Elyse F by Elyse Xanat Fujii https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7 This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC 2025-10-24 09:32:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png Point of View 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347584 The point of view of Theo's song is in Third-person]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347584 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347585 They do not allow the children to chose their job and put them in a job they are the worst at. The basic human rights that are being denied is the right to decide.]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347585 Characters 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347586 Theo
Decider
Authorities
Neema]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347586 Conflict 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347588 They were being denied the ability to chose their job and get the right education for it.]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347588 Plot: Sequential 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347591 Event 1#: Theo gets taken from the pod and is given his assignment
Event 2#: The blacksmiths are working in the smithy
Event 3#: Neema explains what the Authorities are doing
Event 4#: Theo makes a resolotion
Event 5# (Climax): Theo defies the Authorities by singing in the smithy
Event 6#: Theo gets taken to the Decider and gets punished
Event 7#: Neema and the other blacksmiths continue to rebel by singing
Event 8#(Resolution): The Authorities realize that they cannot control the rebellion and change their ways]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347591 Theme 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347595 Be fair and considerate to others ]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347595 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347597 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. 

My story is going to be about a African american boy in the 1800s . The first event of the story is when the boy goes out and tries to get a job and is turned down by everyone he asks because of his color. The next event is where he gets an idea of a job while he was in bed. The next day he asked made flyers asking if anyone needed an errand boy to go and get there things. After waiting a few hours for someone to accept his offer someone comes up and tells him to give up and go home. Finally right as he is about to go home someone asks if he would be willing to work for him and he accepts.]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347597 Due Dates 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347602 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15
-Plot Line for My Narrative: Tuesday, December 19.
-Rough Draft for My Narrative: ]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347602 Prompt 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347605 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347605 Theo's Song 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347608 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347608 Rubric 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347610 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347610 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347613 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347613 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347615 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347615 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347618 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347618 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347620 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347620 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347622 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347622 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347623 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347623 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347625 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347625 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347628 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347628 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347629 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347629 Rough Draft 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347630 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347630 Final Draft 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347631 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347631 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347633 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347633 What are Human Rights? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347634 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347634 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347635 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347635 30 Basic Human Rights 201000183 https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347636 2017-12-14 22:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/201000183/txz18m6ropf7/wish/216347636