PEEL - paragraphs about Freddy Andrews. by Mads Christian Jensen https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu Rephrase your questions from earlier into points and then build your PEEL from there! en-us 2017-12-11 13:11:51 UTC 2024-11-19 14:46:01 UTC hello@padlet.com Class assignment - Making a PEEL point. madsj90 https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/238411975

Point: The connection between ethnicity and identity is something that Polly Borland focuses a lot on in "Freddy Andrews"

(Introduction to evidence):  In the second half of the text, Borland evidently talk about the relation between skin colour and identity.

Evidence: "I can hide in society because of my white skin, if I don't bring up my Aboriginality. That's like being split in half."

Explanation: Clearly, Polly Borland focuses on ethnicity and identity in her text through Freddy Andrews whose skin is white even though he is of Aboriginal descent.

Link: ]]> 2018-03-06 01:00:16 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/238411975 Point Point about PEEL madsj90 https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/238412296 Use it on the side]]> 2018-03-06 01:02:03 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/238412296 Individual assignment - Making a PEEL point. madsj90 https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/238711005
  • Choose one of the two questions (selected from your worksheet) below to work with. 
  • Use that question together with the answer you gave to it earlier in your worksheet. 
  • Write / make a "point" by combining them. 
  • Once you have that, you write a PEEL paragraph. 

Questions to choose from: 

  1. How does Freddy Andrews personally feel about himself being a different kind of Aboriginal? Does he like it? Why/why not? 
  2. What is Andrews’ view on the effect that the stereotypical views on Aborigines can have on their lives?
]]> 2018-03-06 16:25:40 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/238711005 PEE about Freddy Andrews. Gerth https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239112892 Question: what is Andrews' view on the effect that the stereotypical views on Aborigines can have on their lives?

Answer: He doesn't like that people have a stereotype about the aboriginals, because people just try to make them sad and angry about the stereotype.

Point: Stereotypes and other people's prejudice about aboriginals is something that Polly Borland talks about in the text Freddy Andrews

Evidence: We're not dumb, we are not useless, we aren't all alcoholic

Explanations: As we can see in what Freddy Andrews' said about the 
Stereotypes, like aboriginals are not: dumb, useless & alcoholic]]> 2018-03-07 13:05:53 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239112892 Individual assignment - Making a PEE point https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239112957 Jakobine W. Lyberth
Question : How does Freddy Andrews personally feel about himself being a different kind of aboriginal? Does he like it? Why/why not?
My answer : He is confused about his identity, others see him as white but he is also an aboriginal.
Point : Polly Borland wrote about how Freddy Andrews is being very confused about his identity and who he really is.
(Introduction to evidence) : In the beginning of the text Borland clearly talks about Freddy's Aboriginal identity and his confusion.
Evidence : "I'm confused with my Aboriginal identity. First of all, my mother was Aboriginal, and she was taken off her parents and put in homes."
Explanation : Clearly, Polly Borland focuses on identity and confusion, in her text through Freddy Andrews confused about his identity and the way he is an Aboriginal, even he is a white person.

]]> 2018-03-07 13:05:59 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239112957 Anguak lennert616 https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239123463
Point:  in her text "Freddy Andrews", Polly Borland writes about the different identity being aboriginal and white fella.
 "we aren´t all alcoholics, you know. But you end up sending us to the pub and drinking"

(Introduction to evidence):  Borland evidently talks about the relation between skin colour and identity.

Evidence: "we aren´t all alcoholics, you know. But you end up sending us to the pub and drinking".

Explanation: Clearly, Polly Borland focuses on stereotype and identity, like who we are aren't alcoholic but they give us a bar to drink. like they say aboriginals are alcoholic, but not all of aboriginal are alcoholic

Link: ]]> 2018-03-07 13:32:57 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239123463 PEE https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239134741 Sara
Question 2: What is Andrews’ view on the effect  that the stereotypical views on Aborigines can have on their lives? 
My answer: The stereotypical views on Aborigines makes it harder for aborigines to live beside the white people. 
Introduction to evidence: In the text, Polly Borland talks about the stereotypical views on the aborigines. 
Point: Polly Borland is focused on what kind of identity Freddy Andrews has, as a white skinned aborigine and how other people have stereotypical views on Aborigines. 
Evidence: “It’s always been about land rights and recognition - that we’re not dumb, we aren’t useless, we aren’t all alcoholics,” 
Explanation: It clearly shows that Polly Borland talks about how others views the aborigines and says that it’s not true. 
]]> 2018-03-07 13:55:04 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239134741 Tommy https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239138708 How does Freddy Andrews personally feel about himself being a different kind of Aboriginal? Does he like it? Why/why not? 
Point: He feels confused about himself

(Introduction to evidence): it is in the start of the text 

Evidence: “i am confused with my aboriginal identity”

Explanation: he feels confused because he is not like the normal aboriginals and he has white skin]]> 2018-03-07 14:02:15 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239138708 Bjarne bjarnethegod https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239138791  
Andrew looks down to him self, because he hear some steriotypical words in his work, even he have white skin, not like the other aborigins.
He lost his self esteem, aboriginals looks down to them self because they hear bad words about them self even if they aren´t real for every aborigin.
 

]]> 2018-03-07 14:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239138791 Linda https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239139405 Question 1]]> 2018-03-07 14:03:33 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239139405 Rikki https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239139431  

]]> 2018-03-07 14:03:37 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239139431 Freddy Andrews - PEE https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239139755  
Salik S. Grønvold

He (Freddy Andrews) said that he can't quite be himself, because he's an aboriginal and he that makes him feel like he can't be socialize like the other people. (Freddy Andrews points out that being an aboriginal in front of white people makes him feel like he can't be himself.) "I'm confused with my Aboriginal identity...I can hide in society because of my white skin, if I don't bring up my Aboriginality... That's like being split in half. Trying to be someone I'm not". By that he (Freddy Andrews) meant that he feels like he's forced to be someone he's not, because of his identity.


Freddy Andrews said that it is hard being an aboriginal, living beside white people with the stereotypical comments. (He points out that he is treated different from the others, just because of his Aboriginality.) "It's always been about land rights and recognition -that we're not dumb, we aren't useless, we aren't all alcoholics, you know". By that he meant that it is not easy living a life with hatred and negative stereotypical comments and it surely isn't easy being Aboriginal. 
]]> 2018-03-07 14:04:13 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239139755 Camilla Johansen https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239139799 2018-03-07 14:04:19 UTC https://padlet.com/madsj90/twqzdl52qhnu/wish/239139799