Class 7 : Text A by Institut_Le_Rosey https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh Made with an open mind en-us 2020-05-02 15:13:26 UTC 2023-02-23 19:41:14 UTC hello@padlet.com 1) What techniques does the author use? Institut_Le_Rosey https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/545683426 2) What do you like/dislike about this text?
3) Highlight the sentences that SHOW her fear. Nathalie allocate a sentence for each person in the group. Have a go at rewriting the sentence in a different way.]]> 2020-05-02 15:14:13 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/545683426 hellllllllllo https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551540822 2020-05-05 09:27:15 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551540822 Hi https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551541894 Adam]]> 2020-05-05 09:27:43 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551541894 hi https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551543905 2020-05-05 09:28:38 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551543905 So all of you should now be working on 1) What techniques has he used? Institut_Le_Rosey https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551545083 2020-05-05 09:29:09 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551545083 Do we call https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551545089 Sophia  _ NO U SHOULD BE WORKING THROUGH THE PADLET - LOTS OF IDEAS JOTTING DOWN AND WHEN NATHALITE THINKS YOU ARE READY TO DO Q3 THEN YOU CALL but there is not much here yet!]]> 2020-05-05 09:29:09 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551545089 oscar lets call on teams https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551545199 2020-05-05 09:29:12 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551545199 nathaliesakurai https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551545404 The author uses similes, rhetorical questions, shot sentences, personification, show not tell..]]> 2020-05-05 09:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551545404 You shouldn't need to call. Get all your ideas down on here first - like brainstorming Institut_Le_Rosey https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551546030 2020-05-05 09:29:33 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551546030 short sentences https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551551497 give exmaples please 

]]> 2020-05-05 09:31:39 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551551497 Adam question 1) https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551551800 The author uses show not tell, similes, rhetorical questions, repetition and using senses. - good but you need to give examples of each method ]]> 2020-05-05 09:31:47 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551551800 BE SPECIFIC - SHOW EXAMPLES FROM TEXT OF THE METHODS HE USES EG SIMILE -... Institut_Le_Rosey https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551553313 PERSONIFICATION...]]> 2020-05-05 09:32:24 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551553313 Adam https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551556227 And personification]]> 2020-05-05 09:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551556227 Adam https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551557205 I like how the final verse is only repetition and how they show dont tell And the use of similes.]]> 2020-05-05 09:34:02 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551557205 Suddenly, dreadful silence filled the room https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551557677 Good! ]]> 2020-05-05 09:34:15 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551557677 aaria https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551562081 Could it be?]]> 2020-05-05 09:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551562081 you should be looking at what you like or dislike about the text now Institut_Le_Rosey https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551564498 2020-05-05 09:37:13 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551564498 wang yiyi https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551564724 2020-05-05 09:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551564724 2) i like it because it has lots of good words and you can feel what she feels https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551566255 Give examples of words that show that 

]]> 2020-05-05 09:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551566255 Adam https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551570058 I dislike the structure of the poem and how they weren’t using many adjectives.

It is not a poem, just a piece of description from a story but yes more adjectives would make it more visual 

Start allocating each other a sentence to change

]]> 2020-05-05 09:39:35 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551570058 2) i don't really like it because i don't really understand what is going on, it seems abit vague https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551572618 2020-05-05 09:40:38 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551572618 OK so Nathalie, when you are ready you can allocate each person with a sentence to start modifying - If you want to ring them, you can Institut_Le_Rosey https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551572726 2020-05-05 09:40:42 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551572726 tap tap tap https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551584145 2020-05-05 09:45:27 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551584145 YOu have 10 mins to (as a group rewrite the piece of text) and SOMEONE needs to type it up here (I will then copy it across to general feed later ) Institut_Le_Rosey https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551586347 2020-05-05 09:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551586347 Sophia https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551588134 her plum red heart was thumping rapidly in her ears and her sweaty palms burned.

Good bur you can't have itched ideally another word or phrase  much better sophe 

]]> 2020-05-05 09:47:06 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551588134 carefully, Pruna creeped along the shadowy estate towards the knocking sound https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551589043 2020-05-05 09:47:31 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551589043 Adam sentence https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551599777 Her frale hand vigorously shook like a skeletal branch as she stopped and placed it on the rotting bookshelf. FRAIL make the simile more precise - it could be better What kind of tree? On a Windy WInter^s day for example ]]> 2020-05-05 09:51:50 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551599777 nathaliesakurai https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551602457 Subsequently, perking her head and tautening, noise shot her ears. What is this? This doesn't make sense yet ]]> 2020-05-05 09:52:59 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551602457 Nathalie nathaliesakurai https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551605426 Vigilatly, she sneaked across the pitch-black arrival to the valving noise.]]> 2020-05-05 09:54:08 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551605426 YOu have 5 mins - ring if necessary but your team need to start putting your ideas together Institut_Le_Rosey https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551608232 YOU MUST START PUTTING YOUR POSTS TOGTEHR - CALL EACH OTHER AND GET SOMEONE TO TYPE ONTO HERE (THE QUICKETST TPYER) ]]> 2020-05-05 09:55:04 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551608232 oscar https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551627377 The perishing temperature had suddenly dropped; to a killing degrees.]]> 2020-05-05 10:02:51 UTC https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551627377 Text A rewritten https://padlet.com/Institut_Le_Rosey/tnz9yhsjkwmseroh/wish/551638936 Her plum red heart was thumping rapidly in her ears and her sweaty palms burned. The perishing temperature had suddenly dropped to  the killing zone.
Vigilantly, she sneaked across the pitch-black street to the throbbing noise.
What was it?

Her frail hand vigorously shook like a skeletal oak branch in a blizzard as she stopped and placed it on the rotting bookshelf.

Silence descended.

Subsequently, bending her head and peering round the corner , a shrill noise surrounded her freezing ears.

Tap, tap, tap...



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