Where I'm From Comments & Critiques by Carla Gourdine https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf Please offer support to your peers by providing one compliment and one possible area for improvement. Thanks! en-us 2018-05-21 13:10:23 UTC 2025-12-16 15:13:16 UTC hello@padlet.com victoria chandler https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754231

]]> 2018-05-22 16:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754231 Zandreia Dunn https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754342 2018-05-22 16:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754342 Reese Bacote https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754348 @tobis the poem was very blunt 
BUT it was  little negative
@isisah very deep BUT you could have better represented the second stanza (highly dissapointed )


]]> 2018-05-22 16:21:16 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754348 Amari J https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754511 Tobias- I can agree with what he stated and it was very deep, but you could of used more descriptive words.

Isaiah- that was deep


]]> 2018-05-22 16:21:46 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754511 Kristian W https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754634 2018-05-22 16:22:09 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754634 Naira Shuler naira_shuler1 https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754648 Tobias- 
Compliment: Everything ties together. 
Crtic: Not very understanding maybe you should reword it.

Isaiah-
Compliment: Very good, explanation very straight to the point

Amari-
Compliment: Strong foundation

]]> 2018-05-22 16:22:11 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754648 Jasmine Gunter https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754695 2018-05-22 16:22:23 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262754695 Jan Coby Nieto https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262756101 Tobias- Good Job. i'd suggest more detail. 
Isiah-  Really good stanza can't fully relate thats what makes it unique i guess really powerful.
Amari - Your writings witty i would revise the beginning because it starts off a little shaky. 

]]> 2018-05-22 16:26:25 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262756101 Destiny Williams https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262756478 Taboias: It's deep but you repeat gangbang. 
Lyons: Strong and relatable to some others, appeal to pathos a lot but a little to deep 
Jenkins: Very emotional and dark, can encorage others to think and do the same]]> 2018-05-22 16:27:27 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262756478 DaShawna Black https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771267 tobias- strong but alot of repetition

tobias- strong but alot of repetition
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]]> 2018-05-22 17:04:51 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771267 Jaylen Johnson https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771275 tobias- showed great conviction

]]> 2018-05-22 17:04:52 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771275 Alexis Pereira https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771434 tobias- 
it was a good way to describe you enviroment 

isaiah-
your stanza was relateable but a  little too personal

amari-
 you did a good job of evaluting you life situation

]]> 2018-05-22 17:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771434 isaiah xdarkbladesx https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771527 Tobias- was very descriptive, too violent though
Me- Good! Deserves 100]]> 2018-05-22 17:05:38 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771527 komaree Scott https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771608 tobias-lots of anger 
lyons- very relatable
amari- very n


]]> 2018-05-22 17:05:52 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771608 Maliah https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771811 Tobias - shows a lot of feeling 
Isaiah - very good 


]]> 2018-05-22 17:06:30 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262771811 Zandreia gourdinecarla https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262772528 2018-05-22 17:08:22 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262772528 Zandreia Dunn gourdinecarla https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262772529 tobias- it was good but write about something you can actually relate to. 
lyons- okay i like the word play 
amari- very nice ]]> 2018-05-22 17:08:22 UTC https://padlet.com/gourdinecarla/tw31b16t5yaf/wish/262772529