Self-Evaluation & Action Plan by Sarah Hallis https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq Look back at your diagnostic problem-solution essay. Based on your feedback and the information in class about how to write a PS essay, write down some personal action points - what you will make sure to do in your next essay. Check out the example post. (Click anywhere or on the blue + button to add a post) en-us 2020-03-23 12:04:26 UTC 2022-11-28 21:44:02 UTC hello@padlet.com Write your name here shallis1 https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2397543705 For my next essay I am going to make sure I:

- Introduce the background topic appropriately (not too long)

- Add a clear thesis statement and briefly state my probs/solutions

- Add a clear topic sentence in each body paragraph

- continue to work on my grammar outside of class

- check my work carefully for grammar/vocabulary issues

- use the checklist and evaluation form to guide my writing

- manage my time well when writing so that I don't run out of time in the exam]]> 2022-11-25 05:01:04 UTC https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2397543705 Ivy https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2397819962 for my next essay I'm going to make sure:

- the background in introduction more shorter

- add the thesis statement 

- a clear problem at the beginning of body paragraph

- add more detailedexplanation 

- increase my accumulation of vocabulary and grammar, shorten wrting time.

-increase my reading and remember PS eassy structure.]]> 2022-11-25 10:24:26 UTC https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2397819962 Zoe https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398412761 For my next essay I am going to make sure I：

-Introduction needs a thesis statement.
-Add a clear topic sentence in each body paragraph.
-Pay attention to the spelling of the words.
-Find out whether to topic of discussion is the cause or the influence.


]]> 2022-11-26 05:45:05 UTC https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398412761 Junwei Li leejwli https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398469767 For my next essay I am going to make sure I:

- Come up with 2 main problems and solutions more quickly and state them briefly in the thesis statement

- add a clear topic sentence in each body paragraph

- continue to work on my grammar outside the class

- continue to work on my vocabulary outside the class

- think carefully about the relationship between sentences, and use the linking words/connecting words more properly

- use the checklist and evaluation form to guide my writing

- manage my time well when writing so that I don't run out of time in the exam]]> 2022-11-26 08:54:41 UTC https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398469767 Icey https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398482095 For my next essay I'm going to make sure
I:
-Introduce the background  not too long.

-continue to woke on my grammar issues

-improve sentence structure

-manage my time well when writing so that I do not run out of time of the exam

-remember the structure of essay PS.]]> 2022-11-26 09:28:38 UTC https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398482095 Flora https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398664953 For my next essay I am going to make sure I:
—Add a clear thesis statement in the first paragraph
—Add a clear topical sentence in the paragraph that spot the question
—Describe the first problem directly, without restating the background
—Not start a new sentence with a conjunction like and
—Explain the main point in detail
—Conclusion needs to restate the main points in different words, and also can add a final thought
—Keep doing grammar/sentence structure study 
—Note the capitalization
—Accumulate vocabulary

]]> 2022-11-26 16:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398664953 Rebecca https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398862775 For my next essay I am going to make sure I:
-Use more hedging language to make my sentence more accuracy. 
-Add a briefly state my problems and solutions.
-Add a clear topic sentence in each body paragraph.
-Link the problems as a beginning of the result.
-Check connection have corrected logical link.
-Manage my time well when writing so that I don't run out of time in the exam.



]]> 2022-11-27 04:16:43 UTC https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398862775 Ran https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398932141 For my next essay I am going to make sure I:

-Train the writing speed and complete the required writing content.
-Make the logical relationship between sentences more clear and coherent.
-Add a topic sentence for paragraphs.
-Pay attention to the spelling of words.
-More formal to use words.
-Choice better and more appropriate words.
-Do not start a sentence with a conjunction like and/but/so/because.
-Don't start with for example.

]]> 2022-11-27 08:37:14 UTC https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398932141 Volt https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398948382 For my next essay I’m going to make sure:
-Understand the title of the composition and analyze the task.

-Briefly introduce the background and write the content to be discussed in the article

-Add a clear topic sentence in each body paragraph

-Use conjunctions and phrases to make the article clearer

-Pay attention to my grammar and spelling

-manage my time well in writing exam]]> 2022-11-27 09:23:03 UTC https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398948382 Lize https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398988789 For my next essay I am going to make sure I:

- Make introduce and background topic as clear as I can

- Highlight and make sure what clear thesis statement is

- Add a clear topic sentence (start form basic words to academic words)

- continue to work on my grammar outside of class

- keep practice on grammar/vocabulary part

- just reduce the thinking time]]> 2022-11-27 11:03:34 UTC https://padlet.com/shallis1/tta28an8kbqq/wish/2398988789