Chapter 7 Portfolio by Kyara CordovaMendoza

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s1706288 — 2024-02-23 20:22:32 UTC

Resource 2

s1706288 — 2024-02-23 20:24:39 UTC

s1706288 — 2024-02-23 20:27:22 UTC

Based on my essay I chose a film/movie, this film I seen two times already in Netflix. The movie "Dune" is based of a young boy with gifted talents, who would later on have the power to become king. I chose this film because it's interesting as well on the animation lastly, the ending leaves it to be continue. Their is going to be more movies based on five novels.

s1706288 — 2024-02-23 20:38:58 UTC

In my opinion I would say my thesis is clearly stated, answer support and provide evidence. Especially on the film, and what's it's going to be about. Although for other peers opinion might not be clear, others see Sci-fi different.

s1706288 — 2024-02-23 20:59:33 UTC

The movie Dune was personal appealing to me because it influences how you should rely on your own judgement, and as well own mistakes. Although, their is people who have a lot of power but they go out their own power to hurt people. The aspects of dune try to show that when you hold power you should always be careful on how you use it; because in a second you could loose it.

s1706288 — 2024-02-23 21:24:04 UTC

My essay wasn't easy when it came to composing. I would say one of the easiest things could be the introduction and on explaining my overview on the film. The hard part would be developing the evidence on the film as well adding more information about the film. Although I explain the difficulties is adding the information into a conclusion.

s1706288 — 2024-02-23 21:26:45 UTC

My Movie is Dune (based of a book).

Genre: Sci-Fi

Made in 2021 filmed and produce by Warner Bros and Denis Vellenueva.

s1706288 — 2024-02-23 21:32:36 UTC

If I could start over again I would look at the details and sequence on my essay. By this I mean how impactful and influential the film was, not only me but many people. In addition, I would change and try to get better on using shorter sentences with active verbs, lastly, to never forget personal style.

s1706288 — 2024-02-24 05:50:53 UTC

Some ways I used to revise on my essays, like I always do to all. First check out my draft, get another peer to put their perspective/opinion on it, check the focus of the paper, and good time management on my writing.

s1706288 — 2024-02-24 05:53:55 UTC

In conclusion, I got my ways on revising by my instructors/ ENGL teachers. They have always told me to get someone else opinion since everyone has a different state of mind. When you put your time and effort into writing is an essential to success.

s1706288 — 2024-02-28 14:38:46 UTC