Feedback speech by Wellenbrock Ephrem https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk en-us 2020-11-02 09:04:51 UTC 2020-11-06 08:10:42 UTC hello@padlet.com clear structure (introduction, main oart, conclusion) ephrem_wellenbrock https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/881644360 2020-11-02 09:06:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/881644360 Understandable pronunciation https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/891293742 2020-11-04 18:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/891293742 Eye-Catching intoduction https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/893162702 2020-11-05 08:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/893162702 The usage of some stylistic devices so that they have a clear impact on target grioup https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/893164086 2020-11-05 08:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/893164086 Ability to engage audience https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/893164872 2020-11-05 08:16:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/893164872 Use connectives to link the arguments and ideas https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/893192224 2020-11-05 08:27:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/893192224 Easy to follow/understand https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/895013449 2020-11-05 17:29:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/895013449 Strong conclusion (appeal, order...) https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/895320097 For example try to advice/ order audience to reduce their waste if they want to lead a sustainable life]]> 2020-11-05 18:36:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/895320097 Elaborating ideas with good arguments and examples https://padlet.com/ephrem_wellenbrock/to6k4hyyguuhtesk/wish/895345495 -- don't repeat the information word for word
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