Technology and Human life upgrade- English 4 by

Giselle Acero Torres

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 21:56:59 UTC

fIRST AND SECONS TASK:

https://padlet.com/alejisacero/k3fajfka47ix0lns

https://www.canva.com/design/DAFOSEDWWY0/yeyebFh5oDSy9fwitE48VQ/edit?utm_content=DAFOSEDWWY0&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

ESTEFANIA ORTIZ RODRIGUEZ COMMENTS:
1.What do you think about your classmate's submission?

I thought the presentation was good because the organization of images and text allows you to read and exemplify the idea.

2.What is new for you?

I learned the concept of NOMOPHOBIA, its cases and its description.

3. What can your classmate do to improve her/his submission?

I found the presentation complete and educational.

4. What did you learn about her/his project?

I learned about the negative impact of technology on environmental pollution and the harassment that young people suffer on the Internet. What do you think about your classmate's submission?

When one enters from the cell phone it seems disorganized, but when we read the information and the topic that is given is very good, writing and placing an image next to it is interesting and the way in which it is spoken.
By: Sergio Granados

Adriana García - Second Task
This creative page, with good colors and good information. I find the topic they talk about in the infographic interesting. Technology is a tool to provide information and it is easy to use. I advise you to change the color of the letter because it is not very clear. Suddenly talk about the good and bad that technology does. I learned that technology could replace people for jobs and that it is advancing more and more.

Andrea Albornoz Molano

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 21:57:24 UTC

Daniela Cruz Niño

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 21:57:44 UTC

Hi guys, here is the link to our new blog, I hope you like it and we look forward to your comments.

Link First Task:
https://sites.google.com/view/blogfirstsecondtask/second-task

Link Second Task:
https://www.canva.com/design/DAFNcWIB81s/ohX4X-FM7eaSp-sBnvSNOQ/edit?utm_content=DAFNcWIB81s&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

Link Third Task:
https://sites.google.com/view/blogfirstsecondtask/third-task
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F-zW8QOrVbI

By Daniela Cruz Niño

Estefanía Ortiz Rodriguez Comments-Second Task:
The presentation is organized, and the graphics allow understanding the ideas. In addition, they are short paragraphs perfect for an infographic.
I learned from this infographic, the ELISA technique which is the enzymelinked immunosorbent assay that helps serious diseases, and that technology is a broad field that is not just the internet.

Christian Rueda - Opinion of Second Task
-Hi Dani, I really like the information, its very complete and so technique, and this these academic spaces lend themselves to that, and It feeds me with knowledge that I like to learn.
Its very interestant the stadistics about the medicin and his medications throughout of years and being able to appreciate how medicine helps human beings to last a little longer in age.
So very good job and it gives me knowledge that is not from my area, so learning it is very attractive to me.

Samuel Reyes S. - Opinion of Second Task 👇🏼
Hello Andrea and Daniela, I really liked your infographic, I like how all the information and the conclusions are focused on their careers, I liked the colors and icons they use a lot, you see a very good teamwork and a great interest in share with others about your opinion of technology for you and your future.

Second task Lola’s opinion:
To live longer is what people ever have wanted. I have tought many times if it is going to be possible to live forever. In your work i saw a graffic that shows us the change in the human longevity along the time, and it shows that people can live longer today, than many year ago, because of the drugs that medicine has discover. This data alose me to think that my argument is not that crazy and that maybe in some years, people is going to be inmortal.
The only recommendation I have, is that you can try to reduce the text and write your arguments in a shorter way, so that your document does not look cluttered. However, I really liked the images and the format of the infographic. You took into account very interesting facts that many of us did not know.
Great job!!

TATIANA REINA GUERRERO SECOND TASK:
1. What do you think about your classmate's presentation?
I like it because it is quite clear and can be easily understood.
2. What is new to you?
It seems relevant to me that it can be demonstrated how technology influences various parts and more so in the medical part
3. What can your classmate do to improve her submission?
a little less text and more striking images, but from my point of view it attracts a lot of attention
4. What did you learn about her from her / her from her project from her from her from her?
I learned how technology is involved in the medical environment.

Adriana García - Second task
The infographic is good and has necessary information about the technology. It has good colors and is creative. Elisa is new to me because I hadn't heard her before, and I find her function interesting. One help is that they make key points and not so much text. the letter is a little bigger I learned about a new technology called ELISA, it is immunological that detects antigens.

Julieta Cuervo Suarez

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 21:58:05 UTC

https://padlet.com/julietacusu/nxz38ovx41egaou8

Hi Julieta!
I read your blog and I actually really like the way you have organized it. It looks interesting and i agree with a lot of ideas you have posted. I have not used that tool to create a blog, so I am going to try it cause i like it.
By Daniela Cruz

I like the style of the page, it is a very striking page for people who come to read about the subject, I like the way you talk about it and the images you put are also striking and about what is asked for.

By: Sergio Granados

Adriana Garcia Sanchez

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 21:58:25 UTC

Second Task
https://isabellatorres57.wixsite.com/techology-and-human

Samuel Reyes S. - Opinion of First Task 👇🏼

Hello Isabella and Adriana. Reading your blog more carefully, I really like the ideas you propose and how you explain them in a clear way. The positive and negative points help to better understand your idea in this blog. The images support the ideas very well and it looks very organized and nice. Something I would change, would be to put your presentation at the top of the blog, so we can first see who wrote it, know a little more about who are the authors and then read.

Estefania Ortiz Rodriguez comments second task:
The infographic is well organized and the images allow to have an example of the ideas presented. I learned about the negative and positive aspects they propose in their work.

Sergio Granados Mendez

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 21:58:47 UTC

https://armygranad2.wixsite.com/english-4

The blog looks cute and with many colors. It draws attention and is interactive. I like that it has an introduction to technology, and the presentation shows the technology advanced when covid-19 started. A comment on the blog is about the colors because in the part of the information the black letter is not very well seen and more images.
I learned that technology is very useful for studying.
Adriana García

Hi Sergio and Angela!
I read your blog and I consider its really interesting, I like the way you organized the colors for the sake of it makes your blog more atractive to the audience, and te attention it is really important in this kind of activities.

By Daniela Cruz

Paola Huerfano Aguas

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 21:59:06 UTC

https://paolaluciahuerfano.wixsite.com/english-4

Task 2:
I'm agree when she say "The technology helps us in various aspects". Its so interesting when she talks about how robots helps us when people has dificoults.
And its so important the topic she talk about bulling and I think it is a topic that teenagers are not aware of the damage they do to other people. Juanita Urrea Quinche

Zara Martinez Moreno

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 21:59:22 UTC

Task 1:

https://zaramartinez5.wixsite.com/zara-luna-mart-nez-m

Task 2: https://zaraluna17.wixsite.com/zara-luna-martinez

Task 3: https://youtu.be/rdGxZizyAH0

Self-assessment:

Answer the following questions:

How much time have I spent preparing the tasks? Has it been enough?

I think that the time I have dedicated to doing my tasks has been the necessary one because I make sure not to stop until I fulfill what is required and do it in the best possible way.
2. What sources of information have I used to develop the tasks? Are these reliable?

To develop my tasks I have used the internet since it is where it is easier for me to find information. However, I make sure that the information I seek is from a reliable and truthful site.
3. Have I been satisfied with the products submitted?

If I am satisfied with the results of my tasks, because I try to do my best. However, I want to continue improving and each time give a better result.
4. Have I done my best to develop thorough reading and writing exercises to submit for the project?

I must investigate more deeply, do more reading and writing exercises to have a better result in my project.
5. What should I do to improve future project submissions?

I must investigate more deeply, do more reading and writing exercises to have a better result in my project.

Estefanía Ortiz Rodriguez Comments Second task:
The presentation by sections of historical epochs is organized and allows understanding the ideas, I learned that technologies have been important mechanisms of several few. For example, I found the mill as a technological tool interesting.

TASK 3: Self-evaluation – for students to reflect and react accordingly throughout the term.

How much time have I spent preparing the tasks? Has it been enough?
In task 3 it took me a long time to make the video, because it was not easy for me to speak for so long in front of a camera.

What sources of information have I used to develop the tasks? Are these reliable?
To develop this last work, I used the information that I had previously collected in the first works.

Have I been satisfied with the products submitted?

If I am satisfied with the result of the video, since as I mentioned before it is not something that is easy for me, however, I gave my best.

Have I done my best to develop thorough reading and writing exercises to submit for the project?
To do this job I had to read and write to have a good result when recording.

What should I do to improve future project submissions?
I think I should improve my fluency to speak English, since many times my nerves make it difficult for me to speak.

Third task Lola's opinion:
Hello Zara, I really liked the way you present your video. It looks very professional, you look like a communicator or reporter! I liked the emojis that were appearing throughout the video. The only recommendations I have is that you lower the music a bit, so that we can hear you well. And that you let go of your body so that you don't look tense, otherwise, very good work! Congratulations.

Isabela Mercado Zuluaga

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 21:59:38 UTC

https://sites.google.com/u/0/d/15E94HlFW8U68Z13OjLvgCcbjAkuEo2x0/preview

Bonjour Isabella! I read your blog and I really like the way you approached the topic. I understand that technology has been absorbing us in a way that we depend more and more on it, and forget the other aspects of life.

However, it is also a great tool for companies to evolve. In this sense, I would like to propose a possible solution to this: Achieving a balance between our daily use of cell phones or computers and dividing our time to take advantage of other aspects of our lives, such as our family, friends, hobbies, and sports.

A small recommendation that I make is that you check the grammar and try to vary the vocabulary in your text. You can make it more attractive!

- Lola Ríos Restrepo :)

Hello isabela.
It seems to me that your project can be even more striking, creative, organized and innovative, you can inform yourself more and thus make your project more complete, in any case, thank you for sharing your project with us, greetings.

By: Angela Rodriguez.

Estefania Ortiz Rodriguez

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:00:00 UTC

https://estefa201592.wixsite.com/my-site-3

Jonathan Plazas Beltran

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:00:19 UTC

https://sites.google.com/u/0/d/15E94HlFW8U68Z13OjLvgCcbjAkuEo2x0/preview

ESTEFANIA ORTIZ RODRIGUEZ COMMENTS:
1. What do you think about your classmate's submission?

The presentation is good and the images allow to exemplify the idea.

2. What is new for you?

It allowed me to reflect that our life is influenced by technological elements.

3.What can your classmate do to improve her/his submission?

I think it is important to put the percentages of the surveys mentioned and to put the student's information.

4. What did you learn about her/his project?

I learned that it is important to know how to use technological tools to make life practical.

Tatiana Reina Guerrero

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:00:51 UTC

SECOND TASK :
https://www.canva.com/design/DAFOCOrnV20/P68aUGuZVwBeaUabxoaaAg/view?utm_content=DAFOCOrnV20&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

THIRD TASK
https://youtu.be/-mQtnUCR830
- self-assessment : https://sites.google.com/view/tatianawebsidetechnology/

Comments

Samuel Reyes S. - Opinion of First Task 👇🏼

Hello Tatiana. I really liked your blog, the discussion that you propose of the great risk that technology has in things like artificial intelligence calls my attention, I mentioned something like that in my blog. If I could change something, it would be to put your presentation and look for some images with higher quality for the blog.

Hi Tatiana, in my opinion your blog is very interesting, you talk about the impact of technology on daily activities, this part is relevant for the awareness of scope this tool. I suggest that you should discuss about the first sentence for the improve the importance of this cite as oppening of your text. Andrea J. Albornoz M.

ESTEFANIA ORTIZ RODRIGUEZ COMMENTS:
1. What do you think about your classmate's submission?

I like that the presentation starts with an introductory sentence that allows an understanding of the presentation.

2. What is new for you?

The presentation showed me that technology has been an important part of our lives and helps with productivity.

3. What can your classmate do to improve her/his submission?

The presentation could put more images that exemplify the ideas and a biography of the student to know who is saying the ideas.

4. What did you learn about her/his project?

I learned that technology transforms our lives and helps us with our productivity.

Christian Rueda - Opinion of second task.
- I think that this task is very punctual in front the points discussed and I fascinated about the theme, the focus towards the medicine. Is very Important and at least for my area of own knowledge, and about the medicine I don't touch the medicine much personally.
The area of medicine in the field of technology is very important, and the fact that the medicine taken advanges, the society is much healthier and makes every human being aware of what they are doing with their health.

Samuel Reyes Sanchez

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:01:13 UTC

Blog:
https://reyessamuel12.wixsite.com/technology-and-human

First Task:
https://reyessamuel12.wixsite.com/technology-and-human/post/first-task

Second Task:
https://reyessamuel12.wixsite.com/technology-and-human/post/second-task

Third Task:
https://reyessamuel12.wixsite.com/technology-and-human/post/thirdtask

Hello, Samuel.

I think that the second part of your project is too complete and interesting, also the way in which you organized it caught my attention, it is a striking order and without any loss!, I congratulate you, thanks for sharing a little of your thoughts and experiences with us, it was a pleasure to see your project, greetings.

By: Angela Rodriguez.

Tatiana reina guerrero Second Task :
I really like the way in which they support the information, how striking your presentation is, they liked a little more images, but it is quite clear and attractive, very good job

Task 2:
I like so much the the layout of the infographic. I think its so interesting that you talk about many topics related to technology, you have good information and the most importar is that you break down the ideas. When you talk about technology and the family i like because its true, we can talk with a family member easily. Juanita Urrea Quinche

Lola Rios Restrepo

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:01:33 UTC

First task
https://lolarios2002.wixsite.com/lola-s-english-blog/post/does-technology-upgrade-human-life

Second task
https://lolarios2002.wixsite.com/lola-s-english-blog/post/encuentra-el-libro-que-buscas-como-si-fueras-un-rat%C3%B3n-de-biblioteca

Third task
https://lolarios2002.wixsite.com/lola-s-english-blog/post/self-assessment
Youtube video: https://youtu.be/j5v6uePP8XA

How much time have I spent preparing the tasks? Has it been enough?
I spent about 3 hours preparing the information to put it on the infographic, and about 2 hours organizing the information on Canva.

What sources of information have I used to develop the tasks? Are these reliable?
For this task, I asked some friends to tell my about her own experiences and thoughts. Then I searched for reliable information and sources, so I could create comparatives between my friends main ideas and other datas.

Have I been satisfied with the products submitted?

I found my infographic very completely, it has the main ideas in it and is easy to read and understand. In addition, the graphics and photos can give us a better understanding of the information.

Have I done my best to develop thorough reading and writing exercises to submit for the project?
Yes, I have researched and read various articles on the topic of technology. I have also looked for debates and this has allowed me to understand the positions of the people

What should I do to improve future project submissions?
For future projects I would like to go to the university library, so I can search for several books about technology and open my mind to investigate more and find more ideas.

Samuel Reyes S. - Opinion of First Task 👇🏼
Hi Lola. I really liked your blog. The discussion you try to raise in the text is interesting because it is from your professional field. I really liked being able to understand how advances in technology help in health and all that is behind this. One thing I would change, would be to put a photo in your presentation to meet the author before reading. And for the blog, look for better quality images.

Your research is very interesting, I liked the approach you give it, I think that doing things virtually, a procedure, paying a check, or passing documents virtually becomes much more effective and quicker to do. so the possibilities of doing the procedures with technology become much more effective and friendlier to the users who are going to perform them.
Christian Rueda

PAOLA HUERFANO.- Comments 3 TASK
i really liked that you took on tthe role of being a news person in the tv with the microphone, also how you introduced the topics aboutt the technology

Angela Rodriguez Jimenez

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:01:51 UTC

Angela and Sergio: I found your website very attractive. It is true that technology makes difficult jobs, easy to do and helps with efficiency in many aspects.

It is true what you mention about each benefit of technology, I found it interesting that you detailed this aspect, however I wanted to ask you if you consider it a 100% good, since several of us ((students) criticize but at the same time appreciate technological advances.
I recommend that you both check the spelling and grammar, because I saw some errors. For the rest, it seems to me that it is very complete!
I would like to continue reading your opinions and see the final result of this project.

- Lola Ríos Restrepo :)

Samuel Reyes S. - Opinion of Second Task 👇🏼

Hello Angela and Sergio. I like the theme that they talk about in the infographic but I feel that it can be shared in a different way, with better colors, more icons and much less text. However, I like that each one put an opinion on the infographic that can be improved to make it much more attractive and make it want to read.

TATIANA REINA GUERRERO -OPINION THIRD TASK

In my opinion, the video is very complete, it addresses all the points about the importance of technology in human life and the most important thing is that it leaves a lesson

Kelly Romero Niño

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:02:10 UTC

First Task:
https://sites.google.com/view/technology-future-world-change/inicio

Second Task:
https://sites.google.com/view/technology-future-world-change/techonology-in-humanity

Task 2:
Hi Kelly!
I liked that you could summarize the information in small paragraphs making it easier and more pleasant to read. I agree with you that technology has positive sides and negative sides. I also find it very interesting that apart from making the infographic you will take the time to write several more paragraphs answering the question. Juanita Urrea Quinche

Samuel Reyes S. - Opinion of Third Task 👇🏼

Hi Kelly and Christian! I really liked your video, it is very complete, they talk about many many things, they show images while they are talking, it really is very complete and entertaining to watch! Congratulations!!

Christian Rueda Gómez

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:02:29 UTC

First Task:
https://sites.google.com/view/technology-future-world-change/inicio

Second Task:
https://sites.google.com/view/technology-future-world-change/techonology-in-humanity

Comments First Task

Hi Cristian and Kelly, I like their blog, the impact of internet in the world is important as part of technology and the point about the fake news is relevant, this aspect generate desinformation acompany undesirable and uncontrolable thoughts or activities. I suggest that they should add references that supporting their ideas for that this text has strong and validity. Andrea J. Albornoz M.

I think your site is very interesting, very striking, the theme which is the main thing is very well known, I like the style, the way you talk is very nice, I think it fits very much to what is asked and it is demonstrated in a good way.

By: Sergio Granados

Isabella Torres Celis

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:02:50 UTC

Samuel Reyes S. - Opinion of First Task 👇🏼

Hello Isabella and Adriana. Reading your blog more carefully, I really like the ideas you propose and how you explain them in a clear way. The positive and negative points help to better understand your idea in this blog. The images support the ideas very well and it looks very organized and nice. Something I would change, would be to put your presentation at the top of the blog, so we can first see who wrote it, know a little more about who are the authors and then read.

Paola huerfano - comments of 3° task
i liked it very much and even more with the illustrations that help tto better understand the subject, and with respect to what they talked about, also the different site that see the technology, in the site biological and medical

Third task Lola's opinion :)
Hello Adriana and Isabella!! I like your video a lot. It seem to me that it captures very well al the information investigated throughout the semester. I like the way you introduce us in the video, however, it takes a long time until you start talking and there is a lot of text. But, I congratulate you for your work, ir was clear and each argument was explained well.

Daniel Torres Daza

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:03:10 UTC

Juanita Urrea Quinche

lauraarango4 — 2022-08-16 22:03:27 UTC

https://padlet.com/julietacusu/nxz38ovx41egaou8

I like the presentation, it has good colors and the information is clear. In the presentation she shows the advancement of technology in which she focuses on medicine and mental health. One thing to change is more image and more interesting as more interactive. Her presentation information is repeated. I learned about technology based on medicine and that it has many opportunities in daily life.
Adriana García

I think that the information is clear and concise, I liked the approach that they were able to give him, taking into account the professional careers of each one, I think that with regard to this topic of medicine and any field, technology has helped him a lot by being human but it brings some disadvantages, such as those named and the most general and the ones that most affects in my opinion, is the blurred vision that affects the vision but the interaction with the real world, socializing with this problem is very difficult.
Christian Rueda

Second task Lola’s opinion:
Congratulations for your infographic. I really liked the way you solved the question, because you give clear ideas about the benefits and risks of technology.
The short texts and the images that you put, invite the person to continue reading.
I did not know that there were already robots that did surgeries, that seemed great to me. On the other hand, it is terrible that they use technological advances to create atomic bombs. Technology should only build, not destroy.

Samuel Reyes S. - Opinion of Third Task 👇🏼

Hello Juanita! I really liked the video they made, I liked the topics they talked about, as always focusing technology on what they like, I liked the way they did it in the form of a newscast!