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      <title>[IELTS 773] IELTS WRITING by Quỳnh Hương</title>
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         <title>LT nộp bài tập</title>
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         <title>LT nộp bt</title>
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         <title>Bt writing của LT</title>
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         <title>Huyanh</title>
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         <title>huyanh</title>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-11 11:38:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>huyanh</title>
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         <title>Linh Thaor</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Point: Using social networking sites bring about huge advantages to children.</p><p>Explanation: Internet help children gain information about the world more effectively, expand more relationships.</p><p>Example: When children use network, they are easily make friend and study more knowledge which can not find at school.</p><p>Result: Leads to intelligent child, skillful person. Make their children become better.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>Point: Internet helps children gain information about the world more effectively, expand more relationships.</p><p>Explanation: </p><ul><li><p>Social media provides users a wide range of knowledge in diverse fields.</p></li><li><p>Expands the friend circle despite distance boundaries</p></li></ul><p>Result:</p><ul><li><p>Children acquire deeper insights in various areas =&gt; Become more intelligent &amp; skillful =&gt; Improve school performance &amp; learning outcomes</p></li><li><p>Boost their creativity =&gt; Become more active &amp; open-minded</p></li></ul><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-11 12:17:50 UTC</pubDate>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-11 12:30:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>hkhanh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Explanation:</p><ul><li><p>Social media provides a wide range of information, including sensitive, violent or misleading contents.</p></li></ul><ul><li><p>Children have little awareness/ unable to distinguish whether the information they absorb is right or wrong</p></li></ul><p>Result:</p><ul><li><p>Imitate negative mindset/ behaviours</p></li><li><p><br/></p></li></ul><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <title>huyanh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Point:Using social media might bring to children some various mental problems</p><p>Explanation:Because of the prevalence of social networks, children can receive <s>false </s> negative/misleading and harmful information</p><p>Example:Children may follow such dangerous actions, causing unwanted <s>events </s> consequences and directly affecting their future.</p><p>Result:It will lead to serious physical and mental effects, affecting the child's life.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-11 12:39:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>huyanh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>-Point:Living in big cities has many conveniences for human health</p><p>-Explanation:Big cities have lot of hospital and pharmacy</p><p>                    In big cites,you can easily to find and buy top drugs =&gt; promptly be cured in urgent circumstances &gt;&lt; people who live in rural areas face difficulties...</p><p>-Example:Big cities always have lots of healthcare staff to support you whenever you need</p><p>-Result:It will help improve human health and help people live longer.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-11 13:05:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Linh Thaor</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>(Agree)</p><p>Point: people Living in huge metropolis easily get diverse food, vegetables and people can get medicine or go to hospital whenever they need. </p><p>Explanation:</p><ul><li><p>Government provides various victuals to every supermarket so people can choose what they want to eat. </p></li><li><p>In big city has a large amount of resident so there must have a huge medicine to treat people.</p></li></ul><p>Example: A large amount city dwellers buy <s>physics</s> medication and food in Covid-19. </p><p>Result: City will develop effectively, humans' life is improved =&gt; Citizens have a happier life. </p><p>(Disagree)</p><p>Point: rising pollution levels in urban areas</p><p>Explanation: </p><ul><li><p>The waste of factories, transportation, residential trash makes people's health being impacted negatively.</p></li></ul><ul><li><p>Our body can not suffer in the dirty environment, citizens might <s>weak or get sick</s> face/encounter severe health issues.</p></li></ul><p>Example: People who live next to the To Lich river <s>have </s>a lot of disease.</p><p>Result: Make resident uncomfortable with their life and can not have a healthy lifestyle =&gt; Impacts social health negatively =&gt; Social stability</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-11 13:08:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>hkhanh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>point: easily improve health</p><p>explaination: fully equipped with more advanced <s>tools </s> facilities/equipment and machinery</p><p>example: in <s>places</s> rural areas it is possible that they will not have modern equipment to be able to determine the patient's illness most accurately + most optimal curing methods</p><p>result: quickly and easily restore the patient's health in the fastest way</p><p><br/></p><p>point: <s>but it's too polluting the environment</s></p><p>explanation: there are too many vehicles moving in a day, there are companies that specialize in emitting emissions, and <s>there are also unaware people</s> people have little awareness...</p><p>example: away from machines, cars, trucks,…</p><p>result: there is a possibility of contracting lung cancer and respiratory diseases</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-11 13:11:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>LT nộp bt</title>
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         <title>LT nộp bt</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>P1: The reason why i don't agree with the point "forbidding the advertising brings benefits"</p><p>Point: The quality of society get worse.</p><p>Explanation 1: The advertising industry/field/area creates job opportunities for people.</p><ul><li><p>The employees will be unemployed (face) unemployment, leads to the lack of money, impact ... on their life. </p></li></ul><p>Explanation 2: Contribute to the country</p><ul><li><p>Develop our economic sector, people <s>are</s> easily <s>to</s> sell and buy goods</p></li><li><p>Improve tourism sector, foreign tourists have more information about their destination.</p></li></ul><p>Point: Advertising brings more benefits to sellers and consumers </p><p>Explantion 1: Help people interact together flexibly.</p><ul><li><p>Provide introduction and information to buyer.</p></li><li><p>Reduce more time to check and get to know about the productions.</p></li></ul><p>Ex2: Play an important part of business.</p><ul><li><p>The person who represent to the products will become popular and big influence</p><p><br/></p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-25 12:56:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Huyanh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p>Point:Advertising brings many benefits to both <s>users</s> residents and the country</p><p>Explanation 1:Advertising brings shoppers <s>many </s>convenience<s>s</s></p><p>=&gt;Helps shoppers know in advance about the product they are about to buy,</p><p>=&gt;Giving shoppers more options, easily comparing and choosing products =&gt; .....</p><p>Explanation 2:Advertising brings many benefits to the country</p><p>=&gt;Advertising brings a huge source of profit to the state</p><p>=&gt;Advertising helps our country easily promote its image to the world, helps improve our country's image, brings in a large number of tourists and promotes the development of the tourism industry.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>em nộp bài ạ</title>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-25 12:59:48 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>LT</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>It is thought that community would have more advantage from the complete prohibition on all the types of advertising. In fact, this is a wrong opinion and i disagree.</p><p>First of all, the quality of society would get worse if advertising does not exist. It is undeniable that the employees will face up to unemployed condition, this situation leads to the lack of their money, impact terribly on their life. Example, people based on money to do too many works, so they can not survive if they have a bad quality of life. </p><p>Another point that advertising contribute to our country. Advertising industry develop our economic sector, so that people easily to sell and buy goods. Moreover, it can improve tourism sector, foreign will know more information about their destination and our tradition.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-25 13:33:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Some people say that society would benefit if it did not allow forms of advertising because they are meaningless or even harmful. In my opinion, i dont agree with the above opinion</p><p><br/></p><p>One can think that if one day the government bans advertising in all markets, it will have a negative impact on consumers and advertisers.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>huynh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>In recent years,with modern society increasingly developing, the advent of billboards and now advertising videos has appeared. For some people, advertising is very useful, but there are those who think that Useless advertising and banning advertising will benefit <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://society.In">society.In</a> my view of point,i will completely disagree with that opinion by the folowing reason</p><p><br/></p><p>First of all,</p>]]></description>
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