My delightful shelf by Hillary Heath https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8 Made with serendipity en-us 2018-04-27 14:50:28 UTC 2024-06-19 14:14:23 UTC hello@padlet.com Boreal type forests heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256048611 2018-04-27 15:13:12 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256048611 Storage for tree climbing, surveying, and digging equipment. Also for camping, food, and water for up to a weeks supply. heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256048784 2018-04-27 15:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256048784 Durable, slash proof, water and fireproof, and light weight and comfortable. heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256049235 2018-04-27 15:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256049235 make a layer of kevlar in the back pack, helps it be slash proof so the harsh trees and other sharp objects cant rip it as easily. heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256051002 2018-04-27 15:19:03 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256051002 padded straps on shoulders and hips heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256052195 2018-04-27 15:22:04 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256052195 has ventalation heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256052281 2018-04-27 15:22:16 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256052281 includes rain cover heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256052399 2018-04-27 15:22:39 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256052399 has water sleeve and built in water container. like a camel back. heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256052565 2018-04-27 15:23:04 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256052565 Fire engineer heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256053047 2018-04-27 15:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256053047 And tenton forests heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256053284 2018-04-27 15:24:54 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256053284 Holds heavy duty flashlight heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256053674 2018-04-27 15:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/256053674 Backpack basics heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/257675983 Anders,mark. "backpack basics". boys life.]]> 2018-05-03 14:31:00 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/257675983 heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/257679779 Use Kevlar or nomex o create a fire resistant material like plastic for
badkpack]]> 2018-05-03 14:37:45 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/257679779 heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/257680801 2018-05-03 14:39:40 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/257680801 What helps to be fire resistant heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/257682640 2018-05-03 14:42:48 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/257682640 heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/257683893 2018-05-03 14:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/257683893 Problem heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/258553800 What are we trying to fix]]> 2018-05-07 14:42:50 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/258553800 Fpb heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/258556052 Fire protection backpack
The name is barley covering what this back pack is although it shows how its fire resistant the name doesn't. Smokey would be better

]]> 2018-05-07 14:47:47 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/258556052 Fpb heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/258557337 This is a fire resistant pack that hold many areas of storage to pack for this journey]]> 2018-05-07 14:50:20 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/258557337 How the backpack solves this problem heathhil000 https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/258560259 Our backpack includes built in storage pockets. This backpack is a clean, fire resistant, adjustable pack. It comes with a waterproof pull out layer to keep you and your things safe and dry. It is our new advanced super hero. We've improved so that this supportive luxury you call a back pack, has been put in in simple detail. It has also been made so it has increased its capacity, and being able to hold more things. This is great because it also says comfortable and supportive of your weight. Having such an original pack, we decided to make it effortless, easy,and painless . Made so easy that just anybody can throw it on. Adding on the supportive padded straps helps lift the weight off of your shoulders and making it more form fitting to your body. It's made of soft natural materials to keep you in the best shape we can. The backpack also comes with an absorbing layer of memory foam, so we take your stress away]]> 2018-05-07 14:55:59 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/258560259 Feedback mstrock https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/262363287 Revise your paragraph in the following ways:
 
Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab--not so repetitive)
 
More transitions, overall flow, and clarity ]]> 2018-05-21 13:55:24 UTC https://padlet.com/heathhil000/u1v34v5tq0q8/wish/262363287