https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53 en-us 2023-03-10 06:21:26 UTC 2023-03-17 12:57:59 UTC hello@padlet.com hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2507271429 2023-03-07 17:21:16 UTC https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2507271429 hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2507271591 Take a look at these paragraphs. Using the steps mentioned in the slides earlier, let's try and revise them together!]]> 2023-03-07 17:21:22 UTC https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2507271591 hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519005807 Should we remove any words/phrases/sentences that doesn't make sense?]]> 2023-03-16 07:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519005807 hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519005926 Are there any words/sentences that we can move to improve the flow of ideas?]]> 2023-03-16 07:56:46 UTC https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519005926 hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519005992 Are there any words/ideas that to add to make this paragraph more interesting?]]> 2023-03-16 07:56:50 UTC https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519005992 hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519007165 Sentence 1: Everyone knows that exercise is good for the body and mind.
Sentence 2: While We all want to keep fit and look good enough, but too many of us take up the wrong sport and quickly lose interest.
Sentence 3: So now, fitness experts are advising people to choose an unusual activity that matches their character.
Sentence 4: For example, those who like to be with other people often enjoy golf themselves or squash, or prefer to playing for a basketball , football or hockey team.
Sentence 5: If, Though, you’re happier on your own you may rather go jogging or swimming.
Sentence 6: Do you like competition?
Sentence 7: Then try something like running, or a racket sport such as tennis.
Sentence 8: If, on the other hand, it isn’t important to you, then the activities like dancing can be an enjoyable challenge without being the need to showing you’re better than everyone else.
Sentence 9: Finally, think about whether you find it easy to make yourself do another exercise.
Sentence 10: If, so, sports like weight training at home and cycling are fine.
Sentence 11: If not, book out a skiing holiday [book out a holiday for skiing], Taekwondo lessons, or a tennis court.
Sentence 12: You’re much more likely to do something you’ve already been paid for. ]]> 2023-03-16 07:57:47 UTC https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519007165 hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519016986 I admit it . I hate shopping. In fact, I hate it ever so much I only go shopping for clothes once a year. I wait for the customer sales to start and then go into town to buy all my clothes for the year. I always look for the cheapest bargains rather than the things I like them best. I try  them on and, as long as they fit , I buy them . I don’t bother for keeping the receipt, because I know I won’t go back to the shop if there’s a problem.  I always pay cash , as I don’t want to get a huge credit card bill at the end of the month. And if I would really need some new clothes later during the year, I order them from a mail-order catalogue. It’s much more easier - while you can look through it at home and make your decisions without a shopping assistant hanging around trying to get with you to buy something you don’t want.]]> 2023-03-16 08:07:47 UTC https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519016986 hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519017489 Are there any words/ideas that to add to make this paragraph more interesting?]]> 2023-03-16 08:08:21 UTC https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519017489 hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519018024 Are there any words/sentences that we can move to improve the flow of ideas?]]> 2023-03-16 08:08:56 UTC https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519018024 hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519018234 Should we remove any words/phrases/sentences that doesn't make sense?]]> 2023-03-16 08:09:09 UTC https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2519018234 hakimnuraina00 https://padlet.com/level5elotg/tpqhngdu7cgylg53/wish/2520830194 S1: and mind
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