Interview Narratives by MATTHEW MARINO https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy Hour 2 - Assessing Student Models Activity en-us 2020-11-16 21:39:04 UTC 2020-11-17 15:24:51 UTC hello@padlet.com marinom1 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931541035 1. Read the 6 student interview narratives posted on Schoology (in course texts orange folder - interview narrative - student models purple folder), identifying quotations and descriptions of the interviewee.
2. Score each essay based on the interview narrative rubric as either exemplary (4), proficient (3), emerging (2), or incomplete(1)
3. Post an explanation with your score under the appropriate paper title/author.
]]> 2020-11-17 13:29:33 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931541035 Josiah Robinson https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931871688 I give it a 4 because its well detailed and i can picture it in my head what his dad is doing   ]]> 2020-11-17 14:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931871688 4 because it checks everything off the list and is very descriptive. s887461 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931879466 2020-11-17 14:35:05 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931879466 Robert Krantz - https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931889611  I give this a profiecient, it was good, it's just the story was a little off. ]]> 2020-11-17 14:36:53 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931889611 4 because it checks off on everything needed https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931892486 2020-11-17 14:37:25 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931892486 david https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931901535 a 3 because the questions were not why questions but the setting is detailed ]]> 2020-11-17 14:39:04 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931901535 I could already tell that this is a 4 by reading the first sentence. I read the rest and it was really good and almost like a book. s887461 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931901823 2020-11-17 14:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931901823 3 because he had a couple spelling mistakes but overall a good story. https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931908482 2020-11-17 14:40:18 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931908482 david https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931917217 i give it a 4 because had good questions that got lots of detail ]]> 2020-11-17 14:41:51 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931917217 Josiah Robinson https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931918620 I give a 3 because its detailed but i cant picture it ]]> 2020-11-17 14:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931918620 4 because for me it looks good and detailed s108014 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931918954 2020-11-17 14:42:10 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931918954 3 its decent and the questions are to the point https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931920812 2020-11-17 14:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931920812 4 because it gave really good description almost like you were there and doing the interview yourself. s887461 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931922114 2020-11-17 14:42:42 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931922114 4 very good detail and questions. https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931923706 2020-11-17 14:43:00 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931923706 david https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931925213 its a 4 because it was like you were sitting there]]> 2020-11-17 14:43:16 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931925213 a 4 because i already can tell is good. s108014 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931931730 2020-11-17 14:44:28 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931931730 I grade this a 3 because he could work on some of the grammar mistakes but overall the story was really great. s108139 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931933507 2020-11-17 14:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931933507 Josiah Robinson https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931937059 i give it a 4 because it had good detail ]]> 2020-11-17 14:45:26 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931937059 I'd give it a 3. detailed. learned a lot from his dad. Did good. https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931938317 Brianna S.]]> 2020-11-17 14:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931938317 Bri https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931940654 I give it a three, it was good but it has some grammar errors ]]> 2020-11-17 14:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931940654 4 because it is very creative and he made a narrative like he was writing about a character he made but it was really about his dad. s887461 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931942096 2020-11-17 14:46:18 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931942096 jesse s86694 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931952309 4 it felt like i was there lots of details talking about it being loud with the lunch room and people talking...

]]> 2020-11-17 14:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931952309 Jesse s86694 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931967344 3.9 because it had lot of script but it was kind of boring]]> 2020-11-17 14:50:34 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931967344 Robert Krantz - https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931978289 EVerything was put straight forward, not many grammar errors, I'd say 4.]]> 2020-11-17 14:52:33 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931978289 to much words very boring https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931979043 2020-11-17 14:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931979043 david https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931979514 a 3 because it was detailed but i did not really want to read it ]]> 2020-11-17 14:52:46 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931979514 4 there was so much detailed s108014 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931982587 2020-11-17 14:53:19 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931982587 3 because I like his choice of words like "guzzle" and "crackling". s887461 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931983799 2020-11-17 14:53:32 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931983799 Alani s108139 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931990576 I grade this a 4 because I love how descriptive it was and he used great imagery.]]> 2020-11-17 14:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931990576 Josiah Robinson https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931992435 i give it a 3 because it was detailed but i didnt really understand it ]]> 2020-11-17 14:55:04 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931992435 a 4 because even if is very long it has good descriptive detailed s108014 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931996056 2020-11-17 14:55:40 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/931996056 I'll give it a 4. Was really good. Detail was very good and I can tel he learn a lot from her. https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932005005 Brianna S.]]> 2020-11-17 14:57:10 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932005005 Bri https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932006059 I give this a four, there was a bunch of details and no errors]]> 2020-11-17 14:57:20 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932006059 4 it checks off everything and has a bit of detail and has good descriptive sentences. s887461 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932007473 2020-11-17 14:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932007473 Robert Krantz https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932017777 4 for sure, everything was amazing, grammar was good, the quotes were a little off, and the interview was straight forward with a lot of detail.]]> 2020-11-17 14:59:21 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932017777 Josiah Robinson https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932020481 3 because he used a lot of big word ]]> 2020-11-17 14:59:49 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932020481 3.5 s86694 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932040929 i think there was a good word choice using words that people wouldn't usually use.

]]> 2020-11-17 15:03:18 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932040929 Alani s108139 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932049378 I grade this a 4 because the structure of the story is really good from beginning to end.]]> 2020-11-17 15:04:45 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932049378 Robert Krantz https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932055739 3, this was really emotional, and I loved this entire story in general. I loved everything, and that guitar story was great. ]]> 2020-11-17 15:05:54 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932055739 Josiah Robinson https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932059919 2020-11-17 15:06:37 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932059919 david https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932064538 the word choice is bold ]]> 2020-11-17 15:07:22 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932064538 david https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932068007 it had all the things for a 4 ]]> 2020-11-17 15:07:57 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932068007 s86694 https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932073267 4
detailed even talking
 about the smells and sounds

]]> 2020-11-17 15:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932073267 Robert Krantz https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932089241 3, details were good, I could relate to this story, and the details with him knowing that there was gang activity, but tried to stay away from it.]]> 2020-11-17 15:11:21 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932089241 I'd give it a 4. Not only did Z learn lot of things about their teacher I myself learned new things about him too. I run with him in cross country, and he is a great person. https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932091492 Brianna S.]]> 2020-11-17 15:11:42 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932091492 Robert Krantz https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932099860 This story is automatically a 4 no matter what. It touched me to the point where I got emotional, because my mother worked so hard for me, when I had nothing, and my dad left. My mother went to college, and spent her years working so hard. I love the details, and the appreciation the kid gave his mom. I love the pressure to do good in life.]]> 2020-11-17 15:13:05 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932099860 This gets a 4, was a really touching story at least to me. Really good Information. The Busted Mullet, Heck yea!!! https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932148786 Brianna ]]> 2020-11-17 15:21:26 UTC https://padlet.com/marinom1/trnobqedim4lpyhy/wish/932148786