Argumentative Thesis Statement3 by Rosemary Knebel

Jolie Burda- One Sentence Thesis

2025-10-08 16:38:30 UTC

While most people will say phones should be banned, they can also be a useful tool and helpful for protection in cases where they are needed, and many agree with both sides of the argument on whether phones should be banned or not.

You must take a side and give three to four specific reasons.

Wyatt Ferguson~Thesis Statement

2025-10-08 18:15:11 UTC

Although some think driverless cars would be beneficial to the improvement of our everyday lives, there are many downsides that would not be the best innovation society needs.

no our---this is formal

You need at least three specific reasons.

Kailey Weihrich- Thesis

2025-10-08 21:06:50 UTC

Cell phone usage should not be allowed in schools because of their disruptiveness, the mind-numbing effects of scrolling, and the ability to contact students through the school’s front office.

You need three or four reasons, but the wording here is awkward.

Jaxon Byrd- Thesis Statement

2025-10-09 02:34:48 UTC

Administrations should move beyond bans and implement thoughtful policies that use the potential of student devices to enhance learning, teacher collaboration, and student engagement.

try putting this in your own words

Sherlyn Ramirez~ Thesis Statement

2025-10-09 13:34:06 UTC

While some people are looking forward to a technological futures with more driverless cars, others are nervous about certain risks that may come with them, like unavoidable accidents, technology advancement, or even not being in control.

Driverless cars should not be allowed because???what are three or four reasons

Braydon Hernandez ~ Thesis Statement

2025-10-09 17:01:36 UTC

Driver-less cars are something that many look forward to, because of the many advantages that they have when on the road, but others are concerned about the safety of these cars, and how reliable they are without being controlled by a person, these cars should not be allowed on the roads because of the many doubts and concerns that come with them.

Run-on sentence

Driverless cars should not be allowed because??

Allyson Andrews - Thesis Statement

2025-10-09 17:18:34 UTC

Driverless cars are dangerous because of their technological risks, like the system failing or the possibility of being hacked and the lack of human and ethical responsibility.

wording is awkward

Kylie Watson- Thesis

2025-10-09 21:44:24 UTC

Driverless vehicles and the companies behind this new technology have shown incredible attention to detail and concern for the wellbeing of human drivers and pedestrians; though many have concerns about safety, these vehicles should be allowed to advance and learn around the country.

too verbose

Driverless vehicles should be encouraged because???what are three reasons

Bailey Niemann - Thesis Statement

2025-10-09 22:30:20 UTC

Driverless cars should not replace humans because they can cause serious accidents by malfunctioning, will threaten many jobs that rely on vehicles, and raise concerns about privacy and security.

Elaina Romanos- Thesis Statement

2025-10-09 23:21:56 UTC

Virtual learning should not be allowed because it prevents students from gaining the social skills they need from a public classroom, allows one’s mental health to decline, and poses the potential for technical difficulties.

Benny Song- Thesis Statement

2025-10-10 00:11:45 UTC

Cellular phones should be barred from American K–12 schools because they divert attention away from learning and degrade the mental health of students, as well as limit true in-world socialization.

Tre (Vic) Valero- phone thesis 😃👍

2025-10-10 00:25:13 UTC

so being honest not a single person I personally talk to every day listens to the phone ban, mostly cause a phone is one of the most essential things people use today, and in the words of my dad "I don't care, I need to be able to contact you and you need to be able to contact me"

Rewrite in a formal tone.

Cell phones should be allowed in school because...

Grace Ferguson - Thesis Statement

2025-10-10 00:56:46 UTC

While many believe that remote learning is not as effective or beneficial as in-person learning, remote learning should be readily accessible and actively encouraged for both teachers and students to utilize efficiently, as it prepares educators to assimilate to rapidly developing technology, allows students to enhance their learning alongside technological progress instead of falling behind, and accommodates those students and teachers whose only reliable option for education may be through virtual learning.

Good

Ella Engler - Thesis Statement

2025-10-10 01:16:16 UTC

Remote learning does not need to become the educational standard due to limited student-to-teacher communication, increased opportunities for cheating and AI usage, and recurring technological issues.

leave out "and AI usage"

Rebecca Brown- Thesis

2025-10-10 01:41:45 UTC

Cell phones should be removed from the learning environment, because they cause academic distraction, social deficiencies, and contribute to mental health problems.

Alondra Alvarado- Theisis Statement

2025-10-10 02:46:17 UTC

The use of phones in school should be allowed because it can be used as tools, communication devices, and safety precautions that can help students feel more comfortable and allow them to use their resources to learn.

you have some right ideas, but it is confusing

Cell phones should be allowed in the classroom because...

Carly Song - Thesis Statement

2025-10-10 03:27:10 UTC

Although driverless cars are an exciting new addition to transportation markets, boasting of attractive efficiency boosts and accessibility, extensive acquisition should be discouraged due to concerns impacting liability, worsening urban sprawl, and promoting dependence.

too verbose

say it in your own words

Driverless cars should not be encouraged because??

Emma Markley- Thesis statement

2025-10-10 03:45:27 UTC

Although there are several reasons that banning cell phones can be harmful, getting rid of a tool and an outlet for a break, though it can’t be denied that students are more focused along with socializing more, so overall that band is more efficient for everyone.

What is your position?

Cell phones should be banned in the classroom because...

Carmen Herrera- Thesis Statement

2025-10-10 04:10:14 UTC

Remote learning should be allowed as it's accessible to a vast majority of students, allows flexibility within a schedule, and improves the cost and resource efficiency.

no contractions--spell out it is--this is formal

Dylan Magee - Thesis Statement

2025-10-10 12:42:22 UTC

Schools should not allow students to use their phones in classrooms to an extent that is reasonable for the learning environment as phones could lead to distracted students, students who could cheat more, and can distract the student with the phone.

a little confusing--reword--you have the right ideas

Sammy Zeig-Thesis Statement

2025-10-10 13:37:36 UTC

Cell phones must be allowed in schools because not only could they provide access to more resources found outside the classroom, but they could also be necessary for student-parent contact in case of emergencies.

you need more reasons

Trenton cooper Introduction

2025-10-12 20:39:49 UTC

In recent years, several states, including Texas, have moved to ban cell phone use in schools, citing distractions and concerns about students’ mental health. However, banning phones altogether may not be the most effective solution. Phones serve as valuable tools for learning, allowing students to quickly access educational resources and stay organized. They also provide a sense of safety, enabling students to communicate with parents or emergency services when needed. Additionally, phones can foster digital literacy and responsibility, skills that are essential in today’s technology-driven world. Rather than a complete ban, schools should focus on teaching responsible usage and integrating phones as supportive educational tools.

No--thesis is one sentence.

Take a stand.

Cell phones should not be banned in the classroom because...(three or four reasons).

Noah Sims

2025-10-13 00:45:36 UTC

Cell phones should be allowed inside of school but not necessarily in classrooms, as they can distract students from learning or putting in effort, yet also help them stay organized, take notes more effectively, stay in contact with their guardians, and serve as a medical tool/reminder.

This is wishy-washy. Take a stand.

Cell phones should not be allowed because (three or four reasons.)