A4 Persuasive Writing Examples by Julie Stauffer

A4 Persuasive Writing Examples by Julie Stauffer https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i Below are examples of each of the seven potential persuasive writing categories you could choose for your portfolio project. With your group, read your assigned examples and following the directions. This will also be available to you as a resource throughout this project. en-us 2019-05-02 13:20:28 UTC 2026-01-21 22:14:32 UTC hello@padlet.com Movie Speech: "We Are Marshall" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184827 Watch the following clip from the movie "We Are Marshall". List THREE APPEALS that the coach uses in his speech, with text evidence. Why would he choose those specific appeals for his audience? ]]> 2019-05-02 13:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184827 Awareness Campaign Video: "Know the Signs of Human Trafficking" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184829 *use headphones* Watch the video below. Comment TWO APPEALS that this video utilized in order to get their message across. Explain how each appeal is used, whether or not you thought they were effective, and why. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184829 Song: "Farmer Refuted" from Hamilton jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184830 *use headphones* This song has two sides being presented. Give two rhetoric devices that each side uses, and explain who you think was more effective in their argument and why. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184830 Open Letter: "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" by Martin Luther King Jr. jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184831 Reading the section from the letter given to you. As a whole class, decide what two appeals King uses most effectively in this passage. Then, each group must identify two additional rhetorical devices in the paragraph and LIST THEM BELOW this column. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184831 Article: "The Argument Against Headphones" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184832 Read the following article and identify two things that made the author's argument strong, and two things that made it weak, citing text evidence to prove your point. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184832 Short Story: "The Story of an Hour" by Kate Chopin. jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184833 Read the following narrative and comment below what the focus/theme statement behind this piece could be. Provide three pieces of text evidence that backs up your predicted focus/theme statement. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184833 SW: "Explaining My Depression to my Mother" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184836 *use headphones* Watch the following spoken word and comment below THREE PERSUASIVE STRATEGIES about this spoken word that were effective. Think beyond just the words that are being said. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356184836 Nathan and Jordan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356681402 Uses pathos to appeal to emotion about depression
Uses a lot of body language, she has face expressions, uses her hand to communicate and jitters alot.
Talks very loud and fast just like if she had problems with depression.

]]> 2019-05-03 16:49:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356681402 gabriella b and olivia a https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356682008 alliteration : speech stammering as you seek to explain to your six year old daughter...
simile: the stinging darts of segregation.]]> 2019-05-03 16:51:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356682008 Cole and TJ https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356682366 hyperbole: for years now ive heard the word wait
Amplication: Justice

]]> 2019-05-03 16:52:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356682366 Colt Tab https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356682484 Enumeration: "when you have seen hate filled policemen curse, kick and even kill your black brothers and sisters."
Simile: not as an integrationist or a civil-rights leader but as a fellow clergyman and a Christian brother."]]> 2019-05-03 16:52:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356682484 Fatima https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356682763 Martin L. King Jr uses Allusion when references different authority figures. In the letter he says," I have the honor of serving as president of the Southern Christian Leadership Conference." With this information he refers to himself as a high figure. MLK also uses a metaphor to describe others. He says," that some noble souls from the ranks o organized religion have broken loose from paralyzing chains." He compares the ideas of others to being in chains. This idea works because it stresses his point.]]> 2019-05-03 16:53:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356682763 Brooklyn Anthony https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356682825 2019-05-03 16:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356682825 Jonah https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683050 Enumeratio
"When you have seen hate filled policemen curse, kick and even kill your black brothers and sisters."

Metaphor
"Let us all hope that the dark clouds of racial prejudice"]]> 2019-05-03 16:53:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683050 Jordan barker https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683058 Oxymoron- this "wait" as always meant "never". Antiphrasis - "since you have been influenced by the view which argues against " outsiders coming in" .]]> 2019-05-03 16:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683058 hola como estas https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683094 2019-05-03 16:53:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683094 Brayden and Greg https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683147 I found a Enumeratio.]]> 2019-05-03 16:53:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683147 Nathan Garcia https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683421 Simile: "Let us hope that the dark clouds of racial prejudice will soon pass away and the deep fog of misunderstanding will be lifter from our fear drenched communities."
Enumeratio: "Hence segregation is not only politically, economically and sociologically unsound, it is morally wrong and sinful..."]]> 2019-05-03 16:54:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683421 Austin https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683475 alliteration-stammering as you seek to explain to your six year old daughter
Epanalepsis-organizations across the south ]]> 2019-05-03 16:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683475 Joey https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683982 simile: let us all hope that the dark clouds of racial prejudice will soon pass away...
hyperbole: have broken loose from the paralyzing chains of conformity.

]]> 2019-05-03 16:56:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356683982 gekyume https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356684102 2019-05-03 16:56:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356684102 e https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356684469 2019-05-03 16:57:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356684469 biggie cheese. https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356685246 2019-05-03 16:59:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356685246 real Brayden and Greg https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356685935 Parallelism: Justice too long delayed is justice denied
Simile: "let us all hope that the dark cloud of clouds of racial prejudice will soon pass away and the deep the deep fog of misunderstanding will be lifted from our fear drenched communities. ]]> 2019-05-03 17:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356685935 TJ and Cole https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356691989 appeal to emotion: talks about the plane crash
Appeal to reason: talks about how the opponent is just better on paper
Appeal to trust: the coach tells his team to trust him because he knows their heart because hes seen it and lay it all on the line then they cannot lose.]]> 2019-05-03 17:13:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356691989 TJ and Cole https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356693348 Strong
1. "According to that report, headphone users who listen to music at high volumes for more than an hour a day risk permanent hearing loss after five years."
2. One in ﬁve teenagers in America can’t hear rustles or whispers, according to a study published in August in The Journal of the American Medical Association.

Weak

1. "...middle-class men began shutting out their families with giant headphones and hi-fi equipment"
2. "This produces sound. If you think about all the recordings, production tricks, conversions and compressions required to turn human voices and acoustic instruments into MP3 signals, and then add the coil-magnet-diaphragm magic in our headphones, it’s amazing that the intensely engineered frankensounds that hit our eardrums when we listen to iPhones are still called music" ]]> 2019-05-03 17:16:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356693348 Jonah + Joey https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356694432 Alexander (Metaphor)
"My dog speaker more eloquently"
I think Alexander was more effective because he is being more disrespectful.
seabury (Epizeuxis)
"shame.. SHAMEEEEE"]]> 2019-05-03 17:19:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356694432 Colt and Tab https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356694919 She uses facial expressions, body movements, and tone of voice to represent how passionate she is about the topic and to present her powerful emotions about depression.
She used metaphors and similes to help the listener to help understand how strongly depression affects her.]]> 2019-05-03 17:20:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356694919 brooklyn anthony https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356697705 1. repetition when she talks about her mom
2. facial expressions
3. similies ]]> 2019-05-03 17:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356697705 Nathan and Jordan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356698232 independence is a forbidden pleasure that can be imagined only privately is the theme . one reason to support this she felt independence in her thoughts but she needed to push it away cause it was a pleasure she didn't have . Another example is she felt that independence was now her life it was her. last evidence when Brently returned her joy of that independence was taken away from her.]]> 2019-05-03 17:27:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356698232 brooklyn anthony https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356698710 strong:
1. "One in five teenages" uses factual evidence
2. "These teenagers exhibit whats known as slight hearing loss" shows the effects of what can happen
weak:
1. "When world war 2 ended" its not relevant because world war two isnt happening anymore
2. "Headphones and earbuds are now usued with mp3 players, mobile phones, tablets, computers & laptops" People already know what headphones are used with]]> 2019-05-03 17:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356698710 Fatima, Olivia, Gabby https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356699245 She uses a metaphor to describe how she is a party that she doesn't want to be at. This is comparing how she feels about herself vs how others perceive her. Her emotion is heard through her voice when talking about herself. Her emotion is also seen through her movements.]]> 2019-05-03 17:30:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356699245 Austin and Greg https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356699758 she uses epizeuxis, by repeating "Dear Mom".
She also uses ]]> 2019-05-03 17:31:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356699758 Colt and Tab https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356700043 Appeal to reason - he states facts such as percentages of population that have been affected by human trafficking.
Appeal to normality - you never know how could be suffering from the issue ]]> 2019-05-03 17:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356700043 Nathan and Jordan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356700379 Appeal to reason: He explains signs of human trafficking like have possessions that they usually cant afford, or a new boyfriend or girlfriend that is older but not b a few years.
Appeal to normality: says that if you see someone changed to a post, you would do something about it. But in the days of the transatlantic stave trade, that would be a normal sight to see.]]> 2019-05-03 17:32:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356700379 Jonah + Joey = Joey + Jonah https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356700440

Two things that made the argument strong is the facts that were stated. The author used facts and certain dates. “August report reinforces the findings of a 2008 European study of people who habitually blast MP3 players, including iPods and smartphones”

And “The Walkman appeared in 1979, the invention of Sony, and headphones became part of a walking outfit.” They are strong because theyre facts. Arguments that make them weak is all of the fluff.

]]> 2019-05-03 17:32:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356700440 TJ and Cole https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356701005 Appeal to reason: States facts about how slavery or human trafficking is still around
Appeal to normality: talks about sudden changes i normal behavior can be a sign.]]> 2019-05-03 17:34:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356701005 Gabriella, Fatima, Liv https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356701494 STRONG: he uses a good hook to get people reading... and his evidence is strong.
WEAK: some of it is hard to understand... and bad topic cuz i dont agree.]]> 2019-05-03 17:35:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356701494 brooklyn anthony https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356701908 1. appeal to emotion: "plane crash that took their lives were so severe"
2. appeal to reason "bigger, faster, better, more experience"
3. appeal to trust " they dont know your heart, i do"\

]]> 2019-05-03 17:36:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356701908 Fatima, Olivia, Gabby https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356704232 The farmer tells the Congress that he is disappointed in their action by repeated "for shame". (Enumeratio)]]> 2019-05-03 17:40:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356704232 joey + jonah https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356706226 appeal to emotion: talking about the plane crash at the beginning
appeal to reason: Says the other team is bigger and pretty much better in every way
appeal to trust: "if you do that you cannot lose"]]> 2019-05-03 17:45:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356706226 gabriella fatima liv https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356707060 2019-05-03 17:47:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356707060 Colt and Tab https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356707161 ]]> 2019-05-03 17:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356707161 Fatima, Olivia, Gabby https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356707334 He uses effects and facts to help his argument. The facts to support is argument make it stronger.(medical issues and signs) He also uses real life examples to help his argument.(appeal to reason) then he uses the appeal to normality to explain that it could happen to anyone.]]> 2019-05-03 17:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356707334 Gabby, Olivia, Fatima https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356708761 Independence is not guaranteed.
"Free! Body and soul free!"

"Go away. I am not making myself ill."

"of the joy that kills."

]]> 2019-05-03 17:51:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356708761 austin and greg https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356710142 simile one day it is as small as a firefly in the palm of a bear
Epizeuxis Repeating mom ]]> 2019-05-03 17:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/tzc2prwrqz9i/wish/356710142