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Scribo 1

jinglin51 — 2023-12-03 06:34:54 UTC

I have made a grammar error and used mostly simple sentences, which limited the range of sentence types.

One difficulty I faced was overusing cohesive words in the first paragraph, which made it harder to read.

To improve, I could use more complex sentence structures and vary my cohesive word choices.

Scribo 2

jinglin51 — 2023-12-03 06:41:31 UTC

I repeated the word 'tourism' multiple times and could improve my vocabulary by using synonyms. In paragraph 4, I used long sentences with complex words, making the paragraph hard to read. To improve, I could reduce the length of my sentences and avoid overusing cohesive words.

Scribo 3

jinglin51 — 2023-12-03 06:46:19 UTC

I have made some grammar errors and used repetitive sentence structures. One difficulty faced was using the same sentence structure repeatedly, which limited the range of sentence types. To improve, I would try using more complex sentence structures and vary sentence lengths.

Scribo 6

jinglin51 — 2023-12-03 06:50:47 UTC

still need to work on using synonyms to avoid repetition of words. For example, I used the phrase "most popular destination" twice, which could have been replaced with a synonym.
also need to pay attention to grammar and punctuation, as there are still some errors. I should proofreading my writing clearly.

Scribo 8

jinglin51 — 2023-12-03 06:55:03 UTC

One difficulty faced was using complex sentence, which resulted in some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, i would try simplifying sentences.

Additionally, i could use a thesaurus to find synonyms for words that tend to repeat, such as "skilled professionals" and "home countries".

Past paper writing 1

jinglin51 — 2023-12-03 13:40:02 UTC

There is no clear sense of what is the focus of the description. Sentences that precisely describe some directions are not clear. How to improve: two paragraphs describing only the biggest changes separately

past paper writing 2

jinglin51 — 2023-12-03 13:42:43 UTC

The biggest problem is understanding the wrong topic.

Only one aspect of the point needs to be expressed not both.

Go to improve: read the question and discuss only one aspect without explicitly saying that it describes both aspects

elss

jinglin51 — 2023-12-03 13:45:32 UTC

Just a little chat and no simulated speaking.

But realized that open communication can't be done off the cuff for a while

Go to improve: think of sentences in English before speaking instead of native tongue.

Elss

jinglin51 — 2023-12-03 13:50:54 UTC

Simply practiced a simulation

I couldn't figure out the meaning of some simple words.

Cultivate the sensitive of ear.

Scribo 5 refections

jinglin51 — 2023-12-03 13:59:49 UTC

having made some grammatical errors and used repetitive sentence structures

To further improve writing, i would also try using more varied vocabulary and synonyms to avoid repetition of words and phrases. Additionally, focusing on grammar and punctuation.

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