Summer Ryan’s Showcase 2021 by Student - Summer Ryan https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021 Feedback about clothing wastage en-us 2021-11-14 22:31:40 UTC 2025-12-05 11:13:34 UTC hello@padlet.com Mr H's Feedback choward109 https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1903903106 Summer, overall a very good job. Only minor things that I suggest fixing up. 

Can you type set everything to the left. This is the standard format for websites and it does make things easier to read.

I really like that you explained your reasoning behind the photo essay. This will come in handy in your speech. What I suggest about the photo essay photos is to arrange them so that infographic one takes up two spots. I would suggest moving one to the bottom right corner where there is a black space and that should allow room for the infographic. That black space draws attention to itself which you don't want. ]]> 2021-11-20 23:35:09 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1903903106 https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907512843 Great Job!]]> 2021-11-23 03:45:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907512843 Rithika Y5 Feedback https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907515242 Hi Summer! Overall I think you did amazing but the text sometimes was hard to read because of the background. I love your call to action and the essay though. Clothing wastage is a huge problem and I like how you have addressed the issue clearly and what the public can do.

Regards, Rithika.]]> 2021-11-23 03:47:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907515242 Rithika Y5 Question https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907530436 Question to answer: What is one thing you would like to improve?

Regards, Rithika.]]> 2021-11-23 03:58:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907530436 Adelaide https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907542850 Lovely presentation! I also liked the layout.

I loved this so much. It was very entertaining and I could not stop reading it. I cant believe that 23kg of clothing is wasted per person. Crazy right. I loved that you addressed this issue because it is not normally addressed. 

Some easily fixed problems on some slides is that there are some grammar issues and misplacement. 

I have some quick questions:

  • When creating this did you gain any skills?
  • What do you think could be a area of improvement?

 Anyway overall this was amazing and could not be laid out better.
]]> 2021-11-23 04:08:02 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907542850 https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907543671 Amazing could not be better.]]> 2021-11-23 04:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907543671 https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907543989 Easy to read.]]> 2021-11-23 04:08:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907543989 Grace https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907548763 Summer, I can see that you thoroughly researched your topic and I admire how much hard work you’ve put in and its clear to see you’ve put a lot of effort. Grace:)]]> 2021-11-23 04:12:37 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1907548763 https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1911388592 I think this website is amazing. You’ve researched so much and gave lots of emotion and information. You have used lots of passion and strong vocab. 
Sophia A (:]]> 2021-11-24 22:30:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1911388592 Defne https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1911392236 Good job summer your website is great! I like how your topic is very versatile and I honestly wouldn’t have thought of it. My favourite component is your poster on your call to action page. I love the style and information on it. Overall you did really well and I am so proud. ]]> 2021-11-24 22:35:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1911392236 Lam https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1911393674 Hi Summer, I think you did a great job! I like how you provided so much information to answer your three questions. The photo essay was also really good and informative. great job 👏 ]]> 2021-11-24 22:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1911393674 Angelina Xu https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1911394910 Summer, what an interesting and important topic you have chosen. I really enjoyed reading through all of your information. A very well done and maybe you could change the backgrounds to something else that might suit your topic more. Overall, this was amazing and you should feel very proud.]]> 2021-11-24 22:38:44 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1911394910 Nicola Keast’s Feedback :D https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1913293299 I loved your topic as I donate my old clothes to my younger cousin or to a donation bin. One thing I would work on is emphasising the statistics a bit more because it sounded like you didn’t care much about the statistics.]]> 2021-11-25 22:38:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1913293299 Nectaria https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1913293480 I think that this was a really good website. You research was really informative and you were very clearly passionate about your topic. One piece of feedback is to explain your poster and what information you put on it a bit more. Other wise a really good website. ]]> 2021-11-25 22:39:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sryan149/showcase2021/wish/1913293480