https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03 Made with a little mischief en-us 2018-02-26 21:37:57 UTC 2018-03-21 18:26:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238308066 "Escape From Alcatraz, three hardened criminals attempt to break out of America's toughest prison." This is the hook sentence in my Scope magazine. The strategy they use to make readers interested is they talk about something that's a challenge and is suspenseful, like breaking out of a prison and to add onto that it being America's toughest prison. Someone breaking out of a prison doesn't happen everyday especially if the prison is Alcatraz. When something big like this happens people are interested thats why this story is so enticing]]> 2018-03-05 19:28:01 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238308066 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238308391 A hook I found was in the SCOPE magazine. It says " You're walking home when your phone buzzes. You look down to see that your friend just hearted the Instagram of your dog. You are scrolling through your comments when- 
SCREECH!" This long hook is enticing because it makes you want to continue reading to see what the 'screech' was and it keeps you waiting for more. ]]> 2018-03-05 19:28:35 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238308391 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238313153 2018-03-05 19:36:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238313153 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238313393 "It is 1912.   Antarctica is as inaccessible as it is fraught with risk;  and that, of course, is its attraction, leading people to pit their ]]> 2018-03-05 19:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238313393 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238313905 I found a hook in the article "Into The Deep" . It says " A mysterious captain. A powerful ship. A flesh-eating sea monsters. Can anyone survive?" This hook makes me want to read more because it asks me an intereseting question and it makes me think.]]> 2018-03-05 19:37:15 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238313905 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238313962 The Hook that i found was in sportsperson of the year.The text says," Athletes make their presence felt in two places in two places.I think this is a good claim because  it is making you wonder what are athletes doing off the field to show themselves.When they say this it is making me wnat to read the rest of the article]]> 2018-03-05 19:37:18 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238313962 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238314588 A New Hope: This hook is engaging because it is relating to a star wars movie were the rebels find a new hope. But in this case the rams head coach is the new hope for there team.]]> 2018-03-05 19:38:25 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238314588 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238315631 "The night was cold ]]> 2018-03-05 19:40:02 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238315631 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238718623 The Hook I found was "The 100 Most Trusted People In America Today," This gave a list of trusted people and that would make people what to to see who is the most trusted. Its a good claim because it will get the readers guessing and make them wanting to see more. ]]> 2018-03-06 16:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/238718623 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239351593 Able Bodied- It is basically the opposite, because Tangie griffin is one of the best linebackers in college and he only has one arm. 

]]> 2018-03-07 19:14:19 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239351593 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239354883 Article: Bearing Up in Scope
Hook: "He would kick and yell his way out of dreams where the bear was after him, his chest cold and sweat slick.]]> 2018-03-07 19:19:21 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239354883 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239355183 The article is Escape From Alcatraz. The hook in this article is "But not Frank Morris. His heart pounding, Morris waited for the prison to quiet down". The strategy being used is the hook is keeping you wondering. People will want to know why Frank Morris is in prison. This is a good hook because when people read it they will be interested so they will keep reading to figure out why he is in prison and what he is doing.]]> 2018-03-07 19:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239355183 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239355294 J.J Watt; The hook that i found was '' In the end he will have missed two- thirds of this season". why will he miss to thirds of the season?]]> 2018-03-07 19:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239355294 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239355979 "It is 1912.   Antarctica is as inaccessible as it is fraught with risk;  and that, of course, is its attraction, leading people to pit their lives against its challenges.  This is a good claim because I obviously know that someone goes to Antarctica, but I want to know more about what happened. The author is using the strategy of suspense.

]]> 2018-03-07 19:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239355979 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239356632 I found a hook in "Swarms of Terror" and it engages you into the text since it is a disaster of some creature.]]> 2018-03-07 19:22:07 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239356632 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239357964 "The night was cold and dark as three men and two women crouched silently in a potato field. One cough, one sneeze-any noise at all-and they would be captured." From the article Escape From Slavery by Lauren Tarshis.

]]> 2018-03-07 19:24:18 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239357964 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239358469 article: Swarms of Terror 
"The disaster began a shadow in the distance, a strange shimmer  in the sky on a hot summer afternoon in 1875. Eight-year-old Laura Ingalls had no idea what it could be, but in her gut she knew somethings terrible was about to happen." It didn't say exactly what was going to happen but it was enough to make you want to read the rest to see what was going to happen.]]> 2018-03-07 19:25:11 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239358469 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239360353 from swarms of terror" The disaster began as a shadow in the distance, a strange shimmer in the sky on a hot summer afternoon in 1875" trying to hook people by words and cliff hanger to read more.

]]> 2018-03-07 19:28:17 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239360353 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239360933 The hook for Escape From Slavery is "The Night was cold and dark as three men and two women crouched silently in a potato field. One cough, one sneeze- any noise at all- and they could be captured" This hook talks about slavery and how hard of a time it was to be alive.]]> 2018-03-07 19:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239360933 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239361731 Blood smoke and freedom . Boom! Boom! Boom! Thundering cannon explosions shook the ground and thick smoke filled the air as 15 year old Joseph Plumb Martin lay in the dirt, struggling to stay alive.]]> 2018-03-07 19:30:40 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239361731 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239362671 I found a hook in "Swarms of Terror" . "The whirs and clicks and buzzes crescendoed into a ear- splitting roar." ]]> 2018-03-07 19:32:15 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239362671 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239367333 2018-03-07 19:39:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239367333 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239446919 The hook I came up with is found in the article the Escape From Alcatraz. It states "At exactly 9:30 on the night of June 11, 1962, the lights at Alcatraz prison went out. Most of the inmates shivered on their thin, narrow beds, trying to get some sleep. But not Frank Morris." This helps me wonder more about how Frank Morris will find a way to get out of this prison. In my opinion I feel like I would defintely want to read this and gain more knowledge because its something that could affect the society!]]> 2018-03-07 23:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239446919 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239453257 The hook that I found was in the article, "Swarms of Terror"." The disaster began as a shadow in the distance, a strange shimmering the sky on a hot summer afternoon in 1875." (13) The strategy that was used was the word choice the author chose. It is enticing because you want to know what the strange shimmer in the sky is and what is going to happen next.]]> 2018-03-08 00:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239453257 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239875053 The hook I found was in the article, "Comically Good" By: Ben Baskin. You know about his NFL Heroics. You won't believe his origin story. The strategy was in the last sentence where the author made it kind of suspenseful. It is enticing because you want to know what his origin story is. ]]> 2018-03-08 19:32:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239875053 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239877978  ]]> 2018-03-08 19:36:56 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/239877978 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/240229568 I found a hook in "What's Down There ?" "Huddled in a tiny metal sphere, you sink lower and lower through the water. You squint through a window into the inky darkness. Apart from the whir of machinery, everything is silent. Your mind returns the the unsettling knowledge that one tiny crack in your vessel and you'll be dead in seconds." The author is trying to get a suspenseful hook to get the reader to want to keep reading.

]]> 2018-03-09 16:13:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/240229568 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/241058192 I found the hook "The Woman Who Landed On Water" I found it engaging because it seems impossible to land a plane on water so everyone wants to read it to find out how and what happened.]]> 2018-03-12 18:35:13 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/241058192 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/241564060 I found the hook in "Julio Jones"I found it engaging because the title is the best issue and it says the best so I assume it is the best.]]> 2018-03-13 18:27:20 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/241564060 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/241566766 2018-03-13 18:31:38 UTC https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/241566766 https://padlet.com/amy_koons/tv85eb4sxt03/wish/244690478 I found the hook in "Blood, Smoke, and Freedom." Boom! Boom! Boom! Thundering cannon explosions shook the ground and thick smoke filled the air as 15-year-old Joseph Plumb Martin lay in the dirt struggling to stay alive.

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