Essay Outline Writing_N3 by Adibah Mutalib https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0 Develop an essay outline based on a debated topic in class. en-us 2017-07-06 04:50:15 UTC 2017-07-06 07:51:47 UTC hello@padlet.com Instructions of Task adibahmutalib https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178160514 Based on the debate on the topic, Death Penalty to Children, write an essay outline that consists of the main ideas highlighted during the debate. Use the following template to create your essay outline:

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Thesis Statement: __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
 
Topic Sentence 1: ______________________________________________________________________
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Supporting Details: 
a) _____________________________________________
b) _____________________________________________
c) _____________________________________________
 
Topic Sentence 2: ______________________________________________________________________
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Supporting Details: 
a) _____________________________________________
b) _____________________________________________
c) _____________________________________________
                         
Topic Sentence 3: ______________________________________________________________________
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Supporting Details: 
a) _____________________________________________
b) _____________________________________________
c) _____________________________________________




]]> 2017-07-06 04:51:48 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178160514 Death penalty to childre https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165066 Yasintha , Thajash
Thesis statement
- There are several reasons why death penalty should not be impose to children.
Topic sentences 1
- They should be given chances to be educated
Supporting 
a) it to be lesson for them
b) they won't repeat the mistakes again
Topic snetences 2
- They don't have enough experiences
Supporting
a) they are still young
b) they couldn't tell which is wrong and right
Topic sentence 3
- They are not aware of the consequences of their actions.
Supporting 
a) they are not mature enough
b) parents are not educating their children since they were younger]]> 2017-07-06 06:41:24 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165066 Death penalty to children derrichgan https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165084 Thesis statement:The death penalty should not apply to children because they do not think about the ramifications, they made mistakes and not mature enough.
Topic sentence 1:As children, they are too short sighted and most crime involving a juvenile are impulsive.
Supporting details:
1. They lack the ability to keep their emotions in check.
2. Adolescents going through puberty are naturally rebellious.
3. They might not realize that what they are doing is wrong 

Topic sentence 2: Everybody makes mistakes even more so children.
Supporting details:
1.Easily influenced by movies and video games.
2.They don't take their actions seriously.
3.They do not have enough life experience to know how to handle situations correctly.

Topic sentence 3: They can still be corrected. 
1.Since youths are more easily influenced, they can also be corrected easily.
2. The education level is not high enough.
3. Can benefit the society as a whole, instead of wasting human life.

Group members: Derrich Gan and timothy ]]> 2017-07-06 06:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165084 Death Penalty to Children https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165232 Thesis statement 
- There are several reasons to abolish death penalty to children.
Topic sentence 1 : Children are not aware of the consequences of their actions.
Supporting detail :
a) They do not think before they leap.
b) Acting impulsively is same as cutting without measuring at all.
c) People around them, such as family and friends, are likely to be affected.
Topic sentence 2 : Their cognitive capabilities are not fully developed.
Supporting detail : 
a) Lack of abstract thinking (thinking about possibilities)
b) It may influence decision making, in either positive or negative ways.
c) They fell in with bad company.
Topic sentence 3 : They should be given chances to be educated.
Supporting detail : 
a) Sometime good people make bad choices, it does not mean they are bad.
b) They should be forgiven so they can learn from their mistakes.
c) Everyone makes mistakes in life even God does.

Group members : Wendy & Hsu Hui

]]> 2017-07-06 06:43:20 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165232 Death Penalty to Children https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165319 Thesis statement:
Death penalty should not be applied to children since they have the potential to become the "material for changes".

Topic sentence 1:
They are not aware of the consequences of their actions.
Supporting Details:
a) They do not know how to handle their anger and anxiety.
b) They do not know what kind of responsibilities they need to bear.
c) Therefore, impulsive action may be taken by them.

Topic sentence 2:
Their cognitive capabilities are not fully developed.
Supporting Details:
a) Children shows a big deal of the irrational behavior of the humanity during the process of full brain formation.
b) They do not have strong morality.
c)  They are not mature enough in deal with things.

Topic sentence 3:
They should be given chances to be educated.
Supporting Details:
a) They need a chance to turn over a new leaf.
b) Their parents should paying more attention and time to educate their children because we need to strike the iron while it's hot.
c) New generation is the one who running the world in future, so chances need to be given.

Group members: Sze Yin and Bee Khee]]> 2017-07-06 06:44:13 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165319 Death Penalty by Loh & Kamil https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165507 Thesis statement: Death penalty for children shouldn't be existing because of several reasons. 
Topic sentence 1: Children are not aware of the consequences of their actions when they commit crimes. 
a) they are not aware of the legal consequences they need to bear 
b) children are acting based on instinct, but in reality those actions brings harm to others   
c) parents have neglected in their education and upbringing 
Topic sentence 2: The little ones do not have enough life experience to understand their wrongdoings and are clueless to their punishment. 
a) some children have poor control over their emotions and act on the spur of the moment 
b) children might not be matured enough psychologically to apply reasoning behind their actions 
c) committing a crime is a fresh experience and they as children are naturally curious about committing a crime
Topic sentence 3:  Children should have the privilege of a second chance to be educated and reflect on their mistakes.
a) some of their crimes might be committed by mistake, like self defense
b) by having a second chance, they will learn to restrict themselves and be a law abiding citizen in the future 
c) the government can show assist in this by focusing more on reeducating the juveniles ]]> 2017-07-06 06:47:50 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165507 Death Penalty To Children https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165749 Thesis statement: They are several reason why dead penalty should not be applied to children 
1) Topic sentence: Children are not aware of the consequences of their actions
 Supporting detail
i) children are not mature enough since they are still growing and learning
ii) most of them are not psychologically stable and influenced by others easily
iii) without proper education given, children would not know what is right and wrong
2) Topic sentences: children don't have enough experience 
i) because they haven't know well about what to do in real life 
ii) they do what comes in mind without a second thought 
iii) mislead by other action movie lead them have the mind of killing are legal
3) Topic sentences: people are not born bad, they are made bad 
i) there was born in a bad situation and lead them have a bad mind set
ii) often neglected by often as result mental disorder are manifests
iii) give them a second opportunity, they will be able to learn form their mistakes  
Brian & Chin Tian

]]> 2017-07-06 06:52:22 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165749 Death Penalty to Children https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165884 Thesis statement:
Death penalty is not suitable for children since they are still a child. They maybe not enough life experiences and unaware their actions. It should be reserved to the rarest of crime cases. --- There should be only ONE sentence for a thesis statement. "Death penalty is not suitable for children due to several reasons."

Topic sentence 1: They are not aware of the consequences of their actions.
Supporting details: 
a. They are not mature enough
b. They might influence by the violences in movie and try it in reality
c. They are not fully educated by families

Topic sentence 2: They should be given chances to be educated.
Supporting details:
a. This will be the lesson for them 
b. They will not repeat their mistakes anymore
c. They still can be corrected from their wrongdoing

Topic sentence 3: They do not 
enough experiences
Supporting details:
a. They do not know what going to happen in their life is.
b. They are not aware about their consequence to bear with it.
c. They are not capable in dealing this kind of situations.

Prepared by Jiunn Yan and Hup Hsien]]> 2017-07-06 06:55:09 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178165884 Death penalty to children https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178166027 Hwang Hian Khim , Isaac Tan Boon Hin
Thesis Statement: Although killing is wrong, death penalty should be avoided on children for several reasons.
Topic Sentence 1: Children should be given a chance to be educated.
Support:a) Some children are grown up on violent family therefore right education are not given to them.
b) They don't know what is right and what is wrong on their actions.
c) They might be taught that killing people is for justice.
Topic Sentence 2: Children are not aware of the consequences of their actions.
Support: a) Children might think like killing people is not a big deal and just like regular kids fighting.
b) They are not mature enough to think that killing people is a sin.
c) They might be polluted by crime related movies and follow the action by thinking it is for absolute justice.
Topic Sentence 3: Children might killed people accidentally against their will.
Support: a) They might be just regular kids fighting and don't mean to kill their friends.
b) Kids are easily influenced, therefore some adults might mind control them to kill someone they didn't mean to do so.
c) There might be a huge crowd of kids playing around and accidents might happened as they might are not aware of the dangerous of stuff they play.
Conclusion: Killing would definitely bringing a chain where "an eye for an eye" and it goes on and on, therefore it is absolutely the best to reconciliation outside the court peacefully. Children should be given a second chance with the right education and a good grown up environment.]]> 2017-07-06 06:57:59 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178166027 Death Penalty to Children https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/tos2h3zdp1m0/wish/178167757 Thesis statement: The reasons death penalty should not happen to children. They should be given chance to educate, don’t have enough experience and not aware of consequences their actions.

Topic sentence 1: The children should be given chance to educate instead of death penalty.

Support Details:

a)       They are too young.
b)      They still have time to learn from their mistake.
c)       Children are not born with hate.

Topic sentence 2: They are inexperienced. 

Support Details:

a)       They are out of touch with the society.
b)      They are not fully developed.
c)       They are still in the beginning of life cycle.

Topic sentence 3: They are not aware of consequences their actions.

Support Details:

a)      They don’t know what seriousness will happen after their actions.
b)      They are still naïve.
c)      They are easily influenced by the violence happened on social media.

Prepare By: Teng Kai Yong, Lim Sheng Xian, Ng Jia Wei.

 

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