https://padlet.com/24bdeprospero/tjtivea5fdhf Thank you for leaving me feedback en-us 2018-12-05 17:54:32 UTC 2018-12-11 14:51:07 UTC hello@padlet.com 24khunter https://padlet.com/24bdeprospero/tjtivea5fdhf/wish/312265916 I like how you added some similes in your story to  make it more interesting. I think you could of made your story longer. You also have to make sure your dialogue tags start with a capital letter. ]]> 2018-12-07 15:22:57 UTC https://padlet.com/24bdeprospero/tjtivea5fdhf/wish/312265916 24ascuorzo https://padlet.com/24bdeprospero/tjtivea5fdhf/wish/312325033 Hey Brady! One star that I can give you is the way that you showed me everything that north did, like sniffing the flowers and more. Another star is that I like the way that it ended. But then that leads me to my wish. I really wish that you didn't end your story with "they lived happily ever after." But other then that I really enjoyed your piece!]]> 2018-12-07 17:17:43 UTC https://padlet.com/24bdeprospero/tjtivea5fdhf/wish/312325033 24ddiaz https://padlet.com/24bdeprospero/tjtivea5fdhf/wish/312340805 You have amazing dialogue and you know how to maintain a proper amount of dialogue like the 30% - 70% SO I would like to compliment you on that. GOOD JOB FROM YOUR BOI DIAZ

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