to keep his cool.]]> 2021-11-30 19:12:46 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921222299 As I continue tampering with my mother's cantankerous printer. 26601213 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921222535 It shows that the person was just messing around and was fidgeting or was nervous.

]]> 2021-11-30 19:12:53 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921222535 "The confusion causes a lump in my through, a little in m voice." 26601098 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921222961 The author showed he was nervous instead of stating he was nervous in the text. ]]> 2021-11-30 19:13:06 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921222961 "I stand there for a moment, looking at my phone screen in a strange state of flux as if it had become remote to an alternate life." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921223461 he is mentioning how weird he felt about the whole situation.]]> 2021-11-30 19:13:23 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921223461 "The confusion causes a lump in my throat" https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921224007 This emotions is important being it sets up the main part of the story.]]> 2021-11-30 19:13:39 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921224007 ¨about how frustration causes the rim to get smaller¨ 26601084_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921224014 he probably wanted to show how he cared for Gigi. ]]> 2021-11-30 19:13:39 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921224014 "I stand there for a moment, looking at my phone screen in a strange state of flux" 2698005_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921224455 The man is obviously in a state of shock "in a strange state of flux" is basically him standing there shocked]]> 2021-11-30 19:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921224455 The confusion causes a lump in my throat a lilt in my voice ah how's your mother this questions doesn't feel like a pleasantry 26551033 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921226578 This shows how confused he was ]]> 2021-11-30 19:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921226578 "we were rushing on our way to the airport and our car almost flipped over on the way because of the snow on the roads" https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921230532 this shows sensory details because it talks about the action that's going on in this passage]]> 2021-11-30 19:16:54 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921230532 After takeoff, I was fighting with my brother, because I wanted the window seat https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921230566 This shows what the reader was doing after takeoff, which is a sensory detail]]> 2021-11-30 19:16:55 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921230566 When I woke up I was really thirsty. I was screaming for help in spanish and my dad was trying to get me out the wreckage. 26601213 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921230942 It shows what was going on in detail as she was screaming and it shows what she was doing in detail.]]> 2021-11-30 19:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921230942 ¨I was really thirsty. I was screaming for help in Spanish and my dad was trying to get me out of the wreckage.¨ 26601110 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921230994 It shows exactly what happened]]> 2021-11-30 19:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921230994 "When I woke up, I was really thirsty. I was screaming for help in spanish and my dad was trying to pull me out of the wreckage, but I was in a lot of pain and couldn't move" https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921233035 It shows how she felt and what was happening during that time.]]> 2021-11-30 19:18:08 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921233035 "After I left the hospital, I had some therapy while I stayed at my uncle's in Colombia. I was having nightmares." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921233779 This shows that the main charecter was very terrified after the incident ]]> 2021-11-30 19:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921233779 "Rushing on our way to the airport" https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921234073 They were rushing]]> 2021-11-30 19:18:41 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921234073 ¨i was born and raised in New Jersey and lived in a lovely house with my family around me ¨ 26601084_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235092 This showed how she had an perfect life before the ascendant. ]]> 2021-11-30 19:19:04 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235092 "They created a makeshift stretcher out of parts of the plane wreckage." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235195 This explains how they worked to create a stretcher out of whatever they had to help the survivors.]]> 2021-11-30 19:19:07 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235195 i didn't know it but i was buried underground from my waist down and has been stuck with my seatbelt on for 13 hours https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235211 this shows how she was feeling and unaware of the situation

]]> 2021-11-30 19:19:07 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235211 "I guess when we crashed, my legs plunged into the ground. I think it was the warmth of being half-buried that kept me alive." https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235234 she is describing what it is like to be in that situation.]]> 2021-11-30 19:19:08 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235234 "I was in a lot of pain and couldn't move" 2698005_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235324 She was unable to move and in alot of pain. The quote explains what shes feeling and that she couldn't move]]> 2021-11-30 19:19:11 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235324 i was having nightmares, and slept in with my dad every night. https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235546 he shows how traumatized it left him]]> 2021-11-30 19:19:18 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235546 The plane severely shaking, the lights going off, people screaming https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235791 It shows the action and waht he heard and saw through his senses]]> 2021-11-30 19:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235791 "When I woke up I was really thirsty. I was screaming for help in spanish and my dad was trying to get me out the wreckage" https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235813 It tells us what she did and how she felt when she woke up.]]> 2021-11-30 19:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921235813 "I didn't know at the time, but i was buried underground from my waist down and had been stuck, with my seatbelt on, for 13 hours. (I still have the seatbelt marks on my legs.) I guess when we crashed, my legs plunged into the ground. I think it was the warmth of being half-buried that kept me alive, because a lot of other passengers died from hypothermia. https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921236150 It shows how she crashed to the ground and how she was still alive]]> 2021-11-30 19:19:36 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921236150 when the rescue team and the paramedics found us, and they crated a makeshift stretcher. 26551033 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921237314 This tells us what she sees ]]> 2021-11-30 19:20:10 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/1921237314 Dear God, the person reading this is kind and I’m proud of them .🍒🍒🍒 Please help them live life to the fullest and bless her in their chosen field.😘😘😘 Now, you’re on the clock.❤❤❤ In 9 minutes something will make you happy.🎁🎁🎁 Please share this with 15 people you love.🌹🌹🌹 Remember, . If I don’t get this back I’m obviously not a close friend.💙💙💙 Now, I have a game for you, it’s been played since 1977.💋💋💋 Once you read this, you have to send it to 15 people.🌺🌺🌺 Your next 5 days will be like this:🍎🍎🍎 Day 1 - you will wake up to the biggest shock of your life.🍇🍇🍇 Day 2 - you will cross paths with an old friend you have missed.🍓🍓🍓 Day 3 - you will find yourself with a lot of money.🍏🍏🍏 Day 4 - your day will be perfect.🍉🍉🍉 Day 5 - the person u like the most in your life will spend lots of time with you.🍅🍅🍅 If you don’t forward this, your next 5 days will be the exact opposite.♣♣♣ Don’t break this.♠♠♠ Send it to 15 friends juice_wrld_and_Snot_are_goated_rappers https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/2022457046 2022-02-01 00:18:52 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/u2i10qm6dc4yxd51/wish/2022457046