I hope that in this book Janie and Cable go on many crime and undercover missions. Seeing them go through dangerous missions will make the plot even more captivating then it already is. As this will goes on, someone is going to have to be captured or get into bigger trouble, it just must happen and I'm waiting till it happens.

    Now for my reaction to this whole situation. I feel kind of relieved that Janie finally gets to see her father, so she can know where she came from. But it’s sad how she was disappointed when she first sees him. He was nothing like she would have imagined. 

                The story takes place back probably in the early 1700’s. The main character lives in a very religious family, anything and everything that she does has to be holy. Now that you have a sense of who the family is, let me tell you about the parts in the book that affected me the most.

                This book is very morbid and when you start reading this book, expect the unexpected. In one part, my character had sinned and she didn’t want her family to find out. She’s been seeing a boy that lives near her, and in the Christian faith you’re not supposed to do anything intimate until you’re married. Well as you can see where I’m going with this they didn’t wait. Later, she finds out that she’s pregnant and she’s scared out of her mind. If her parents find out, especially her father, she’ll be disowned and sent away from her home. I was scared for her, she’s way too young to be going through this all alone. I forgot to mention that her so called boyfriend left her after he found out she was with child. In the end, nobody got to figure out that she was pregnant because she had a miscarriage. I felt so bad for her, she lost a part of herself that day and was never the same after that. 

                But anyways, I’ve been thinking and I think that I’ve came up with something. The girl in my book has a haunting past and I thought that she was really being haunted by a spirt, but I think that it’s by an actual person that she knows. Like I said in the past blog, the girl’s town is being struck by mysterious and gruesome deaths of students in her school. Her student body thinks that it’s this boy that never talks to anyone and is so secluded to himself, and I believe that he has been doing the murders so far as well. She’s grown very fond of him and they’ve grown very close to each other. 

                I’ve noticed that he’s been retrieving info about her, and that’s very strange. If she hasn’t told him anything, how does he know this already? I think that he’s been stalking her and I believe that he’s the person in her house.

                Now, this is a different topic than the few paragraphs before. I’ve been very shocked by my main characters way of treating her grandmother. She’s Hawaiian and she moved from Hawaii and back into the united states to live with her grandmother. Her parents either couldn’t take care of her, so I guess they gave her to her grandmother. I just thought that this was very sad because they just gave her up. 

Since she’s a teen she acts kind of rebellious from time to time and she can be very disrespectful. She was on the phone with a boy and her grandmother doesn’t allow that type of behavior in her house. Her grandmother continued to ask her who she was talking to and she lied so that she wouldn’t find out. I just thought that this was very disrespectful because her grandmother is the one that’s taking care of her and she should respect that and be very grateful because her granny didn’t have to do it.

I’ve still been reading “There’s someone inside your house” and it’s been really good. What has happened recently has been so shocking, I can’t believe what has just happened to the characters in my book! 

Makani (the main character) and Ollie’s (also the main character) relationship has become more of something and it’s actually very admirable. I never thought of Ollie as a good person, I believed what that students in the book said about him was true. I believed that he was a dangerous and self-absorbed guy that does nothing, but gets in trouble, but I was wrong. 

The problem that has been recurring in my book is death. Students from Makani’s school are being targeting by a killer. Three characters have already died from the murderer and they were killed in terrible ways. One was the school’s star football player, he was stabbed in the abdomen and the top of his skull was cut wide open. This set fear in the town and nobody knows whether they might be the next one. 

But anyways, Makani is scared out of her mind, she doesn’t know if someone else is going to end up dead or if it might be her or Ollie. Later, Makani and Ollie are at her house and Makani feels uneasy because everything in her home has been moved (this is the sign of the killer). The killer ends up being in her home and all chaos breaks loose. Makani ends up getting sliced in her arm and her grandmother ends up being seriously stabbed in her lower abdomen. All of this had me so scared, I thought that both weren’t going to make it, but I’m glad that they fought to stay alive. 

                 I’ve finally now why my character big secret that she’s been hiding from everyone. Her name isn’t really Makani Young, I don’t know what it is, but that isn’t it. She has a police record and she’s been in the news for assaulting one of her varsity teammates on the swim team. The thing is, I believe that the assault that she did was pure self-defense. Long story short, she cut off a large amount of her best friends’ hair while they were doing challenges while getting drunk, which also led to her friend nearly drowning. This thing that she did didn’t stay in Hawaii, it also followed her back to Alaska and the killer in her town found out about her little secret. I now know who the killer is and it’s someone from her school that’s a loner. He targets the people that have dirt on their name. He didn’t get to kill Makani, but he just recently killed another person from her school who’s the pastor’s son, and let me tell you, he died in the most horrible way.