https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7 Elements? en-us 2017-10-24 11:57:46 UTC 2017-10-24 18:32:08 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145457 For foreshadowing, I am going to give the character hints about what the zombie virus' weakness is]]> 2017-10-24 18:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145457 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145547 Foreshadowing: Girl is going to be driving past a house and get a creepy feeling/deja vu feeling and later the other people's stories have to do with the house and the man who lived there]]> 2017-10-24 18:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145547 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145552 Foreshadowing:
At the beginning of my story, the family goes to a garage sale where they find a pretty mirror. As they were paying, the current owner of the mirror lets the family know that it was "enchanted" and that something always happens to the person with the mirror in their room. I wonder what that will lead to... ;P]]> 2017-10-24 18:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145552 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145639 Suspense: I am going to have a scene where everything seems still, it is night they are outside and it is dark out. The reader can tell something will happen but they do not know what or when.]]> 2017-10-24 18:20:56 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145639 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145664 For the literary element of characterization, the narrator (first person and third person use of writing) is delineated as a clueless and confused character based on the situation. However, because the scene is so complex, the readers soon realize that the character is being honest in his understandings, and is actually very smart, but because he does not believe in the supernatural, his views are slightly skewed. This act of the narrator not understanding certain events will also help suspense to form, because the writing will leave reader's to wonder what will happen next (because the narrator is so vague),]]> 2017-10-24 18:20:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145664 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145677 suspense- the last line will say that the main character kills all of the people in her false reality 
Characterization- the main character is going to seem like she is doing innocent things in her false reality 
mood-  Confusing: things are not going to add up in her reality, like the deaths of the other characters 
foreshadowing- the back horned figure is going to come to the girl 4 nights to play with one of her friends ]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145677 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145690 Foreshadowing - As the characters go to school, they see police cars and hear on the radio they hear of a shooter in their town. They choose to ignore it...]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:01 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145690 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145814 For suspense, I am going to have the character (the servant) walk slowly to the chamber the King summoned him to after winning the competition, taking in all of the scenery and having him pass portraits that unsettled him.]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145814 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145825 I will create suspense by making scenes longer and drawing out scenes right before a scary part is about to happen. So I will do this by describing the creepy knock at the door right before the villain gets in and attacks the hero. ]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145825 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145895 Foreshadowing- Students learn about a tragic history event in social studies class, and that correlates to the main conflict in the plot. ]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:20 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145895 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145954 Suspense- I'm going to have a scene at the beginning of the story where these giant trucks come to collect people to take them to their murdering- and for the suspense they will all be watching tv in their house when they hear a ring on the doorbell and they all know who it is but nobody wants to say who it is and then they open the door...]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200145954 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146007 For suspense I will have a man who has recently been in a bicycle crash and is in the hospital. He is going to wake up with a doctor walking into the room and welcoming him to the hospital. He has been out for 2 days. The doctor will be very suspicious and the man will question him and where he went to school. The doctor will take some time to answer. The man starts sweating and gets very nervous about his safety. He will start yelling for help and other nurses and doctors will rush in and hold him down. They will inject a glowing blue liquid into his arm. His arm starts pulsing and he gets very woozy. He hears the doctor whisper to him, "Be quiet... or you'll warn the others." >:) (the person that was in the crash isn't the main character).]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146007 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146033 Suspense: I'm going to have a scene where the main character feels a hand on his shoulder but when he turns around he sees nothing.]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:33 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146033 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146086 Suspense : In my scene everything is going to be calm and quiet when suddenly a very loud and strange sound will be heard by the principal character.]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146086 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146184 Foreshadowing 
I will have my character dream about a creepy figure showing that something similar will happen in the future. ]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146184 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146211 I am going to use the element suspense and i am going to include this is my story by having characters appear creepy or hesitant (like there trying to tell you something but they can't).]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146211 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146253
I can incorporate mood into my story by leaving a long pause before the aliens burst into the house that the kids are stuck in. A long silent pause after quiet sounds growing closer in order to create an eerie gut-wrenching mood.]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:54 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146253 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146256 Suspense- I could have my character sleeping and he feels someone breathing on him and he knows that hes there by himself.
 ]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:54 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146256 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146273 For mood I will have the scary part of the story take place in a dark and gloomy area giving the reader a sense of wanting to keep reading to find out what will happen since the setting changed so drastically.]]> 2017-10-24 18:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146273 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146314 Foreshadowing- I am going to incorporate foreshadowing into my story by having an old woman show up and warn them to leave the island before strange things start to happen.]]> 2017-10-24 18:22:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146314 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146320 Suspense
It is a stormy night the wind is howling and the lighting flashing. A white figure ghostly figure appears in the window. Then it appears next to you.... ]]> 2017-10-24 18:22:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146320 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146330 Mood: My scene will show that no matter what the characters do, they cannot prevent what s happening to them. ]]> 2017-10-24 18:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146330 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146498 Suspense: Foreshadowing: I'm going to have the characters make a decision to go into a part of the woods they do not know which foreshadows something going completely wrong inside of these woods.]]> 2017-10-24 18:22:13 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146498 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146520 I'm going to have an introduction that discusses an idea that you are insignificant and nothing can change that.]]> 2017-10-24 18:22:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146520 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146653 Characterization-
Brock always tries to show off or look good and he always fails and gets people killed.]]> 2017-10-24 18:22:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200146653 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd7/wish/200147302 Mood- The woods will be covered by fogs as well as something that seems as it glitches out of nowhere creating a suspicious and eerie setting.

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