This story starts when I was a child and I was very innocent. At my school there was a very big toboggan and I was scared, but my friends weren’t, they laughed at me and I was so sad. I was trying to climb the stairs but I couldn’t. I told my mom this and she bought me some pills (sweets) to “be brave”. Finally I was able to slide down the toboggan.

This happened when I was three. One day I drank Nenuco perfume by accident and I got drunk. I began singing and dancing from room to room. The song was the song that the dwarves sang in Snow White. 

 

When I was a child I used to not eat a lot and I abused sweets and candies. My mom didn’t like it. Then, she invented that a bird “Pirulo” stole my candies if I didn’t eat healthy food. I was scared and I ate all my food.

Corrections:
Pronunciation in words like child, story, laughed, dwarfs...
This story starts when I was a child and I was very naive. 
When I was a child I did not use to eat a lot
that a bird “Pirulo” would steal my candies if I didn’t eat healthy food

My story is true

FUNNY STORY

A fun day for me was when I went to look for my dog at the kennel, I had a great time because every time I closed the door he would cry and when he entered he was happy, the funny thing is when he met my cat. Because my dog is very scared and when my dog saw my cat he thought it was a dog and he started to smell my  and lick it and I and my family couldn't stop laughing and the funniest thing about this story is that my dog was He laid down next to my cat and i started to lick us. This is my story i hope you liked it

Corrections:

Esto no lo has escrito tú solo (Translator? Alguien que sabe inglés?). Se nota porque titubeas cuando lo lees y no entiendes qué pone. Esto no es lo que pedí que hicieses. 
Te pedí que hicieras una historia, utilizaras tu inglés y usaras Past Simple, Past Continuous, Used to y el vocabulario que supieses. No lo has hecho. Te lo resumo con una historia graciosa: Os he ido enseñando a poner ingredientes para hacer una masa (harina, sal, agua y levadura), la hemos amasado y dejado reposar, os he dado unos poquitos ingredientes para poner sobre la masa, os he enseñado a encender y vigilar el horno... Y tú, en vez de hacer una pizza, que era lo que estábamos intentado llegar a hacer, has llamado al Telepizza y me has dado la que te han traído en vez de la que tenías que haber hecho.  Suspenso.

A few years ago I went to New York with my family. One day we went to the Statue of Liberty by ferry. When we were in the Statue of Liberty and while my dad was taking a photo I recognized a friend of my daddy. I told him and we talked with them. We were surprised to see each other there. We hadn’t had any problems because we used to use the Metro. When we went to the airport we went by taxi but by the way it pricked a wheel. Just when it was pricked, another car came to help us, but he forced us to pay. We were almost late! But we didn’t miss the flight

This year I went to Vall de Núria with my dad and sister. We stayed there two days and one night. It was too cold! While I was freezing, my dad went to buy me long trousers because I thought it would be warmther. It was in the mountains and there was also a lake which we crossed by a bridge.

Corrections:
Watch out for pronunciation like in "bridge", "thought"
we went by taxi but on its way, it had a flat tire. Just when it had a flat tire...

One day I went with my class to portaventura.The day before, my class and l were very nervous and excited.When the day starts we got on the bus to go Portaventura.When we arrived, I went with my friends to the mine train,tutuki splash,tree trunks... and we left the best attraction(dragon can) for last.When arrived the moment to go to school we went on dragon can.But the dragon can closed so we went back to the school very sad because we can’t ride the best attraction.

Corrections:
When the day started we got on the bus to go to Portaventura
When the moment to go back to school  arrived
Dragon Khan
because we couldn't ride the best

(It’s not real)

Hello, I’m Maria and today I’m going to explain my “funny” story.

This happened a few years ago, when I was 5, I used to play with my friends in the park near my house. That day I was playing with my friends the game: tag.  It was my turn to tag people.  I spent some minutes finding people but no one was there and I didn’t find anyone.

But, When I found a person  I fell because I tripped on a rock.  All my friends came and they started to laugh, I started too.  Finally I lifted up and we continued playing.

Bye bye

Corrections:
Finally, 
I stood up and we kept up playing

A few months ago, when I was at Maria Vico’s house, we decided to try a tiktok filter that detects “ghosts”. First, we tried it in the kitchen. Everything was okay until the filter detected a moviment and a figure. Was there a ghost? I don’t know but we started to run while laughing. Now, everytime we go to the kitchen, we greet him/her like he/she’s our friend. 

When I was 5 or 6 years old, we used to celebrate Christmas with my mother’s friend and her family. I was in my room playing with my brother and the friend’s children. In a moment my mother’s friend entered the room and told me she had a funny and interesting video of the school's caga tio (we had a caga tio in our school to feed him). I was very excited but when she showed me the video and I saw the caga tio tongue moving to eat  I started to run very scared. All night I was awake thinking about how caga tio is alive. Now, when I think about that day I smile because, now, for me it is so funny. 

Corrections:
 I saw the caga tio's tongue moving to eat
I started to run very scaredly
movement
Now, every time we go to the kitchen

In August of 2017, I went to Granada. in the cave( house in the ehard)  I walked in the garden. I saw a Big dog and it was raining for me . I ran to the cave.But the dog is the  fastest. I Was very scared but the dog was good and played with me. Two days later one man searched for the dog. I describe the dog and the man's question where I saw. I spoke with the men and finally found the dog.

Two summers later  in the cave I saw the 
men and the dog walking on the hill.

The name of the dog  is Thor. It is a German shepherd ,and it  is 5 years old .

Last summer I don’t saw the dog but my father went saw the house Where my grandmother  was born, is a Cave in the hill,is a cave yellow an have two windows, in the garden have a five trees. The cave was 103 years old.And my family has lived in this house for 56 years.

Corrections:
Past Simple and Continuous are not used very accurately.
The audio is missing.
In August, 2017
but the dog was  faster 
and the man asked me where did I see it
The name of the dog was Thor. It was a German shepherd and it was 5 years old.
Last summer I did not see the dog
my father went to see 
It is a yellow cave and has two windows

After getting under the roof they counted us to see if we were all there,After seeing we were all there they made us run to the second building as we were running a kid i knew i'll call him matt started giving us candy without the teachers knowing “Laughs”When we finally got in the building that made us do the Earthquake pose what they did not know is that we were still eating candy we stayed like that until it was time to go home.My friends and i laughed the whole way home.

Corrections:
The audio is missing.
 they made us do with tornados, fires...
and so on... (not ect.)
as we were running a kid I knew (I'll call him Matt...) 

Four years ago when I was a kit I was at home with my mum and my brother and we decided to go to the park under my house and I took the scooter and a spinning top and my brother took his scooter with three thick wheels. We were playing quietly when my brother stepped on my foot with his scooter and it hurt a lot. Then I was playing with my spinning top when I threw it up and the spinning top followed to the head of my brother and hit him. Luckily my brother doesn’t hurt a lot. 

 And this is my story.

My name is Lucia and I am explaining my stories about the past.
All the stories are true.

When I was a little kid, more or less seven years, I used to cry. 
But, sometimes I used to ride a bike with my family. 

Because, it felt good. 

One day, I fell with the bike in the street and it caused pain.  

Four years ago, while I was playing with my friends like every day.

I was running, turned around, and ate the bin. 

So, I felt the banana peel that was next to it. 

One day, maybe one week ago, when I was out of school with my best friend, I confused a stone shadow with a pen. 

Five seconds later, I only just realized that it was a pen and not a stone shadow. 

When the pandemia started and we began to use the mask, I started realizing new hobbies. 

One of them is a target shooting game.

When I began, I liked it, but some time after I started to lose the motivation. Nowadays, I'm not keen on that anymore.

 Corrections:
Watch out for pronunciation like in "ate", 
more or less seven -or- more or less seven years old
My confused eyes
I started to lose motivation.

One day, when I was in my restaurant, my Pogona was in the garden, but he is depressive and he are alone and when my mother and my arrive to my house, the Pogona isn’t in the garden, my mother has hurry and she go tho the car and find the Pogona in the border of the fence, and my mother take the Pogona and go into the terrary. 

Around 30 minutes later knock to my house and I open the door and I look over the fence and in the road are the police, and I say:

-What’s happening?

And the police say:

-You call the police?

-No, I say

-Ok, say there.

And then I call to my mother to explain the situation, and later my father calls me.

-Lucas, the people of the near school  called the police because they saw the Pogona and they were scared and called to save the Pogona and the police went to my house to take and carry to my father, I think.

Corrections:
The audio is missing.
Pogona --> bearded dragon

and he are alone and when my mother and my arrive to my house --> This does not make sense at all. 
my mother has hurry and she go tho the car and find the Pogona in the border of the fence, and my mother take the Pogona and go into the terrary. --> Past Simple, Continuous and vocabulary are not properly used in here.

 

 

 

 

 

When I went to Portaventura last year, me and my friends are having a fun day when my friend up an attraction with phone and he lost it, we are searching it a lot of time (I eat a crep when all are searching it) After an hour my friend go back to the attraction and the personal give to he because the phone drop under the tracks of the attraction and the personal given to he. After this we needed to go because the park was closing and I went back to my house and explained it all to my family.

Corrections:
Past Simple and Past Continuous are missing.
Watch out for Pronunciation...
When I went to Portaventura last year, my friends and I were having a fun day when my friend rode an attraction with his mobile phone and he lost it, 
we were searching for it for a long time (I ate a crepe when all of them were searching for it)

After calling many numbers and not saying anything when they picked up the phone, we heard my father's voice and realized that we had just dialed his number, we got very scared and luckily we were not caught, but we did not do that joke again never more.

Corrections:
Watch out for pronunciation like in "daughter", "cruise" or "picked"
but we did not do that prank ever again -or- nevermore.
When I was pretty much 8 years old I went on a cruise

after a time trying to throw the bait, i reach to throw very away, these day, i was catch 2 fishes, the first was tiny, and my father say to me “throw it to the water, we can’t eat them, in the second attempt i did catch a very big fish, these was a “llisera” the fish was 50 centimeters long, 2 hours after, my father and me return to home with the fish, at night we, my father, my mother and me, eat the fish, it was delicious.

Corrections:
Watch out for pronunciation!!!!
"I" always in capital letters.
Past Simple and Continuous are not used properly:
- went fishing
- took the rods
- taught me to fish
- I was playing

at this moment I said.
My father and I returned

We went to take photos in the well  and we found five sheep. 

When my friend Mariona saw the sheep she got scared and screamed. The sheep were also scared.

A sheep started running. My friends and I also started running. A sheep was following us. When we left, the sheep say beeeeeeeeeeee.

Then the sheep returned to the well and we left.

At night we went to have a crepe for dinner and laughed at what happened to us in the afternoon. :)

Corrections:
The audio is missing.
the sheep said baaaaa <----

For the night my mother prepare a cake of chocolate, there was big, very big, there was very good. S'ha de repetir tot.

Corrections:
The audio is missing.
When I was a little boy I played with cards and toys.
One day when I was playing with a toy, I pointless started crying, 
it happened to me thinking that the next day --> that sentence makes no sense at all.

Beat now I think about it and it's very funny HAHAHAHA

Corrections:
The audio is missing.
Esto no lo has escrito tú sola (Translator? Alguien que sabe inglés?). Esto no es lo que pedí que hicieses. 
Te pedí que hicieras una historia, utilizaras tu inglés y usaras Past Simple, Past Continuous, Used to y el vocabulario que supieses. No lo has hecho. Te lo resumo con una historia graciosa: Os he ido enseñando a poner ingredientes para hacer una masa (harina, sal, agua y levadura), la hemos amasado y dejado reposar, os he dado unos poquitos ingredientes para poner sobre la masa, os he enseñado a encender y vigilar el horno... Y tú, en vez de hacer una pizza, que era lo que estábamos intentado llegar a hacer, has llamado al Telepizza y me has dado la que te han traído en vez de la que tenías que haber hecho. Suspenso.

Four years ago when I was a kid I was at home with my mum and my brother and we decided to go to the park under my house and I took the scooter and a spinning top and my brother took his scooter with three thick wheels. We were playing quietly when my brother stepped on my foot with his scooter and it hurt a lot. Then I was playing with my spinning top when I threw it up and the spinning top followed to the head of my brother and hit him. And when it fell on him I didn't stop laughing.

Luckily my brother doesn’t hurt a lot. 

 And this is my story.

My mother had a TV, one day while she was watching TV and she was drinking coffee, I got close to the sofa and I stumbled with a toy and I fell. My mother saw me and she got up running to see if I was okay but when she got up her coffee spilled on me. I began to cry, my father came and saw that my mother was trying to comfort me with a candy. He started to laugh at my face.jajaja

Corrections:
Watch out for pronunciation!!!
Esto no lo has escrito tú sola (Translator? Alguien que sabe inglés?). Se nota porque titubeas cuando lo lees y no entiendes qué pone. Esto no es lo que pedí que hicieses. 
Te pedí que hicieras una historia, utilizaras tu inglés y usaras Past Simple, Past Continuous, Used to y el vocabulario que supieses. No lo has hecho. Te lo resumo con una historia graciosa: Os he ido enseñando a poner ingredientes para hacer una masa (harina, sal, agua y levadura), la hemos amasado y dejado reposar, os he dado unos poquitos ingredientes para poner sobre la masa, os he enseñado a encender y vigilar el horno... Y tú, en vez de hacer una pizza, que era lo que estábamos intentado llegar a hacer, has llamado al Telepizza y me has dado la que te han traído en vez de la que tenías que haber hecho. Suspenso.