https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b compare en-us 2018-12-31 07:49:18 UTC 2026-01-18 20:17:54 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389186414 I think sandy did a very nice job in her first english writing]]> 2019-09-25 00:53:14 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389186414 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389186954 Your story is very inteseting, you've write about your best friend. I think it was very funny ( • ̀ω•́ )]]> 2019-09-25 00:55:38 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389186954 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389186988 I think he profile is ok, in his tense he has improve a lot, but his profile  is too little,he need to improve on his profile to write more word]]> 2019-09-25 00:55:46 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389186988 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187021 I think he profile is ok but he sometimes dont have add s for present tense (he or she ), so he need to improve his grammar ]]> 2019-09-25 00:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187021 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187024 Kelly's writing is very interesting. She talks about her cousin, but there are a little bit spelling and tense mistakes. She used lots of vocabulary correctly. ]]> 2019-09-25 00:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187024 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187038 Miffy's wiring didnt use much vocab and the sentences can be more interesting and so can attract more people to read. Miffyn can write mor3 detials about the person. It is good that she wrote who influenced her sister but miffy can write about the reasons.]]> 2019-09-25 00:55:59 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187038 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187195 Paco forgot to write the pre writing stage and he didn't write the self checklist.But he has write it properly.And he has some wrong tenses.]]> 2019-09-25 00:56:46 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187195 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187254 I think they all write very good and the questions is very useful to know what is the writing about.]]> 2019-09-25 00:56:58 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187254 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187274 Kelli wrote her friend Lidia in her profile. And she said that her friend wishes to become a swimmer. I think Kelli's writing is good because she used vocabs we learnt and used the grammar correctly. And also tell us clearly about her friend is hard working for her dream.]]> 2019-09-25 00:57:04 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187274 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187310 Hayden, you should add more information of the people you write and your word is not enough, add more .]]> 2019-09-25 00:57:10 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187310 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187448 Tenses and write the wrong person]]> 2019-09-25 00:57:44 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187448 https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187759 According to Natalie's profile, she wrote about her cousin and how he reached to his dream, I think this is a good profile. From this profile, I knew more about her cousin and I found out his cousin is really hard working to achieve his dream. Natalie used many vocabs that we have learnt and her grammar are all correct.ヾ(*ΦωΦ)ツ]]> 2019-09-25 00:59:01 UTC https://padlet.com/wlwong1718/s1b/wish/389187759