Post Your Feedback by Dario Sulzman https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0 Make a post with your name, one piece of feedback you received on your draft, and which rubric category you feel it refers to. en-us 2023-11-13 13:57:42 UTC 2025-08-18 04:26:04 UTC hello@padlet.com Angel https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787451474 I wasn’t here, didn’t recieve feedback.

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]]> 2023-11-13 14:33:08 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787455699 brittany https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787455939 when you said to use different words when i was talking about my freshman,sophomre ,junior and senior year that relates to clear transitions and pacing

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]]> 2023-11-13 14:34:39 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787458253 Matthew https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787458857 "is this really important to the story", I would say it falls under the compelling dramatic stakes

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When you said that there is a lot of summary and I should add more details, this is relate with Ideas and events that are consistently supported by examples and illustrative details.

]]> 2023-11-13 14:35:38 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787460122 delianys https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787460394 feedback: More specific. Describe what you imagined

relates to the "ideas and events that are constantly supported by examples and illustrative details" category i think.


]]> 2023-11-13 14:35:47 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787460394 cris https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787461407 describe the room


]]> 2023-11-13 14:36:14 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787461407 rubi https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787462338 -this is something you will need to clarify before too long in your narrative.

]]> 2023-11-13 14:36:42 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787462338 Jonathan https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/tz2vfhubu8la6al0/wish/2787463842 In your feedback you said, "As challenging as this experience was, it must have also taught you something about playing the trumpet that you didn't have to grapple with before." I think this connects to narrative persona that connects to self-awareness, progression and realization.

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