https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2 Give your peers feedback using Paper 1 rubric descriptors. en-us 2021-03-15 10:10:04 UTC 2025-10-23 13:51:11 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321869198 Your analysis is great but it's very wordy. Try to make some parts more succinct. 25 on criterion A.]]> 2021-03-17 17:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321869198 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321876115 Lots of good analysis, thorough. full marks in all four areas]]> 2021-03-17 17:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321876115 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321889429 2021-03-17 17:27:08 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321889429 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321908245 This was a great analysis of the poem. It was thorough and I feel like you guys had a good focus on the themes and striking features.]]> 2021-03-17 17:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321908245 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321916003 Very thorough and clear to understand.]]> 2021-03-17 17:31:43 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321916003 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321918335 This well written and described and it was presented clearly.]]> 2021-03-17 17:32:12 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321918335 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321919209 I agree with some of the other comments. There could have been more quotations which you all could have referenced so that we could see the features you identified in action

]]> 2021-03-17 17:32:23 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321919209 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321931102 Bottom Text]]> 2021-03-17 17:34:35 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321931102 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321937441 Very effective presentation of ideas]]> 2021-03-17 17:35:41 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321937441 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321958887 2021-03-17 17:39:33 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321958887 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321962194 2021-03-17 17:40:08 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321962194 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321972528 2021-03-17 17:42:02 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321972528 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321993009 This analysis was concise well organized and very informative. You did a great job analyzing the main idea and theme.]]> 2021-03-17 17:45:59 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1321993009 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322005230 While analysis was thorough and in-depth, the presentation could have been more fluid. I would suggest relying less on the presentation and more eon your own thoughts.]]> 2021-03-17 17:48:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322005230 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322009225 I like the poem that you chose! the analysis was very insightful and the textual connections that you made helped further the literary aspects that you chose to discuss]]> 2021-03-17 17:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322009225 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322026650 very clearly understand the poem and able to analyze/explain meanings, techniques, etc. good presentational skills abcd 25]]> 2021-03-17 17:51:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322026650 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322028095 The poem is very well analyzed and I like the choice of poem as well as the theme you identified. 25 for criterion C.]]> 2021-03-17 17:52:16 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322028095 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322029863 I like the poem that you chose! the analysis was very insightful and the examples that you used to further these connections and global issues were clear and reflected in the poem]]> 2021-03-17 17:52:34 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322029863 angela_chan4737 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322031382 The analysis was extremely insightful and the themes and connections were very clear to and coherent to the ideas that the author was trying to convey. Also adding the real world example really helped!

]]> 2021-03-17 17:52:51 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322031382 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322043057 Clear connection between features and meaning. Good on CritB]]> 2021-03-17 17:54:52 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322043057 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322046690 2021-03-17 17:55:35 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322046690 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322064084 It was very organized and well thought out.]]> 2021-03-17 17:59:01 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322064084 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322067369 The presentation is well thought out.]]> 2021-03-17 17:59:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1322067369 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326682442 Awww yes my favorite peom]]> 2021-03-18 17:15:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326682442 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326712917 very insightful analysis going line by line and including details about the poem. 25 on criterion C.]]> 2021-03-18 17:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326712917 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326737862 Your observation of the sound involved in the poetry is insightful and definitely not something which would stand out to most people]]> 2021-03-18 17:26:03 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326737862 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326761886 This was an awesome presentation! there were good connections and observations throughout, and your analysis made sense
25]]> 2021-03-18 17:30:34 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326761886 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326765180 Intertextuality was very interesting and helped me understand Murakami and Alvarez better]]> 2021-03-18 17:31:14 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326765180 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326773767 Great poem and interpretation and very organized presentation with great detail.]]> 2021-03-18 17:32:55 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326773767 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326780341 Very interesting analysis and nice incorporation of reading the poem into the presentation. It helps with the audience's understanding. 25 on criterion C.]]> 2021-03-18 17:34:09 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326780341 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326795688 You have solid and thoroughly fleshed out literary features. 🍞/🍞]]> 2021-03-18 17:36:57 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326795688 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326805291 Eye opening connections to other myths like father christmas and the north wind. I really liked the relationship between sand, time, and dreams.]]> 2021-03-18 17:38:42 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326805291 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326830492 Interesting Poem and great interpretation.]]> 2021-03-18 17:43:16 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326830492 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326852798 insightful analysis and interesting hook to engage the audience. 25 on criteria C and D.]]> 2021-03-18 17:47:05 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326852798 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326859251 really good presentation as usual, 25 on C and D definitely, also well done on A and B]]> 2021-03-18 17:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326859251 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326888730 Like always, you guys did a great job of having an engaging presentation. I would focus on the elements of the poem more, and spend less time on the connections.
 ]]> 2021-03-18 17:54:02 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326888730 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326890249 Good organized and very detailed. You chose a very interesting poem that contains a lot of interpretation. ]]> 2021-03-18 17:54:21 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326890249 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326896750 Nice job of creating an engaging presentation. I thought your analysis was great. Could have spent more time on the elements of the poem rather than its connections and themes.

]]> 2021-03-18 17:55:37 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326896750 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326911543 Dead captain described as dead]]> 2021-03-18 17:58:26 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326911543 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326920889 Interesting connection to american history. 25 on criterion B.]]> 2021-03-18 18:00:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326920889 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326921759 Deep analysis of the father figure symbolism]]> 2021-03-18 18:00:30 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326921759 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326936310 I like the consideration of the poet's choices and his decision to take creative liberties, You'd score high on criterion B]]> 2021-03-18 18:03:25 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1326936310 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330780979 2021-03-19 17:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330780979 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330791574 very thorough analysis of theme and implications were well explained. You guys mad good connections as well.]]> 2021-03-19 17:25:44 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330791574 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330811007 interesting analysis and good inclusion of poem quotes throughout the striking features section. 25 on criterion B.]]> 2021-03-19 17:29:51 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330811007 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330814230 Solid bread]]> 2021-03-19 17:30:34 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330814230 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330815119 You did an awesome job discussing the meaning and interpretation of the poem with reference to the context. The presentation was well done.]]> 2021-03-19 17:30:46 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330815119 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330833019 2021-03-19 17:34:42 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330833019 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330875338 Great analysis of striking features and how they play into the poem's interpretation. 25 on criterion C.]]> 2021-03-19 17:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330875338 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330886316 2021-03-19 17:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330886316 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330888889 2021-03-19 17:46:55 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330888889 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330891928 is this the krusty krab]]> 2021-03-19 17:47:38 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/tkg5ybvvqsj007j2/wish/1330891928