Thanks for the video. You know how to share personal information and talk about yourself your family and future plans. However, it was a bit difficult to understand because there were some grammar and cohesion mistakes. You also need to focus on pronunciation because you are pronouncing exactly as you read. Study the sounds SH, CH, TH, INITIAL S AND Z for now.

I hope I can see progress in the next video activity.

Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez

The participation in the second task is attractive and interesting. You included a photo, information about you, food, hobbies and activities you like to do on weekends. However, it has some grammar, spelling and cohesion mistakes. You used a translator to do the activity and there are some wrong sentences traduced from Spanish to English. Next activities be careful and check several times what you write. I also hope you try to write by yourself your own ideas.
Be careful next time or you will need to repeat the activities... Here your corrections:

Thanks for your opinion analysis about transportation. I agree with you in many aspects you mention such as the fact that we need to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more to stop the rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in big cities like Bogotà. In terms of English there are many mistakes because you took advantage of a translator not of your knowledge. If you want to improve your English you must write your own ideas and practice your reading skills.

 Kind regards,

Good luck,