·Grow:
The survey is mentioned in the presentation though it is not incorporated in the presentation. I think incorporating the survey could have been useful 

A stronger conclusion: a summarization of key points could have been reinforcing the message. 

Engaging Visuals: The opening of the presentation uses appealing elements from images and videos

Storytelling: the images and videos incorporated set a tone to engage the audience. And using personal anecdote when mentioning specific ways of creativity and risk-taking in life

Using multimedia: including the survey 

 Grow: 

Sound quality was very low still able to hear. Just making sure the microphone is clear so the audio is understandable. 

Encourage more the audience with delivery
Pausing to emphasize key points and allowing the audience to grasp the information 

Well-paced delivery: spoke clearly and confidently; had a suitable pace 

Storytelling: the incorporation of the anecdote of memories of her childhood and personal experiences make the points relatable and memorable 

Strong conclusion: allows to refer to the main points of the presentation like education reform 

 
 Grow: 

Include more multimedia: more images that to make the presentation more interactive 

Design: the background made the presentation took away from the actual media of the presentation.

Transitions: smooth transitions between sections gave a seamless flow 

Design: aesthetically pleasing with the fonts, colors, and layouts, making the text very readable 

Including multimedia: Including the survey and showing the survey to in the presentation 

      
Grow:

Information was concise, but too fast. Ensure speaking in a slower pace throughout the presentation 

Use better sound quality: ensure that audio is clear and easy to understand. 

Design: the design is cohesive and aesthetically pleasing with the color and layouts 

Transitions: very smooth between section

A strong conclusion: summarization of key points leaving with a call to action 

 Grow:

Use more personal anecdotes and examples as you are entering the educational field. 

The use of smooth transitions between the sections. First, the reflection then a section for the survey. 
The content of the clear and concise; used a logical flow and was easy to understand & connect well to the information of the survey 

Grow: 

The conclusion in the middle was interesting, though there could have been one for the survey section just to tie everything together.